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what do bạn think of this poem?

this is my first so just tell me if it sucks.

every time i look at bạn it makes my want too cry.

every time i look at bạn it makes me want too scream.

every time look at bạn it makes me want too die.

every time i look at bạn it makes me think of bạn and her lastnight.



does it suck should i right more?
 lilred96 posted hơn một năm qua
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LuhPerim said:
xin chào ^^ I read your poem and maaaan ! It's very cool, i mean.. It's a little bit sad, but very cool *-* Pretty good, congratulations ! bạn could make a song with this part . ^^ Well.. bye , good luck !!
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thanks
lilred96 posted hơn một năm qua
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i agree!well done..
lilacool posted hơn một năm qua
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i tình yêu it
loveandpain posted hơn một năm qua
Nicole360 said:
Every time i look at this poem i think hmmmmmmmmm nice poem,ps it didnt suck its a good poem
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yeah,i agree
lilacool posted hơn một năm qua
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kool poem
Lover-666-Emo posted hơn một năm qua
lilacool said:
Ur poem roxx!Well done!
I feel sorry 4 u though cuz the message is clear of wat happened 'last night'...
Luv from ur friend lilacool
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iheartyou said:
i think it's cool, u should write more
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iluvtigers said:
dont be so hard on yourself it pretty good
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babyanime said:
i tình yêu it it make me think what happen to me
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June4 said:
this is really awesome!!!
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teamsalvatore98 said:
i like it!!!

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nan0 said:
it pretty poem listen to this
pain kill me
pain kill my soul
pain kill my heart
pain tình yêu my pain and i going to be in pain
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