I'm sorry to bother bạn but...

First of all:Hi!I'm sorry if I'm bothering you,but can bạn read the sequel of my fantaisie and tell me what bạn think,please?So I'll know if I should keep nghề viết văn it hoặc not...And once again sorry it came out so late...:(( I was busy with school and projects!Thank bạn again for listening!