Okay! This is the 2nd chapter of my 1st serious story! :)
And I want to thank hanz1192 for reviewing last chapter! :D
Anyways, lets continue on the story!
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Dimension 1 (???)
Penguins HQ
In the middle of the room a portal opened and four chained penguins are thrown out of it and landed with a great thud.
"Ugh, where are we? Kowalski! Analyze our situation!" Skipper ordered, as he observed his surroundings.
"Skipper, it appears to be our HQ" Kowalski answered, as he looked around the empty HQ.
The HQ, where the penguins met, befriended, work and have fun in, never looked as empty, dirty and desolated as this. Cobwebs hang at the ceiling, dust in every corner, a pile of garbage at the side, nothing in sight. No TV, no table, no equipment, no... Nothing.
"Oh dear me... What happened here?" asked Private, as he looked around, worried about their dimensioned self.
"Yeah... Whut?" questioned Rico, looking everywhere.
"We don't know yet, but we will find out!" Skipper said, resolution in his voice, cheering up the dark, gloomy atmosphere that is hanging about. "Boys, let's search! Look at every secret spot we have here!We won't stop until we find ourselves! And if they're not in here, we will do a tìm kiếm perimeter outside! Now let's go, go, go!" Skipper ordered.
As the penguins tìm kiếm through the HQ, searching in a straight line for they're still chained together, Kowalski found a piece of paper... With Blowhole's niêm phong, con dấu on it.
"Skipper, look at this" Kowalski said, hiển thị the piece of paper to him.
"Blowhole..." Skipper growled. 'I knew this would happen someday... And it apparently happened to us in this universe-I mean dimension... But how?'
As Skipper continued thinking of ways how it happened, Private and Rico found a tape hidden in the pile of garbage.
"Skippa'h! Look at we found! It may be a clue!" Private said, as him and Rico showed Skipper the tape.
"Yes, it may be a clue... hoặc it might be a trap!" Skipper said, as his paranoia skyrocketed. "Kowalski, analyze!"
"Hmm... It seems to be a relatively an toàn, két an toàn tape. I suggest playing it, so we will know what is inside of it" Kowalski answered.
"Right!" Skipper nodded "Rico, tape-player!" The đã đưa ý kiến chim cánh cụt regurgitate the đã đưa ý kiến object, giving it to his leader.
Skipper, paranoid and tensed, cautiously put the tape in the player, almost expecting it to explode, when it didn't, Skipper relaxed, somewhat, and pressed the play button.
"help me..."
At pressing the button, the penguins was shocked, shocked enough to drop the tape-player. They were shocked, not at the message, but who was saying the message.
It was... Blowhole.
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Cliffhanger!!! :D
Okay, guys what do bạn think? Is it good, bad, hoặc should I just give up?
This is my first story, so be nice! :)
Any ideas what would happen next?
Anyways...
Read and review! =^_^=
And I want to thank hanz1192 for reviewing last chapter! :D
Anyways, lets continue on the story!
=^_^=
Dimension 1 (???)
Penguins HQ
In the middle of the room a portal opened and four chained penguins are thrown out of it and landed with a great thud.
"Ugh, where are we? Kowalski! Analyze our situation!" Skipper ordered, as he observed his surroundings.
"Skipper, it appears to be our HQ" Kowalski answered, as he looked around the empty HQ.
The HQ, where the penguins met, befriended, work and have fun in, never looked as empty, dirty and desolated as this. Cobwebs hang at the ceiling, dust in every corner, a pile of garbage at the side, nothing in sight. No TV, no table, no equipment, no... Nothing.
"Oh dear me... What happened here?" asked Private, as he looked around, worried about their dimensioned self.
"Yeah... Whut?" questioned Rico, looking everywhere.
"We don't know yet, but we will find out!" Skipper said, resolution in his voice, cheering up the dark, gloomy atmosphere that is hanging about. "Boys, let's search! Look at every secret spot we have here!We won't stop until we find ourselves! And if they're not in here, we will do a tìm kiếm perimeter outside! Now let's go, go, go!" Skipper ordered.
As the penguins tìm kiếm through the HQ, searching in a straight line for they're still chained together, Kowalski found a piece of paper... With Blowhole's niêm phong, con dấu on it.
"Skipper, look at this" Kowalski said, hiển thị the piece of paper to him.
"Blowhole..." Skipper growled. 'I knew this would happen someday... And it apparently happened to us in this universe-I mean dimension... But how?'
As Skipper continued thinking of ways how it happened, Private and Rico found a tape hidden in the pile of garbage.
"Skippa'h! Look at we found! It may be a clue!" Private said, as him and Rico showed Skipper the tape.
"Yes, it may be a clue... hoặc it might be a trap!" Skipper said, as his paranoia skyrocketed. "Kowalski, analyze!"
"Hmm... It seems to be a relatively an toàn, két an toàn tape. I suggest playing it, so we will know what is inside of it" Kowalski answered.
"Right!" Skipper nodded "Rico, tape-player!" The đã đưa ý kiến chim cánh cụt regurgitate the đã đưa ý kiến object, giving it to his leader.
Skipper, paranoid and tensed, cautiously put the tape in the player, almost expecting it to explode, when it didn't, Skipper relaxed, somewhat, and pressed the play button.
"help me..."
At pressing the button, the penguins was shocked, shocked enough to drop the tape-player. They were shocked, not at the message, but who was saying the message.
It was... Blowhole.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Cliffhanger!!! :D
Okay, guys what do bạn think? Is it good, bad, hoặc should I just give up?
This is my first story, so be nice! :)
Any ideas what would happen next?
Anyways...
Read and review! =^_^=
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