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Detective James Whitaker stood at the homicide scene, inspecting the body as thoroughly as he could, until he figured out what had happened. With all the forensic scientists gathered around him he started to tell them what had happened," well what happened was the killer was chasing the girl through the forest, and the girl tripped up and the killer slowly walked oveeer." James made his way swiftly through the branches and twigs until he reached a large cây and took 3 steps forward, and then continued." Here, he raised his gun and aimed at the head and shot then ran as fast as he could away."Every single scientist stood shocked, their mouths wide open.

After about 2 phút one shook out of it and said," sir, how could bạn possibly know all that?" James stared intently at the scientist until explaining himself," well Jameson, if bạn must know. Behind me are a set of footprints where the killer would of stood, then just below that bụi cây, cây bụi, tổng thống bush over there a but of a gun is sticking out, so he would of dropped the weapon on the run. So that's how I know... please bạn Jameson."As Jameson nodded, with only the slightest bit of embarrassment showing, James decided to hiển thị just how cool he is bởi leaning against the tree. Just as he lent back though he missed the cây and, with a squelch, landed in the biggest pat of dog poo any of them had ever seen.

Jameson lead the laugh at James, but not for long as James stood up heaving with anger and shouted," JAMESON! shut up and pick up that gun now!" no movement was made apart from the laughter died down." JAMESON we don't have all ngày so hurry up and PICK IT UP!" his face going red with embarrassment Jameson ran to pick the gun up from the bush.James knew that always works with the scientists so after all the commotion and died down and his áo, áo khoác cleaned they all went to work identifying the victim, getting DNA and looking for any evidence in the surrounding area.

meanwhile at the old, abandoned factory...
John stood against the tường waiting for the killer to get here. He had his pistol loaded ready for anything, bởi the time the killer got there John had his best fake smile on and his gun behind his back."Hey Ron." John đã đưa ý kiến to the killer, the killer, called Ron, đã đưa ý kiến xin chào back but then all hell went down." Guess what the pigs found earlier today?... no guess's well I'll tell bạn your gun." John đã đưa ý kiến as everyone else including the leader stepped into the line of view all with pistols in their hands. " I'm sorry Ron but we have to kill bạn now otherwise we all go down." John đã đưa ý kiến as they all raised their súng to Rons' head, then the triggers went off and Ron instantly died with a ngôi sao shape placed in his brain.



well hope bạn enjoy and if bạn like this check out my other ones
Yo, everyone. Chase here. bạn know, Jake's been diễn xuất all strange lately like he's hiding something from me. And I don't like it. I don't see how anyone would. I thought we were a team. And I thought he đã đưa ý kiến that I was just as great as he was. Now, this proves that he was totally lying. What a fraud. Okay, I found out something today that might be useful to the two of us. Well, that is, if Jake even wants to work with me. I saw his light on yesterday night. Face it, he's probably researching something about the mutant serpent. Am I right? Well, yes, I thought so. bạn know, I am telepathic....
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posted by hgfan5602
I walk into
The Fields of Sorrow
Once again.
Why do I walk there
Almost everyday?

I stroll along the grasses
Thinking
Bearing a horrible pain.
I think of the world around me
And how much they have inspired me.

I start to cry once again.
All my teachers
All my friends,
They have always stood bởi me,
When things went wrong.

I want a chance to repay them,
To hiển thị them that...
Their work was useful.
To hiển thị them that
I am truly thankful.

Why do I have to leave them then
Now?
No, now's not a good time.
But I know it was not intended
That I leave them now.

I want to hiển thị all those people
That they have been
The change of my life,
That they have made my life so much
Better,
That they were the flames
In the darkness.
posted by sawfan13
Dear Mother,

Yes I know what bạn did to me

You threw me down the well

All because I made your life a living hell

Mommy, Mommy can't bạn see?

I'm your little adopted baby girl

If bạn didn't want me, why did bạn adopt me

Yes Mommy, I know

I, Samarra morgan knows.

The tape that is cursed

Is nothing worse

Than what I had experienced

Why didn't I ever sleep?

Because the ngựa kept me up at night

Because bạn let Daddy keep me in the barn.

