True Writers Article: Evolution Story (Sneak Peek)

posted by flabaloobalah

(Gryffindork99 and I shall start posting chapters of a sci-fi novel here in hopes to keep this club alive. Gonna try not to give too much away. Hope bạn like it, so please comment.)

The scientist was hunched over his lab table, his six fingers on each hand grabbing beakers and flyaway papers. He was very focused until another man walked in. This man was noticeably younger, his face free of blemishes, glasses planted squarely on the bridge of his large nose.
"What do bạn want, Flemming?" The scientist asked quite rudely from his spot.
"Sir, there's a, an um....people are talking. bạn might not like it." Flemming, as he was apparently known, đã đưa ý kiến nervously as he fixed his glasses and shuffled his feet.
"What are 'they' talking about?"
"They seem to believe there once were....humans."
The scientist stood up. "Humans--bah! Don't listen to a word the others say. Humans are purely mythical, humorous, and nonsensical. There never were these 'humans' they speak of. It's only ever been us. Now leave me to my studies." The scientist đã đưa ý kiến as he bent back over his lab bench.
Flemming nodded curtly and left the dim laboratory.

Gryffindork99 Amazing job on the sneak peek, I'll try to make the first chapter live up to its greatness.

hgfan5602 This topic is really controversial. Not that I believe so, but for others. It is. But overall, the sneak peek was very well-constructed.

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.30

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 30
        Love is lovely, lovely is love
    Beth smiled victoriously as I entered school Monday, we hadn’t talked during the weekend and I was super guilty, but instantly relieved she didn’t pounce.
    Beth clapped her hands excitedly. “That smile! It’s a happy smile! I’m in tình yêu smile! The ngày went-”
    “Perfect!” I couldn’t help myself, I just had to say it, Beth and I squealed as we jumped up and down shouting...

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my story of discovering nghề viết văn with dyslexea

posted by abbyirwin

Hi guys I'm a 13 năm old and tình yêu to write but I may not be able to write as fast as some pf u I have dyslexea when I think of dyslexicea when u think of dyslexicea u probly think of not being able to read right well I can not read great and with my dyslexicea I have troble writeing to something that takes maby u a giờ takes me two hours I have been made fun of a tone of times about it the worst time was a teacher đã đưa ý kiến abby how about u read out load for once so I did and I was stodering and trying to sound out words and in the middle of class a girl really đã đưa ý kiến in frount of everyone abby...

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Change hoặc be Changed: chapter 2

posted by IlovePatch97

I tình yêu seeing your các bình luận so please keep them comein. ;)

CHAPTER 2

''NO! Alana'' pleaded Jema.
''Please Jem it’s important and bạn always say curiosity is important for young minds.''
''Yes but curiosity also killed the cat but in this case could get bạn grounded and me in huge trouble'' Jema turned away from me as my brother walked into the kitchen. I could tell he hadn't slept much either. He sat down beside me and began to eat his breakfast. ''I'm going out and will be gone for a while and Jema I would rather you didn't clean the study today'' Carlos said, and...

happy cây akatsuki, chapter 1

posted by flippy_fan210

flippy

it was a normal ngày in the akatsuki. Pein was in his room doing paper work, Konan was making origami figures, Deidara was blowing things up outside, Tobi was annoying deidara and Miyu was practicing her elemental jutsus. She shot ngọn lửa, chữa cháy at a bird, it went up in flames and set a cây on fire. “interesting.” she mumbled. She shot electricity at another bird and it exploded. “are bạn gonna murder every bird from here to china?” itachi said? “shut up, there's nothing else to do.” miyu replied. “you could kill innocents.” itachi suggested. Miyu looked at him like he was crazy then...

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...Adira Anderson!!!

posted by hgfan5602

This is for the Hunger Games RP, but I thought it could be put on here to see what everyone thinks about it too.
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I stare up at the stage as they wait for everyone to be ready for the reaping. I hate the Capitol. I hate everyone who's even associated with the Capitol. I hate the reapings. And I hate the Hunger Games. I'm one of the very few people who don't like the Hunger Games here in District 3. Most people tình yêu the Hunger Games here. If they get chosen for it, they are usually celebrating about it later on. Some prepare for...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.22

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 22
        The little get together interrupted
    “Shut up! bạn totally cheated!” Sage yelled at my brother.
    Adam had an offended face. “Me? Cheat? Please, bạn help me win easily yourself.”
    “Hey!” Sage yells as Ali bursts out laughing.
    Meanwhile on the other side of the bàn Grey and Beth were in their own little world.
    “You actually went to Paris?” Beth asks, smiling.
    Grey...

