Biệt đội chim cánh cụt vùng Madagascar Article: tortured....chapter 3

posted by spmana123

i was standing there, tiếp theo to ricos corpse, tears coming down my cheeks, knowing that ill never see him again, never see hm smile, hoặc do anything with me anymore, and i couldnt get here in time to save him, kowalksi and private were sitting tiếp theo to his body, crying out loud. i snapped, and started running towards blowhole.

skipper:ILL KILL YOU!!!!

he dodged my attack and ran straight to the door, along with his minion, and locked us in so we couldnt get out.

skipper:OPEN THE DAMN DOOR bạn COWARD!! WHEN I GET OUT IM GONNA KILL YOU!!!!

i was banging on that door as hard as i could, hoping to get it open, but no luck.

my arms were begiining to become sore, but i did not care, rico was dead, and i wanted revenge for him.

blowhole: bạn three fell in to my trap! ill see bạn when bạn wake up!

then, suddenly, the room was filled with sleeping gas.

private:skipper....(falls to floor)

kowalski:ughh....(falls to the floor)

skipper:ugh....im....gonna...kill...you....(falls to the floor)

when we had awoken from our sleep, we were all in that room still, expect we were tied up to chairs, and kowalski sat in front os us, tiếp theo to some...weapens....no, they were gonna hurt him next!

kowalski:skipper, what do i do?!?! im scared, i dont want to die!

skipper:calm down, nothings gonna happen to you.

then, blowohle and is minion came in, and blowhole told his minion to stand near kowalski.

kowalski:what are bạn doing!?!? stay away from me!!!

kowalski was struggling the best he could to get free, but had no luck, just like me and private.

skipper:DON'T bạn LAY A HAND ON HIM BLOWOHLE!!!

private couldnt stop crying, after seeing all this, im sure he was wanting it all to end.

blowhole:minion! grab kowalksi arm!

skipper:BLOWHOLE!!! STOP!!!

kowalski began to plead, begging for nothing to happen to him, crying to let him go, but blowholes minion had a strong grip on his arm and wouldnt let go.

blowhole:now....snap his arm as many times as bạn can!

and then it happened, the minion began to snap kowalski's arm in all ways possible, i could hear his crying and screaming, begging him to stop, hearing his arm snap and crackle made me cringe, and i couldnt do anything to stop him, i was powerless, just like rico...

blowhole:alright, thats enough.

the minion had stopped, and kowalski's arm was completly destroyed, all i could see was his arm, all bent up, like a knot, kowalski threw up from all the pain, and continued to cry while doing it.

kowalski:ugh...ugh...AHHHHH... IT HURTS!HELP ME SKIPPER PLEASE.....(cough,cough)

blowhole: alright penguins, we'll see bạn in a few hours to continue what we started.

and with that blowhole and his minion left again shutting the door and locking it behind them, all we could do was sit there and hope we all wake up from this horrible nightmare...only to realize....that this was real,and there was nothing we could do about it.

end of chapter 3.........

BOLTravolta This is getting good!

spmana123 Thanks, chapter 4 should be up by today for u to read

peacebaby7 I don't think I have any further advice following this chapter beyond what I already suggested. And, now that I've read all of the chapters that are posted, I'd like to say that the plot of the story is getting very intriguing. I can't believe Rico died! D: So sad. I do think you could add more detail so you could really get a tear in your reader's eye, though. Otherwise, please, never give up on writing. Just keep going and improving and you'll be writing to-die-for fanfics in no-time. :) And just so you know, it wasn't that I didn't want to read your story before, like I said I was busy. Ironically, I've been busy editing old fanfics on Word because I absolutely HATE how my firsts sound now that I've grown in writing. So NEVER feel bad if you ever think your fanfics are bad. They're really not, for one, and for two, no one gets it right the first time. Always remember that even the most famous authors had to learn beforehand. ;)

spmana123 Thanks for the feedback, it really helps, but I'm gonna leave chapter 4 as it is because I wrote it all, but I'll write chapter 5 like a novel format, thx again

peacebaby7 ^You're welcome. Remember, they're only suggestions. :) I can't wait to see how you do. :D But you [i]really[/i] didn't mind it? I do tend to ramble too much, and if you want me to shut up, just say it. XD

spmana123 It's ok, I like it when somebody gives opinions about my stuff, so that way I can make it even better, so what do you think of the story so far, what do u think will happen?

peacebaby7 ^Well, like I said, I think you have a very intriguing plot. Especially since not many people actually kill off any of the penguins (as far as what I've read, that is). It's kind of cliche, which makes your story unique. As to what I think will happen, I really can't begin to guess, which is a very good quality in fanfictions, in my opinion. I do hope Blowhole pays for what he's done, though. >:( So, really good job coming up with a storyline. Just work on your grammar, spelling, and format and you're golden. :D

spmana123 Thanks:) chapter 4 should be up really soon I'm typing it right now, make sure to stay on so you'll be the first reader

peacebaby7 ^No worries. I'll be on for the next couple hours before I gotta go to bed. :)

starthepenguin this is really good usually i try to avoid sad stories but this one is really good keep writing :)

Rainshadow999 Far out! I want to swear! Why the Hell am I a Vivid Reader?!?!?!? God, they don't even do this in Hell!!! Damn you beautiful angel, God really has cursed us, with images! Sorry but God am I a Vivid Reader…

Rainshadow999 Lol, reading what I said a day ago. I blame that all on Rainshadow, lol. starthepenguin@ Are you smirking???