I have hurt others

I have killed others

I may have even sickened your horses

I bet bạn loved them thêm than bạn loved me

Yes, I know I am a freak

Because I am afraid of water, so...
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posted by Knowitall123
 cover of the original Vamp out
cover of the original Vamp out
part 2

****2 Weeks Ago*****
I woke up thinking how this was just another usual ngày
"Sweetie, we need to talk." my mom đã đưa ý kiến seriously while her dragon Vinictus flew around her head
"I didn't do anything wrong, bạn don't have any proves."
My dad stopped me and put a hand on my shoulder.
"We kn..what proves?" He asked with a serious face.
"Nothing. What did bạn need me?" I tried to change the subject, Dia who just stopped chasing Emmas dragon looked at me.
"Well..we got a latter this morning.." My mom started.
"And it's an Invitation." My dad continued.
"An Invitation?" I was getting interested in it,...
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posted by Knowitall123
half a năm cách đây my friend wrote a story called Vamp out ,but after receiving some mean các bình luận she gave up on it and when I asked to do a revamp she agreed.




I have,a pretty much normal life, well not quite as normal as bạn think.
You see I'm a Vampire. All of bạn who just started running in panic bạn can relax. I don't kill people, I'm Vegeterian. I almost never drink blood. When I need to drink blood I drink animal blood. I live in the UK, to be thêm precise in London. Maybe bạn want to know how I look like. I'm a normal girl, who's a Vampire. I have long curly brown-blond hair and blue eyes...
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added by h3rmioneg
posted by -SilverFey-
It's funny. We're so different. Me and Kein. He's so shy. Quiet. Introverted.

But I think I would die if I couldn't talk to people.

Even our mark. He is curious, true. But he's curious in a different way. He just need to know things, then he's fine. He just needs knowledge.

Me? I need to see those things. Be out in those places he reads about. I want to leave. Go somewhere else. See something no one's seen.

I wonder about the other planes. I want to see them. Travel there. Why can't we? The Faeries are clever. And magickal. They could let us.

Sometimes I don't like the Faeries. What they did. They...
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Just a few things before the story; one, if there's something bạn don't like about it, please tell me! I want it to be as good as it can be. ^-^ Just please tell me in a respectful way, please. I would appreciate that. Thank you.
Also, this story will be a little (well, thêm than a little) bloody and violent, and there may be some cussing later on. Just a warning.
That being said, I hope bạn like it!
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Gnarled branches. Green leaves grew from them—green leaves spotted with yellows and reds. They rustled dryly, talking of the upcoming season of autumn....
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posted by alicia386
I ventured out into the forest. My mission is simple. I must find the woman who gives out free wishes. It was a long journey but the mere thought of what is to come kept me going.

The thêm I kept walking, the stranger the path got. The trees became short and pink, the sky turned a light pink, and the cỏ turned soft as silk. I was near her cave.

"Queen of beauty, luck, and love, hiển thị your face to me!" I shouted at the heavens hoping she would come out.

"Who's there?" A whispery voice asked me while I searched for the keeper of the voice.

"It is me, Jason Hills," I đã đưa ý kiến to the sky. "I have come...
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The light dimmed, and the first thing Garren notices is the cold, hard ground. Then he notices the howling wind. Then there was the 800 foot drop in front of him....Wait, what?

Garren scrambled back, trying to put as much distance in between him and the cliff edge. Once he was no longer in danger of falling and splattering his guts all over the rocks, he noticed one thêm thing. His wounds no longer hurt.

Garren lifted his shirt. All of the cuts and bruises the gryphon had được trao him had all magically healed. He wondered if the voice had anything to do with this. As if on cue, đã đưa ý kiến voice began...
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posted by SilverWings13
"Sethus!" William shouted as he neared the double doors of the sky-scraper. Militiamen stood in a line at attention, modified rifles in their hands. They were garbed in the same black uniforms, armor, and helmets as William and his troops. One of them stepped out of line. He wore a red band around his upper arm.

"Sir?" the youth said.

"Command your men to stand down and retreat."

Without arguing hoặc hesitating, Sethus shouted the orders to his men and ran through the double doors. William waited until every man was inside before he followed.

Civilians in business Luật sư đấu trí were rushing out the back...
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When I see you,I don't know what to say
I think of you,just about everyday
When your around hysterical,it's unpredictable...with me,I try to be serious,buts it's no use...

(Chorus) When I look at you,I turn away,When I hear your name,I try a different way, (fast) Your smile is alluring,and your eyes always occuring on my mind, If I explain I'll go insane,so I'll keep my mind blank,The thiên thần are jealous about bạn from up above,and though bạn dont know it;you always give me La-la love,yeah,La-la love

When I sing,to me,you play the music,Im intrigued-sing with me,oh oh
When I dance bạn bạn dance too,In everything I do,To me,Your here,so what Im having fantasies,who cares?