The war of Color, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

Rick lay in hospital with stitches all over his face and his left eye swollen up, a small eye patch like thing barely covering it up. His best friends- Allan, Brandon, Kyran and Duncan- stood around his giường telling him what happened after he left, Kyran was mainly telling him about it though because everyone had bruises apart from him," and so everyone was fighting at lunch and som black kid had his leg broken, it was so cool bạn could see the bone sticking out and blood went everywhere over James, sp all in all we had a good first ngày of what they're calling 'the war'." Brandon smiled slightly...

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Inspired:Peacefully delicate

posted by Problematic129

I believe this is part 7, with another mixture of funny and inspiring pictures, cause let's face it. It's pretty hard to get fully serious, always have a happy funny mind to lighten everything in the middle of heartache and pain. Just a word of advice. Some pictures here come from pinterest hellobeliver.com, tumblr, gummy chocolates tumblr and deviant art (look for maryana02. deviantart .com), look for them, there awesome. I think one of these pictures is a repeat not sure, and too lazy to look fro the others.
Again I own absolutely nothing, and I do hope bạn smile laugh and get inspired because those are just wonderful feelings and it's the purpose of all of this.
Enjoy!

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The Deadly Sins ~PART TWO~

posted by malmcd

SLOTH

'Do bạn ever get off the couch, sir?
Do bạn ever get off the đi văng and stop watching TV?
Do bạn ever go for a run?
Do bạn ever simply walk around hoặc exercise outside?
Do bạn just play video games all day, sir?
Do bạn even do any work?
Man, bạn are lazy! '

I would not be surprised if someone
Said this to you, my friend,
For I am the cause of it all.
I am one of the Deadly Sins,
As bạn humans call me,
For I am what makes people a lazy bum.

I am a daemon from the pits of hell,
As are all my other brothers,
But I must say,
That I am not a sin,
But rather a human instinct.
And it amuses me to see bạn sit around...

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Millions Of Miles Apart

posted by malmcd

Millions of Miles Apart

From the moment your born somewhere out there bạn have a true love. At less that’s what they say? They say there’s one person who has the same tim, trái tim strings as bạn and they complete you. And there’s nothing that can keep bạn apart from one another...But what if my one true tình yêu isn’t here? I mean what if I never find him hoặc her if that’s the case which I hope it’s not. I don’t know what to say but I’m different from the rest...What if there’s no one out there for me?
My name is Sunflower I was born on the first ngày of spring, March 20, 1998. And was...

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Sendoffs and Memories (Prologue to "The Spotlight Trained on Me," a Harry Potter Fanfiction)

posted by dragonsmemory

I looked around the platform, waiting. George leaned down and whispered in my ear. "Don't worry, Hailey. They'll be here."

I glanced up at him. He had changed after the battle, we all had. George, always the prankster, became thêm serious. He had even talked about closing down Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. The hole in the side of his head, where his ear used to be, was still unnerving, but I learned to accept it as a part of him.

"I know, George," I said. "There's still a connection."

"You mean that old twin telepathy thing bạn had going is still there?"

I stood on my toes to Kiss him. "Always."...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.5

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
5
        Stilere
    It wasn’t like I was expecting anything to happen, but what happened when we opened the book did surprise me.
    “What in the world is that?” Alex asked, looking at the weird lettering.
    “I don’t know, it’s definitely not English, but it doesn’t look like other languages, and I know a ton.” Iris said.
    “Maybe it’s not even a language.” Darren said. “Sure doesn’t look like it.”
    “It’s...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Way Ch.19

posted by Problematic129

~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 19
        I didn’t even need revenge
    I couldn’t help but feel giddy as I brushed my teeth and changed into thêm prettier looking clothes than my bedtime pajama’s of Hello Kitty. The house was quiet and I was a little bit disappointed, but at least I’d get some time to myself, and I needed that very much. I was also glad I didn’t have to go to school either, not because I’d be embarrassed hoặc anything, but because the một phút I saw Meredith I’d go all Ninja...

