What do bạn think of this?

Okay so I wrote a poem a couple of months cách đây but when I came across it today I was like "OMG this so reminds me of Michael" which wasn't what it was about in the first place but it so reminds me of him and it made me cry :'(
So my poem is called "Who Am I" and I just wanted to hear your thoughts on it.
So here it is:

Who Am I?

Who Am I
Don't I have a right to be free
Why do I have to be torn apart just because I'm me
I'm human
I feel and I see
Exactly what bạn do to me

Who Am I
Separated because I'm different
All bạn are is ignorant
I'm strange
That's how bạn treat me bạn don't listen
Many know me but I feel hidden

Who Am I
I'm no different to you
I should stand up to what bạn do
I'm a prisoner
Why do we have to live in vain
bạn make people go insane

Who Am I
I am here asking why
Why so many have to die
I'm invisable
It's like no one hears my voice
It's time for us to make a chose

Who Am I?
I am me
bạn are you
We are we