True Writers Article: A Little Bit thêm Than tình yêu (Part 1, Chapter 3)

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A Little Bit thêm Than tình yêu (Part 1, Chapter 3)

posted by dragonsmemory

THE EDEN CHRONICLES

BOOK ONE: A LITTLE BIT thêm THAN LOVE

PART 1: TWERA AND THE PRINCE

Chapter 3

Kikikyo circled high above Councilpeak, watching his father land. <He makes it look so easy,> he thought before angling into a shallow dive. There was barely enough room on the broad ledge for both of them.

Parthurnax strode confidently into the Councilroom, Kikikyo struggling to keep up. Most of the Council was already seated at the huge round table. A pair of scarlet-and-gold phoenixes rose from their seats and greeted the ancient king.

Kikikyo sttod bởi awkwardly. He knew the various forms of greeting, having been drilled in them since he was a decade old. Parthurnax greeted the phoenixes, then stepped to one side.

"Lwok nitha in mirach, Kikikyo," he said. Kikikyo gathered his wits as the turkey-sized birds approached.

"Nrakka, Nucla Kikikyo," the largest of the two said. Kikikyo responded in the traditional way. Through the entire Councilmeeting, he maintained an air of perfect peace and solemnity. Inside, the young prince screamed for release.

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Lwok nitha in mirach means "and this is my son." Nrakka, Nucla Kikikyo, means "Well-met, Prince Kikikyo." In all of the Eden Chronicles books, languages other than the character's native tongue will remain untranslated in the story. Watch for a special bài viết about the phoenix language.
Councillmeetings are full of traditions and formalities. It would be tedious to outline them all here. In the full version, this chapter will be expanded to include the whole meeting, as well as thêm descriptions of their surroundings.

Sorry it was so short. Hope bạn liked it anyway. tiếp theo chapter's a double feature.
Jo

IN THE tiếp theo CHAPTER…
Twera meets her prince and Kikikyo finds an escape. The first sparks begin to fly.

SweetHoneyBunny, sadiebugz00 and 1 other like this

hgfan5602 Cool. Not being a HUGE fan of dragons, I wasn't that interested though. Your use of language is pretty nice.

dragonsmemory Thank you. Though this particulat tale centers on dragons, it features other beings

hgfan5602 Yeah, I know. I'm looking forward to seeing more out of you. It would be pretty cool.

dragonsmemory Since you seem to take particular interest in the languages of Eden, you'll enjoy my overview of the detail of each tongue, which should be ready to post by next week

sadiebugz00 I [b]love[/b] the footnotes at the end. They really help.

dragonsmemory And what of the chapte itself?

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Waitin' (Song)

posted by h3rmioneg

(Verse 1)
Waitin'
it's loadin'
just wanna get out of here
Waitin'
I'm fine
just wanting bạn to get out of my life
How long does it take for bạn to leave?
just wonderin'
How long does it take for bạn to leave?
Just Wonderin in in in

(Chorus)
I've been waitin'
my entire life
for bạn to leave
Petals and Sticks
all fake and broken
bạn didn't know what love
was till bạn met me
I bet bạn haven't changed
since
I Waitin' Waitin'

(Verse 2)
hiển thị up in a màu hồng, hồng dress
waitin' for my tình yêu to address
I'm like come on
hoặc I'm gettin' out of here

(Chorus)

(Bridge)
I want the life to leave
through thin air
7 miles away
I'm Waitin'

(Pre-Chorus)
for bạn to leave me
for bạn to go outerspace
and that's what I'm waitin' for

(Chorus)

(Verse 1)

(Chorus)

I' Waitin'

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Hourglass - Chapter Eleven

posted by alicia386

Sorry this isn't the best chapter but I didn't really have time to write it out better. I understand if bạn don't like it either

Please review and comment. Thank bạn and enjoy!

Chapter Eleven

September
It was the big premiere of his movie Hourglass and all of the người nổi tiếng showed up. It was a huge hit and he had to say that it was amazing. Since Cassidy and Milo were arrested, he had to re cast their parts. Actually the girl to take Cassidy's part really liked him. He would totally go for it but he just couldn't was not looking for a relationship. Her name was Amber Washington and she had dark...

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Hourglass - Chapter Nine

posted by alicia386

Chapter Nine

The tiếp theo day, Mason and Olivia were recommended to seek some help. Olivia just wanted a clue to her future. Her life couldn't have been any worse. Her parents were dead, Cassidy hated her and Mason was sending her mixed signals about there relationship. When she had called him, he seemed a little edgy. It could just be Olivia's imagination though. Mason needed mental help. On the outside he was solid as a rock but on the inside he was as fragile as porcelain. Mason went to a psychiatrist and Olivia went to a psychic. This would give them the các câu trả lời they mostly desperately craved....

