Hi, this is my first fanfic, so please bình luận (by the way this is a story about Proteus and Kida)Sorry for my spelling.
"Proteus...PROTEUS wake up man bạn look like your in a coma." đã đưa ý kiến Sinbad trying to wake up Proteus. Proteus finally opens his eyes. "welcome back bro" đã đưa ý kiến Sinbad. "Sinbad...I just had a strange dream." explained Proteus. "HAHA I'll bet it took me SO long to wake bạn up! Soo, what was it about?" asked Sinbad "Well it was...well it was just all a light blue." đã đưa ý kiến Proteus. Sinbad get a weird look on his face. "Anyway, your father needs to see you." đã đưa ý kiến Sinbad changing the subject. "Why?" asked Proteus. "I don't know. bạn know your dad doesn't tell ME anything!" đã đưa ý kiến Sinbad as they go to see Proteus's father. They go into the kings meting room. "Ahhhh, Proteus it's good to see bạn up! I need bạn to do something for me." đã đưa ý kiến the king. "Anything for bạn father. What do bạn need me to do?" asked Proteus "I need to go to Aldonia for a very important meeting. But i also need to go to Atlantis to ask if they would like to tham gia Syracuse. So, bạn will go with Sinbad and ask them for me." The King explained "All right father, but one question, why do bạn want the Atlantians to become part of Syracuse?" asked Proteus "Because they are a small country and I fear that they will try to take over." The King informed his son again. "But why would they try to take over?" asked Sinbad "I hear their king is on the verge of dieing." answered Proteus. "Exactly. So I expect bạn two to be on that thuyền and on your way in an half an hour." đã đưa ý kiến the king. So, half an giờ later, they were on their way to Atlantis.
Hey, this is StarWarsFan7 and I just wanted to say thank bạn to crosslove821 for letting me correct her grammar in her wonderful first chapter of Love is Power. :)
"Proteus...PROTEUS wake up man bạn look like your in a coma." đã đưa ý kiến Sinbad trying to wake up Proteus. Proteus finally opens his eyes. "welcome back bro" đã đưa ý kiến Sinbad. "Sinbad...I just had a strange dream." explained Proteus. "HAHA I'll bet it took me SO long to wake bạn up! Soo, what was it about?" asked Sinbad "Well it was...well it was just all a light blue." đã đưa ý kiến Proteus. Sinbad get a weird look on his face. "Anyway, your father needs to see you." đã đưa ý kiến Sinbad changing the subject. "Why?" asked Proteus. "I don't know. bạn know your dad doesn't tell ME anything!" đã đưa ý kiến Sinbad as they go to see Proteus's father. They go into the kings meting room. "Ahhhh, Proteus it's good to see bạn up! I need bạn to do something for me." đã đưa ý kiến the king. "Anything for bạn father. What do bạn need me to do?" asked Proteus "I need to go to Aldonia for a very important meeting. But i also need to go to Atlantis to ask if they would like to tham gia Syracuse. So, bạn will go with Sinbad and ask them for me." The King explained "All right father, but one question, why do bạn want the Atlantians to become part of Syracuse?" asked Proteus "Because they are a small country and I fear that they will try to take over." The King informed his son again. "But why would they try to take over?" asked Sinbad "I hear their king is on the verge of dieing." answered Proteus. "Exactly. So I expect bạn two to be on that thuyền and on your way in an half an hour." đã đưa ý kiến the king. So, half an giờ later, they were on their way to Atlantis.
Hey, this is StarWarsFan7 and I just wanted to say thank bạn to crosslove821 for letting me correct her grammar in her wonderful first chapter of Love is Power. :)