(Chorus)

My tim, trái tim is pounding,No sound surrounds me,exept your velvety voice...I'll say it once again,Your the âm nhạc in my head,I can't build up to it any other way,Ive already done as much as I may...

(Chorus) LA,la,la,la,la bạn give me...love
posted by Problematic129
*So I really don't know where this came from, it just popped in my head. It's a bit sad, but I hope bạn enjoy. I dedicate this to all kind people and people who are having hard times. Please don't copy, các bình luận and những người hâm mộ would be lovely*
These are tears, tears that I cry
    They leak down my face, from my raining eye
    The pain, how it hurts, oh if it wasn’t so
    My life could be easy, my life could be nice
    But yet I’m still writhing, stuck in the ice
    I feel so cold, as I scream and...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter 11: When It All Comes To An End

Senior Year
      This was the most legendary party ever. All of the seniors were invited to meet up at Glynn Academy. They was going to throw the wildest and most illegal party ever and it was all thanks to Jason Rivers, Jena Ross, Joseph Knight, Marco Martinez and Carter Stone. They all were in the D.B.E together hoặc Drive bởi Enterprises. Sammy Mitchell had chosen Jason who chosen his Những người bạn to be apart of this business.
      This business was to help make the world a better place. If someone has a problem with somebody else, bạn have to kill that...
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Welcome all to the một giây issue of Everything Eden, your nguồn for…well, everything Eden. In this issue, we'll be looking at the finall six sách of the Eden Chronicles. These six volumes tell of love, life, death, and hatred. Let's have a look.

A LITTLE BIT thêm THAN LOVE
As this volume has been discussed many times, it is not necessary to reveal anything here.

RISE OF THE DEMONS
Young Areana grew up sheltered from the battles her parents fought. Now, with the demons rising, new threats will make themselves known.

ROKUJO'S REVOLUTION
This book deals with the Failed Revolution. Crown Prince...
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posted by alicia386
One thêm chapter left!

Chapter 10: Do bạn Swear to Tell the Truth and Nothing But the Truth

      Simone stared wide eyed through the bars locking her into the cell. It was the only thing that kept her from snapping everyone's heads off. The guard was gone but replaced bởi another man. He was tall, muscular, and had the most unscrupulous  grin on his face. It made Simone feel extremely uncomfortable. He had jet black hair and light green eyes. His eyes were sincere at time when he looked at her, but other times he made the hairs on the back of Simone's neck stand up. She didn't like this guy...
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posted by Problematic129
Part 10!!! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I had school, I'm now in high school! Freshman! So it was really time consuming, but I couldn't let bạn down, I own nothing, all these pictures are not mine. There here fro the main purpose to inspire bạn and put that smile right back on your face. Renew your faith, laugh at the sky, smile forever, and never cry. I believe in bạn guys, I tình yêu bạn guys, bạn are awesome, beautiful, amazing, cool, and you. And I don't need a picture of bạn to know that, don't let them take bạn down. In the end be the one standing and never lose hope. I won nothing. Enjoy!
posted by alicia386
(i thought this would be a very interesting teenage short story to tell. FYI i completely made this up on the spot. i have a very creative mind)

It was that perfect moment. My boyfriend, Liam, and I were just causually on the đi văng watching another episode of America's tiếp theo hàng đầu, đầu trang Model. I was watching it for the fashion and he was watching it for the girls although he would never admit it. We were just sitting their having fun and sometimes makeouting but bạn dont need all the details.

His tan arm was around me and i was laying my head on his chest. I thought nothing could possible ruin this moment...
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im gonna be away so here is 2 chapters for you. please comment, it will make me a better writter. Thank bạn :D




CHAPTER 3

I woke up to an extremely bright sun in my face and hot sand in my hair. I must not have been in the sun for long because I hadn't burnt yet. I could hear the sound of human laughter but it felt like it was coming from the inside of my head, all I could smell was smoke from a camp fire. I rolled over and pushed myself up off the sand and I looked around, still trying to figure out what happened. All I remembered was the egg, the flash of colour, and feeling I was falling from...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
11
    Terry
    “Just tell us!”
    “I already told you! I don’t remember!” Stilere yelled. “All I remember is having this headache and something and then when I was walking this weird feeling and then I opened my eyes…but I know something happened, I just can’t remember!”
    Zaria opened her mouth to say something else but I cut her off. “If she doesn’t remember, she doesn’t remember. Were just gonna have to…jog her memory back, yeah, that’s it.”
    “And...
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