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posted by peacebaby7

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posted by spmana123

Everyone looked confused as he asked that question.... Maybe he was joking around he thought...

Rico: what are bạn talking about! It's us Kowaslki!

Doctor:.....

Kowalksi:I'm sorry....I don't know any of you.....

Rico:quit joking! It's not funny any more!

Rico put his fin on Kowaslkis shoulder...but he shoved it away angry and scared at the same time..

Kowaslki: leave me alone! I told bạn I don't know who bạn are! Where the hell am I anyway!

Doctor:...I was afraid of this...

Rico and skipper looked at him with confusion...

Doctor: Kowaskli....why don't bạn talk to this young chim cánh cụt right here....

Private...

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posted by peacebaby7

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Wow, I just got the mũ lưỡi trai, cap for the fact I’ve been on here for two whole years…and since the penguins are the reason I found this spot, I’ll say this here. bạn don’t have to read this if bạn don’t want to, and if bạn try to báo cáo this and it gets deleted, I understand, but I really wanted to write this and found it too long for the wall.

Thank bạn all for, well, being you. Sounds so sappy, but I write what I feel, ‘kay? Ha. Whether bạn are a thêm gần đây người hâm mộ hoặc a người hâm mộ from a while ago, no matter the fans/friends that have come and gone, bạn all are awesome, the best. This spot is different...

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posted by PrivatPaparazzi

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posted by BirdG

So, in this chapter I will revert a little to the story before this one. It's also a help for myself to pull a little back to where this all started... :P

Problems

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Rico and Private used the time to return to their old strengths. Rico spent nearly all time sleeping.

Private was mostly sitting on the entrance of the oak hole and watched the branches of the birch trees waving above Kowalski's grave. But the others weren't sure if he really saw them…

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posted by JediPenguin16

Chapter Two: Redemptions and Temptations

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" AAAH!" He yelped as he stood up, throwing the fuzzy grey thing off of his face. It landed on the ground on both feet without missing a beat.
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posted by Metallica1147

Chapter 4: Getting Used to the Changes

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“I really like it here a lot!” đã đưa ý kiến Blowhole.

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posted by SummerPoM

The tiếp theo day, Roger's Cafe.

In the alligator-lover's Cafe, Roger, there were sitting: Skipper, Kowalski, Rico, Private and Marlene, planning the day.
"Okay", Kowalski said. "So we'll leave NY at 6 o'clock."
"Hmm...", Skipper began. "Maybe a little later."
"But--", Kowalski interrupted himself. "Okay, we'll go later. 7 o' clock."
"Great."
"Hey, we'll fly in what plane?", Marlene asked.
"Don't worry, Marley", Skipper đã đưa ý kiến as she raised an eyebrow. "Kowalski has a military plane that belonged to his grandfather. Right, K'walski?"
"Well... actually...", he said.
"What?"
"Well, this plane is very old and...

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Psycho: 1 - The stone (Republicated bởi some errors)

posted by SummerPoM

An unknown place, 2359.

"Honestly, when will we be able to act?", a mysterious female voice said. "Never! We are the worst parts of all living beings!"
"Sharon...how dumb bạn are!" A male voice said. "Alter-egos are the most powerful beings in the universe! I, as your leader, I have risked so much for all of us."
"Okay...I will pretend I believe in you. But...when we will act?"
"Heheh...exactly now."

Central Park Zoo, Penguins Habitat, 0000.

"Ugh...Blowhole...what are...you doing...", Skipper was having a nightmare. He was feeling that the nightmare was so real..."No!", Skipper cried.

He thought...

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Normal is Never Real

posted by SPKR689

A/N: Soo, my first ligit fanfiction. (Not including the other one) I have taken time out of my school ngày to write this and I am quite happy on how it is turning out. I will say once again that it will be a bit confusing considering it takes place far in my own mind, but fresh in all of yours. Please, feel free to ask me anything and I will explain it untill bạn understand it. Do not hold back on các câu hỏi hoặc anything. If bạn don't want to ask something out loud, bạn know I'm always on meebo and bạn can hộp thư đến me. :) This is just the prologue so I will give crackin on the other chapters real...