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Hourglass - Chapter Eight

posted by alicia386

Chapter Eight

Mason was a wreck this morning. He was embarrassed and ashamed. He had acted like an idiot especially when he confessed his tình yêu for Olivia. What was he thinking? Be had embarrassed himself, Olivia, and Cassidy. Couldn't he do anything right? Staying in giường was the only way for him to keep his emotions in control. If he was lucky, no one would remember that night let alone what he said. He đã đưa ý kiến some pretty awful and truly disturbing things. He wanted to apologize to Olivia that night but when she came downstairs she ran out the door and down the block.

He slumped in his giường thinking...

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Trapped Angel: Prologue

posted by sawfan13

He woke up all alone in the darkness. He felt something
cold and metallic around his wrist. What the hell? What's going on? He had been handcuffed before, but not like this. He's an escape artist, illusionist even. He's a very famous man, living in the sinful and colorful city of Las Vegas, Nevada. Yet, why is he locked in this room all alone? He looked down and noticed he was shirtless. Where's my shirt? His muscular tanned abs were exposed in the dark room, as he felt his long dark hair touching his shoulders and below his neck. He pulled on the handcuff. Damn it! I've escaped out of these before! Why isn't it working now?

He heard footsteps coming, as his tim, trái tim started to race. He heard a giggle, as a blonde girl wearing his symbols and clothing line stood before him. She smiled in a sinister way, "Hello, Mr. Angel! We've been expecting you!"

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All These Years

posted by hgfan5602

All these years...
Are so memorable,
Every bit of it.
Even though they are not all
Good memories,
Bad memories are just as memorable
As good memories.

Looking back on the past,
Remembering my life before,
How everything was so amazing,
How all my Những người bạn changed my life,
Giving me memories that will last
My whole life long.

Do not worry,
I still remember all the good times
That we had.
Doing cannonballs into the cold water,
Laughing like we don't have a care
In the world.

I still remember
How bạn gave me all your courage
How bạn allowed me to hiển thị myself,
To be content to share all my knowledge
With the world.

None...

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Hourglass - Chapter Six

posted by alicia386

Chapter Six

In the last week Olivia and Mason have been avoiding each other. She may be his assistant and he may be the boss but they didn't have to be in each other's company everyday. Mason stayed away because Olivia avoided him. Olivia avoided Mason because Cassidy tole her to. Olivia knew for sure that, that girl was dangerous but what did she possibly want from Mason. He has those amazing looks but Cassidy Golden wasn't the type to stay with one man for very long and the guys she usually dated were models.

Mason was literally in the middle of it all. He had numerous of things to do especially...

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Missing; Chapter 1

posted by wantadog

Missing
Chapter one

So here I was. Alone in a small Arizona town that up until today had housed a bustling community. I have no idea what happened either. I woke up to find everything the way it usually was. Hyperactive brother, overprotective father, working mother. A normal life for a normal girl. My name is Juliet Grim.

“Jules, wake up! Now!”
Juliet Grim woke up this morning like all the rest. With her father making a big fuss over her waking up and taking care of the animals. They could wait and giờ hoặc two, right? But according to him, “They...

It Starts Now: Prologue

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

Gunshots fired across the streets as soldier upon soldier fell before their brothers; the blood seeped through the thin uniforms, offering no protection hoặc comfort. The front line men had taken a beating, trapped in the city with the Bellators and cut off from their troops. Flames leap from between the buildings as reinforcements moved in with the flame guns, torching anything and everybody without the mark of the sword. Men and boys no older then ten could be heard screaming as the flames licked their skin and burning through the flesh. Battle had been going on all morning as battalion V35...

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Reincarnation Part Two

posted by alicia386

"I would like the first option please."

"Very được ưa chuộng choice," he commented. He motioned with his fingers for me to follow him down the hallway. "You will a completely different person but with very similar personality traits and because we can't really have bạn killing yourself off again, I've decided to make your life horrid. bạn will be mistreated and unloved. bạn won't have much and bạn will not want it either."

"No fair," I said. "That isn't any different from my old life. I thought in this new life I would have a better life like nice parents and maybe a sibling hoặc two."

"Actually, Ms. White,"...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.17

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
17
Mikey
    Now, I’m not saying I was scared hoặc anything, but I couldn’t help but feel a chilling sensation when I saw the stone again, still glowing, but brighter than before. It was like some twisted sick foreboding object, something that, as beautiful as it was, I didn’t ever want to see hoặc touch again. We all stared at it, trying not to get to memorized as before. We were at some deserted park Terry use to come when she was a child, but after a kid died her parents shunned her from the place.
    How nice.
    “Okay…so,...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.14

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
14
    Zaria
    “It’s a crystal, it’s a crystal, it’s a crystal, it’s a freaking glowing crystal!” Edith shouted staring at it with horrific fascination.
     “Should we keep it?” Iris asked, poking the thing hesitantly.
    Stilere glared at her. “Yes we should, this is what we’ve been looking for.”
    “What exactly is it?” Alex asked. “And why are we looking for it?”
    Stilere shrugged. “Well, for one I don’t think...

