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Chapter one of When Dexter Met Dexi !!!!!!!!!!!

posted by dex3fan475966

Chap.1 Dexter moves

(right now our old pal Dexter is being dragged bởi his father to GET IN THE DUMB CAR!)

Dexter :ButDAD I don't want to move!if I leave Mandark will destroy my Laboratory!

DAD:Dexter bạn are going and thats final besides from what i hear they're are tons of geniuses where we are going!

MOM: your father's right dear, why from what I heard there is one girl who is so smart she has her own secret labratory just like you!but it's probably just a sillt rumor though....

DeeDee: YA Dexter THIS'LL BE FUN!!!

Dexter:(thinking)WOW another kid with a laboratory!this is perfect!but wait what if MOM is right about this being just a silly rumor.... I DON'T THINK I CARE ANYMORE!!!!!!!

Dexter:WELL BETTER GET A di chuyển ON WE'RE WASTING ngày LIGHT!!!

Meanwhile deep in mandark industries.......

Mandark: So Dexter is finally leaving!NOW I CAN TRULY EXACT MY REVENGE!!!!

Mandroid:your cape MAS-TOR beep

Mandark:thank bạn mandroid bạn may leave now...

Mandroid:But MAS-TOR what if the genius boy's incepid mother is right beep!

Mandark:True,where did they say they were moving to again?

Mandroid:they DID-NOT beep

Mandark:well find out for me would ya!

Mandroid:yes MAS-TOR!

Mandark:(thinking)what if the mandroid is right and there is another genius?I must find out the truth before Dexter find them and the become friends! Dexter is bad enough but two geniuses would cause me to fail in my already impossible mission;(ok now he's talking!)TO BECOME THE GREATEST GENIUS THE WORLD HAS EVER KNOW!!!!

Back in the car...

Dexter: OH BOY I CAN'T WAIT! ARE WE THERE YET, ARE WE THERE YET ?!!!!!

DAD:DEXTER CALM DOWN SON!,we'll be there soon!

DeeDee: bởi the way DAD where exactly are we moiving to?

MOM: We're moving to Ultraville! why from what me and your father heard it's a wonderful place full of people and culture!

Dexter: and Genuises!

MOM:yes dexter,(sigh)and genuises...

somewhere in Ultraville....

Hellen:So Dexi bạn going to the party in townsville tiếp theo week?

Dexi:Can't I have to go see my cousin Mandy in Endsville and her stupid friend Billy.

Hellen:You never get to have any fun do bạn Dexi?

DoDe:Hi,Dexterina!

Dexi:WHAT DO bạn WANT DODE I AM BUSY!!!

DODE:well sorry little sis just saying Hi....

Dexi:BY THE WAY MY NAME IS NOT DEXTERINA IT IS DEXI!!!

DoDe:ya you've told me like fifteen times.

Dexi:JUST GET OUT OF HERE!

(DoDe walks away..)

Hellen:I don't think that was very nice Dexi!

Dexi: YA WELL HE DESERVED IT! THAT'S WHAT bạn GET FOR MESSING WITH DEXTERINA: GIRL GENIUS!!!!!!!!

End of Chap.1

fishypup, Elena1970 and 2 others like this

dex3fan475966 Nevermind!

cassie-1-2-3 This sounds really interesting so far with all the clossovers. Can't wait for the next installment!

woowie :D

rosie23 Mandy had a cousin? Who knew. Good story!

kenzieowns169 I'm really sorry for the following criticism. Dexter's parents shouldn't be aware that he has a laboratory because of the key word: secret. Also, come on. Dexterina? Really? Couldn't be a little more creative on the names? You also never even explained who Hellen was, and lastly, crossovers are just bad. Oh, I almost forgot, fyi, making female characters of already existent characters is not original and it does not make for a good story. sorry for the criticisms, i felt they had to be said.

dex3fan475966 It 's fan fiction sheesh, besides Helen does'nt even come into the story more then once, so who says we need to explain her, and besides, I was gonna name Dexi, Debra, but I just later decided not to, plus if you'd just read more of the story, you'd realize Dexter and Dexi are barely alike, Heck..Dexi's not even human. and I only did the crossover cause I need more then four main characters.I forgive the critism. Oh and I actually agree with the thing about Dexter's parents and his lab. Truth be told, I forgot why I even wrote it that way. if I could rewrite this whole first chapter though I probably would.

dex3fan475966 and I agree Dexterina was a stupid Idea for her name, but really it was good for the orignal story, which was that Dexi was from a Parralel universe. truth be told the girl mandark's name stinks to.