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Song nghề viết văn What do bạn think about theses lyrics I wrote? This is my first time ever & I'm using them in a novel I'm writing.
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They suck... bạn shouldn't write anymore lyrics
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It's ok for your first try. Just keep practicing.
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Born of flames
Always the one to blame
For all the shame
And all the pain.
Maybe it’s all in the mind
So why do I feel so blind?
Somewhere in a dream,
Someone stifles a scream.
Death dancing through the night,
All fall at her sight.
Chaos rules the air.
Gives everyone a scare.
In the midst of the forlorn
Deadly flowers are born.
Chorus
A woman out on the track
Looking for those who won’t last.
Running up and down a hill
Finding her will.
Chorus
Found the child
Hidden in the wild.
Failed to kill her.
Becomes your daughter.
The cause of your death!
Chorus 2x
These are the lyrics I wrote. I already know they suck, what I don't know is how much.
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