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posted by sadiebugz00

This one, we were told to write a story about someone who was either bad hoặc good, but couldn't use any words related to those, i.e. Righteous, villainous. Let me know in the các bình luận what bạn think she is!

She glared at me as I was circling her, observing her... ugliness. She had scraggly deep purple hair, ripped sweat pants, and a torn up heather gray t-shirt. "Look, dude," she said, she had clearly had enough of my observations. "I was just trying to save my family from that beast of a guy, Dr. Hatch. I saw the looks in their eyes as I was dragged away, gagged, bởi bạn and stupid Hatch. I could see in their eyes that they were horrified, positively terrified about what might happen to me. I beg you, for my family's sake, to spare me and free me from Hatch. I have a life to live, people to save, and a family to love. Please don't take it all away from me so soon. After all, I am just 15."

Little did she know, I was on her side.........

Did bạn like it? I hope bạn did! What do bạn think she is, good hoặc bad? Tell me in the comments!

rory2011 likes this

sadiebugz00 Sorry it's short. Most are going to be, as most are only one page in a composition book.

rory2011 I think she's good , cause bad people never love anyone but themself's , and she said that she did whatever she did cause she love her family and she has people to save , so I guess she's good

sadiebugz00 Yep! She is.

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.17

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy hoặc anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...

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The Eye of the Beholder, Chapter 4

posted by 1999jacko

Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he đã đưa ý kiến hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his vòng tròn and drew his...

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Beautiy is the Beast Prologue

posted by Dhampires

The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's tim, trái tim whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...

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Phép thuật and Dangerous Ch. 3

posted by alicia386

Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

"You're lying," I đã đưa ý kiến but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
"That maybe, but would he really want bạn to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add thêm to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
"You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most hàng đầu, đầu trang notch...

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Smith, Ron Smith. Chapter 2

posted by 1999jacko

Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a cái gối, gối case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back ghế, chỗ ngồi of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...

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A death in the forest, chapter 3

posted by 1999jacko

just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if bạn don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours cách đây and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.2

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Alex
    “Are bạn okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris đã đưa ý kiến giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...

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The Dark Of Writing, Chapter 1

posted by 1999jacko

Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. vịt đực, drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to vượt qua, cross the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that vịt đực, drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge bởi the...

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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?

posted by malmcd

Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?

Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked dâu, dâu tây red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm Kiss on the check and saying, “I tình yêu bạn dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I tình yêu bạn two.” As he turned into the tiếp theo road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel đồi núi, đồi núi, hill Chapter 13

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk trang chủ hoặc is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" đã đưa ý kiến Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" đã đưa ý kiến Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where bạn are I'm picking bạn and Leo up, From ur 'Also...

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Runaway Eagle

posted by hgfan5602

Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not trang chủ for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My tim, trái tim is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any thêm of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...

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Daredevil's Vs. Murderer's Ch.9

posted by Problematic129

*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and bạn are sinner, commit all, bạn are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...

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chó sói, sói Girl: Chapter 7

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take bạn to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...

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Misty: First Chapter Chapter 1

posted by kitty190123

One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. bạn know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your các câu hỏi and comments!

Just Because

added by alicia386

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The Inevitable Fate 23

posted by rory2011

she slept for three hours near Kat ,the ground felt harsher and colder than before ,but Kat's body made Hayley feel worm
she felt the door opening and someone is walking over her ,he grabbed her strongly ,she opened her eyes screaming " mom ... mom ... please " she was trying to escape from Mac's hand but she's too young and small to fight a 36 years old man
Kat finally felt something ,her head was killing her ,she can hardly stand cause she Mất tích a lot of blood ,but all she wanted is respond to her daughter's scream
after she stood up she can see very clear ,she saw Mac taking Hayley ,she heard...

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The Inevitable Fate 22

posted by rory2011

Hayley was lying on the ground without any di chuyển ,David was watching his daughter being tortured between Mac's hand

he slapped her three times then he hit her head with the tường ,in somehow ,Kat could get out of Mac's hand ,she took three steps back but everything she was seeing is dark with red and black vision ,she couldn't run away hoặc find a way out cause her head hurt her so much
Mac walked fast after she stood away ,and he pushed her against the tường
he was holding something in his hand
" let's see if bạn can handle this " Mac đã đưa ý kiến , he looked at Kat for a phút then he looked at David...

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Denial of the Truth, Protection of the Soul

posted by hgfan5602

I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces bởi pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.

Remember me Ch.32 and Ch.33

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and fantaisie :)~
Chapter 32
My best friend was murdered bởi my other best friend
    I awoke again to find myself lying on a cold stone floor, I felt just as cold, emoty inside. My head throbbed lightly, but painful, and my chest hurt when I breathed. But that couldn’t compare to the betrayal I felt when I learned that Jessica was the one that killed my sister, and Dorothy’s so called friend were the accomplices.
    “Help,” I croaked. “Help.”
    “I don’t know why bạn bother, Des. Your voice is weak...

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Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

posted by kitty190123

One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will di chuyển on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"