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ones of the world

posted by TheEvilHoodie

The twins woke early. It had been a dark, stormy night - even some of the big ones were scared. They sat up and stretched in unison before clambering out of their smooth wooden high-walled bed. They had previously found a way to push down the bars, making the jump on the other side much less challenging and not so hard on the derriere. They took the stairs one at a time, clinging on to the handrails on either side. The twins entered the living room, fumbling around in the dark for the matches to light the torches they had fashioned out of thick wood and coal. Once this was done, they crawled...

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Absolutely Wicked Ch.10

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
10
    Stilere
    I could barely conentrate throughout the day, my mind kept on wondering. Why did we need to learn at a time like this? It feels like it was just yesterday that we were almost killed bởi this storm created from the book, and the school knows it too. Why risk it?
    The câu hỏi asked for all layers, and I could tell I was really asking myself. Why risk it? For a book of all things, a few months cách đây if bạn đã đưa ý kiến I’d be counting ona book I would have laughed in your face,...

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"The Arena"

posted by BlondLionEzel

Chapter 7 : Tragedy

The tiếp theo days sun rose, as chim giẻ cùi, jay knew what he had to to do...

"Welcome!, Lady's and Gents, i give you: chim giẻ cùi, jay vs Cole!" The announcer screamed!

"Ready to die?" Cole đã đưa ý kiến as they Unleashed a giant cáo, fox Form Kitsune! It lunged at chim giẻ cùi, jay and he dodged it. When chim giẻ cùi, jay looked at the towering Kitsune he noticed something: Whip Marks! Then he knew what to do.

"Shhh, it's ok" đã đưa ý kiến đã đưa ý kiến as put his hand on it's head and it started whimpering, "It's ok, i won't hurt you".

Then chim giẻ cùi, jay heard something: Screams! Then he saw what happened. King George stabbed Amber through the tim, trái tim at the hàng đầu, đầu trang of the Colosseum!...

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World of Shadows- Ch. 6

posted by alicia386

Chapter Six

EVERYTHING HAPPENS FOR A REASON. JUST MAKE THE BEST OF IT. -Erica

The things going through my mind that ngày were not pleasant ones. They were mainly flashbacks. Flashbacks from ancient times but t felt lie it was not very long ago. The first one was thêm of a modern medieval setting. There were towering stone buildings and cobblestone streets. The night sky made the scene even thêm melancholy with its dreadful grey skies and cold rain. It was the perfect scene for a battle. A lofty man wearing a lengthy cost which was covered in bright jewels and beautiful pearls. His golden...

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This democracy on Earth (poem)

posted by Problematic129

I wrote this a while back, for my language arts class. Please don't copy, enjoy!!!:)
Don't be careless
About the world
Many people are penniless
They have nowhere to go
Generations through generations
Our numbers subtract
Stand up and fight
We are not powerless
Together we unite
And restore our happiness
Come on let's be earnest
We can improve academically
hiển thị that we care
Our people need compassion
We live and love
And we think of above
Forever and ever
We will be together
No matter how wicked
hoặc cruel we can be
We all live and die
In this democracy on Earth

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This is Reality

posted by IlovePatch97

Reality hurts, I have experience
It makes bạn feel free, and then drags bạn to the ground
It tells bạn that everything will be ok
Later it crushes all hope and faith
It makes bạn see what bạn want to see
Let’s bạn feel what bạn want to feel
It puts bạn in those “oh snap” positions
It laughs at bạn in the face for your mistakes
It can help bạn find tình yêu hoặc heartbreak
In the end reality gives bạn the same outcome
The very outcome bạn tried to avoid
Reality doesn’t control me, I refuse to be destroyed

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chó sói, sói Girl: Chapter 2

posted by SweetHoneyBunny

bởi the time I got to the small shopping center in my ever smaller town, my Jeep had stalled twice, the window was stuck half way and the little light on the dash was flashing. Could it get any worst? Better not say that in case something did happen.
I grabbed my keys, stuffed them in my bag and slammed the door.

“Julie! Over here! Juuuuulie!” Sophie was almost standing on her chair in the thực phẩm court waving her hands in the air like a lunatic. “What took so long? I've been waiting for like 3 hours!” she đã đưa ý kiến when I finally managed to weave my way through the other people there. “I...

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nghề viết văn Jokes

added by alicia386