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Remember me Ch.31

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantaisie :)~
Chapter 31
        The worst form of betrayal
    I think I woke up, it still painfully hurt to breathe. But I was still in the woods, hoặc at least tiếp theo to it. Witnessing the moment.
    The moment my sister died.
    I hadn’t been able to hold the tears ever since I appeared here, leaving my sister behind, I still couldn’t believe it. I missed my one chance, I remember what she had said, though I didn’t understand most of it, but I do now.
    Now...

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Coming Home: A Sons of Anarchy Fanfic Chapter 2 Part 1

posted by CapShunsuifan13

His eyes fluttered open, and his muscles automatically tensed. For a một giây he was back in Afghanistan, alone, without his comrades, falling asleep unguarded behind enemy lines. He noticed how his arms were, like they had been holding someone, someone who is no longer there. Gemma.... The thought entered his head like a speeding bullet. The fact that she wasn't there made him think that she had never been, that he wasn't really home, and that he imagined the whole thing. But one look around the room, his eyes adjusting to the moonlight, he could tell he was in the club house. He really was...

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chó sói, sói Girl: Chapter 13

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

(Fantasy)

I woke with a pounding head and a throbbing shoulder. A bright light was shining in my eyes so I couldn't see anything. “What happened?”
“You were shot.”
“Shot?” I couldn't see anyone. Suddenly, the light snapped off and the room was thrown into shadows. Rubbing my eyes, I saw that I was in some sort of operating room. “Yes, shot. Brett and Dalla brought bạn here, đã đưa ý kiến I was the only one that could save bạn so I did the only thing I could.” I was drawing a blank, what was it Dylan could do? An image came into my mind. It was a stack of files, one flashing after another....

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A Wish on The Northern ngôi sao Chapter Three

posted by Dhampires

I shook in fear as I felt him hovering over me it scard me out of skin I could already feel his hits coming. As leaned over me I heard angry load foot steps stomping their way towards us. My eyes were closed tight but snapped open when I heard his out burst.

"Dad! Stop!" He'd đã đưa ý kiến firmly.

"This little witch" he stooped down so his mouth was level with my ear. "Was snooping on on our conversation I think I'll..." he chuckled "finish her off in one sweep."

I could feel the cold metal of the dao, con dao against my skin against my vocal cord. God, I wasn't even breathing I didn't didn't bother to think....

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Phép thuật and Dangerous Ch. 2

posted by alicia386

Action: Spy Fiction

Chapter Two: I May Be A Spy But Weather Can Kick My Butt Any Day

I and almost everyone else is the world takes life for granted. I didn't realize how good I had it until something hit our jet which immediately caught on fire. Years of training for disasters like this kicked in. I was on high alert looking for the nearest exit. My dad was already at one with two parachutes. Dang it. How could he have possibly have gotten those that fast? This would not seem impressive. Our pilot was already trying desperately to control the jet. It was like he wasn't afraid of those...

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Smith, Ron Smith,Prologue

posted by 1999jacko

4 weeks ago
Ron sat miserably in his apartment watching the new for something interesting, when a beeping noise butted into his little ngày dream. He ran over to the bàn where the phone was placed, he picked it up instantly hitting answer." Hello commander, is my dad back yet?" he đã đưa ý kiến hopefully. The commander cleared his throat before answering," Ron I'm really sorry but we just received a message and its not good news... I'm afraid your father is dead and we need bạn to relocate away from Washington today. So pack your stuff and get ready for your escort to take bạn to your new home." All...

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What I Took From It, Chapter Three

posted by flabaloobalah

Genre: Realistic Fiction, Mystery, Drama/Romance

Claire and I unpacked our belongings and put them in our own dressers and waited for lunch to be ready.
After a little while, Leila hollered for us. As Claire and I reached the doorway, we observed the stampede as the six of them pounded down the stairs.
When my little sister and I reached the kitchen, Jeb greeted us and handed us a bowl and silverware. At the head of the table, Leila stood with a ladle and served us plenty of food. I sat tiếp theo to Makayla, and Claire sat across from me, tiếp theo to Joey.
The meal was spent in almost total silence, save...