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It turns out that one of bạn lucky readers got the judges correct. I won't say who got it right, but all of bạn get the mô tả along with the tiếp theo chapter YAY! Does this make up for not nghề viết văn for a couple of days? I hope so. Oh BTW: Happy Birthday to Just_bella yesterday on August 27. Hope bạn had fun. ^_^

Jacob turned around and saw me. He automaically smiled and walked towards me.
"Is that bạn Bella?" he asked.
I stood there frozen, not sure what to say. He laughed.
"Yup, she's Bella alright." he laughed.
"What are bạn doing here? I didn't expect to see bạn again until I finish college!" I said, excited to see an old friend.
"My Những người bạn are here before for a little vacation for the weekend. So how's college?" he asked.
"Just here with some friends." I đã đưa ý kiến causually gesturing to Alice.

Alice only glared at Jacob and Jacob was glaring at her. I was about to ask what they were doing but Jacob was faster.
"Er.. it's nice to see bạn again. Please be careful." he warned.
"What-"
"Just please be careful, for everything bạn do." he đã đưa ý kiến and walked out of my sight.
My confusion made me feel frustrated.
"He getting to sound like my mom..." I muttered under my breath while turning to Alice.
"Why were bạn glaring at him like that Alice? That's not nice." I said.

She groaned and looked at me with a serious expression.
"You know him?" she started.
"Jake's my best friend since I was little. I was upset when I had to di chuyển here for college. I would miss him." I said.
"You had him as a friend?" she nearly shreaked.
"What are bạn talking about Alice?" I asked.
"Just eat your pizza, bánh pizza first, I'll explain later." she assured me.
I ate slowly thinking about Alice and Jake. What made them look like enemies? They just met!

I didn't bother to ask again once I was done, because everytime I ask, Alice seem to change the subject hoặc run to a store. I sighed.
"Which top? This?" she đã đưa ý kiến while hiển thị me a babydoll white sweater. "Or this?" hiển thị me a long-sleeved mini-dress.
"I don't care." I simply said.
"You don't have a sense of style at all Bella!" Alice pouted.
"Look, bạn have a better sense of fashion than I do so just pick whatever bạn like." I đã đưa ý kiến while walking out of the clothing store.

"Where are bạn going?" Alice asked.
"I'll be in the electronic store right tiếp theo door. I need to get some batteries for my bàn light." I said.
"Sure thing..." Alice đã đưa ý kiến while walking deeper into the store.
I walked into the electronic store and began looking around. I just lied to Alice so I wouldn't have to be around her and the designing clothings.
Then I passed bởi some other electronics including phones, laptops, cameras, camcorders and much more.

I should get a camcorder I đã đưa ý kiến in my mind. Mom would like to see what I'm up to during college and it'll be fun. I got enough money with me..... when I pulled out my wallet in my bag, I accidentally dropped my phone. I groaned, and apparenly it broke.
"Cheap phone" I muttered under my breath.
As I đã đưa ý kiến that, Alice walked into the store.
"Just saw your phone fall." she explained.
"So why are bạn here?" I asked, a little annoyed.
"I'll get bạn a phone!" she squealed.
"No thanks." I said.
"Come on Bella! I have the perfect phone for bạn to buy."
"Which is?" I said.
"iPhone! Duh! They are soo cool, it's like a small version of a computer." she said.

"Isn't the monthly price expenive? I can't afford it, and the phone itself is over $300. I don't have that type of money." I argued.
"Like I đã đưa ý kiến Bella, don't worry about the money. I'll buy the phone and I'll pay the monthly for you." she đã đưa ý kiến while already asking the employee for an iPhone.
"Alice.." I whined, feeling guilty for her to pay everything.
"Hush Bella. Money is no object when it comes to the Cullen family."
I sighed, knowing I won't win this battle.
Once she paid, we headed back to the car. I admit that using the phone is addicting. Alice already uploaded everything in less than 5 minutes, with her speed and because she already has one for herself.

Once we shut the car doors and Alice started driving back to campus, I asked the câu hỏi that had been eating me alive the whole time.
"Just tell me Alice! Why were bạn two looking at each other so wierd?!?" I said, frustrated.
"You already know that we are vampires...." Alice began.
"JACOB IS A VAMPIRE!?!?!" I yelled.
"Let me finish Bella! Gosh! Jacob is not a vampire, but our mortal enemy along with others his kind."
I gave her a glance, waiting anxiously for her to continue.
"Bella, Jacob is a werewolf."
Then everything turned black.

Jacob: Ok, I'm GLAD that one of bạn did it!!!!

patrisha727: *sighs* Fine, I'll write the desccription....

Jacob: *Makes an evil grin*

patrisha727: *sticks her tounge out and writes*

Jacob Black

Is an old friend of Bella's since preschool. He is now 17 years old. He lives in La Push. He's a werewolf. He has the same features from the Twilight Saga. He is not dangerous werewolf since he learned to control himself since he was first changed (when he was 13 years old). He used to be Bella's boyfriend for about a year, but broke up because Bella had to go to college. (Bella chose to break up). He was somewhat depressed over the bad break up, but is cheered up when he was Bella again at the mall. Oh yeah, he's the alpha in the pack and hold a HUGE grudge against vampires, esprecially against the Cullens. Is somewhat a protector of Bella, and bạn will not know why...... (until the tiếp theo few chapters) ^_^

PLEASE tell me bạn guys are satisfied now!!!!! Ok? Great, now I gotta do some homework.....
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I tình yêu THIS SONG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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It's an old song, but my whole school and I tình yêu it! ^_^
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Thanks for all of the các bình luận so far. I hope bạn guys will enjoy this story, as much as I tình yêu to write it! ^_^

Bella's POV


I woke up to a pair of cold lips on my own, with enthusiasm and impatience. I smiled.
"That's great way to wake up in the morning." I mumbled, opening my eyes slowly. Edward chuckled. "Good Morning, Love."
"Morning, Edward." I đã đưa ý kiến while hopping out of the giường with sudden eagerness.
"May I have a human minute?" I asked Edward.
"Go ahead love."

As I head to the bathroom and got into the shower, I suddenly thought of Tray, Penny, and Drake. They were my Những người bạn from my past life,...
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I DIDN'T WRITE THIS STORY FOR A MONTH!?!?! Ok, that's just... sad. I'm sorry for the long wait. School and writer's block aren't a great combonation. Thanks for being patient and here's your reward for it. PS: Thanks for the help from my writer's block, that was a huge favor for me. :)

Bella's POV

The family came in slowly. I first see the blonde beautiful one, who I assume is Rosalie. Then came along Emmett who had a huge grin on his face. I held back the urge to roll my eyes. Then I see Alice's mate, Jasper along with Edward. The last two couples, who I assume are the parents came in showing...
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Ok here's the tiếp theo chapter :)


Bella's POV


I continued to glare at Edward while the rest of the band besides me did the exact same thing. They were loyal friends, they knew what Edward have done to me. Edward just stood there speechless.

I let out a cold laugh. "Apperently Edward here needs to sit down hoặc something." I said. Everyone turned their attention to me.
"Let me guess, time for 20 questions?" Rebecca asked.
They nodded.

"How were bạn changed Bella?" Carlisle asked. I saw that their was sadness in his eyes. I didn't bother to pay attention.
"Victoria." I sneered.

The whole Cullen family flinched....
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My mind is catonic. I admit it ok? Switched is getting nowhere and I'm stuck on Amore, so my true main stories now are Evening Star, Incarnate, and now Unreal if bạn want it. Please tell me what bạn think.

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This is just a xem trước for your information. I won't actually start the story until I get your feedbacks ^_^


I have never felt so alive. Isabella Swan's life is perfect. But just in one day, it suddenly disappears right in front of my mind. It's catonic! Another life have yet gone to hell. I want an easy life, not a complicated...
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Look, I know some of bạn want Amore. I'm sorry! I'm OFFICIALLY stuck on that story. I gotta think. Plz be patient with me.

Bella's POV


As I walked off the stage for intermission, I heard Love Agony playing their all-time hit. It's actually one of my yêu thích songs of all time...

I watched them play, and I know I had to do a duet on this song as well, with the lead singer, Matt.

Matt came onto the đàn piano that was on the stage and signaled me to come. Sigh. Here we go. I walked onto the stage staring at the ground, trying to not see the Cullens. I heard Matt starting to play on the piano, and soon...
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Alright, there bạn guys have it.


All of your stories are AMAZING! And as I đã đưa ý kiến before, bạn should continue the stories. As a judge, I can't be going personal and make my BFFs have the highest points. So these are the results of the hàng đầu, đầu trang three winners.

Third place cici1264's story Bella's Secret Sister

Second Place Nikkytwilight12's story Renesmee Life

FIRST PLACE _madz_'s story!!!!


All of those who have participated will get a letter of appreciation for EVEN making this contest even happen

I have to thank all of the judges who gave pointers, and gave the final results.

Thanks to the judges:
ashesandwine...
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