A Devil From No Where

-siean- This Guy ... I Want To Make Him The Coolest ... The Most Special ... Please People I want To Improve Him And His Look Till He Becomes Like Nothing Became Before ... Please Help Me People With Some Advice , Comment , Idea , WhatEver.. he's: 3% Vampire (Left side ) 67% Demon (Right Side) 30% Xrist (His Origin Planet) this Pic is Not Finished , I need Some Tips To Make It More Awesome! His Current Name Is: Nelian Zelogic .. But I'm Trying To Find A Cooler And More Strange Name!

SierraDawnV2 To make him cooler, add a scar or whatever. The name is fine, and I honestly have no real advice, since I don't really... know... you.

silverstream101 wow...i dont c why you'd want 2 change it! it looks awsome!i would love 2 help but you seem to b doing a good job on ur own ^_^

-siean- @ SierraDawnV2 : Hmmm ... Thinking About the scar idea ... I think I'll try to come up with something new from it , but the scar itself seems a kind of .. ya know like an old idea xD because everyone tries to add some coolness by this idea , it works much but I wonna come up with somethin totally new! yeah ya don't know me , but I really wonna know you more ( I'm just not online much! xD ) @ silverstream101 : xD I just wonna improve him more that changing him ! ( whats The difference? Lol I'm Comlex ) I just thought the name is kinda ... not evil as I want it , so I wanted to change the hair to a better look!

MephilesTheDark Pretty cool, but a hybrid of too many things. Tone it down a bit, kk?

-siean- Hmmm ... Too Many Things: He's Not A human , He's Xrist ( another Planet ) Was Just A Normal Guy Till He Had To Look For A Power And Found A Demon Which Has A little Of A Vampire ( Weird Mix Huh? ) He Still Can't Control The Vampire Part And Hates It But Can't Get Rid Of It , So .. This Still Makes Him Hybrid Of too Many Things?

MephilesTheDark Yes, he's still a hybrid of too many things. Hybrids like this are far too overused and are generally annoying.

MephilesTheDark Just because she gets beat up doesn't give her any reason to have six forms. As I said in the comments of your article, it's sugar and spices- Some is nice, too much is really quite shit. But whatever, I don't care about your characters, Tak, I'm only here because of Siean's self-advertising. To Siean, I'd say don't listen to what Tak said because not gaining the weakness of a certain form is just as bad, if not worse, than a hybrid of too many things. If you want to make a good character, then make a good character; powers, forms, abilities... That's all irrelevant. A good character comes from characteristics, not powers.

-siean- @mef: he is basicly has only 2 powers , one is just like a side effect of the other and not used , he becomes a vampire when he hears the word ( vampire ) and quickly tries to control that and stop it , if you count him hybrid of 3 things then sonic is hybrid of 2 things as a mobian , if this one was a human it would be not hybrid of too many things? @Tak: for the look you gave me I can get MUUCH used of it in Demon form it gave me Ideas for it , but I dont wonna put scars , as for the names (your fave)

-siean- @Tak: I want something different , something really new and unique , specially the last name , I might not change the first but the last yes and actually I am with Mef with power thingi , I didnt want to change his power from the beginning because it depends on his story which I spent my life making it and dont wonna change it , besides I want people to say omg he is so attractive! not omg his power can destroy earth! thats why I needed mef , you are really the best to help me! (you have a cool tast of

-siean- @mef: (you have a cool taste of guys xD) and I wanted you to help me changing his face, look , hair, eyes to be better you are really the most helpful in such stuff ( but really ,if you dont want or busy or anything its okey I already wasted much of your time) btw I havent asked you yet , have you passed on a similer guy ? for the look : he generally wears black pants and a black and red jacket , but the shoes T.T are a trouble and I want a cool design for the jacket @Tak : please can you help with name

-siean- I Feel like such advertiser that just talks with shits and does nothing ... T,T

silverstream101 Ok then...i got an idea for the name part if u really want 2 change it...just gow to a traslation thing and look up a work in English then change it 2...like....Latin or something...it looks different and its cool ^_^ and if u want a jacket design i recamend looking at some Ed Hardy designs....u dont have 2 copy them if u dont want 2 but they could b a good idea starter! hmm....i think thats it! if u want any other CERTAIN things changed just let me know! ill b happy 2 help ^_^

MephilesTheDark @Siean: Ah, design, gotcha. I wouldn't go for a completely red jacket (red in large quantities is icky) and if you're going with mainly black, then I'd keep in mind colours that go with red if you want to keep that in his design. So maroons, purples, and if you're making an uber-manly character then hell, you could get away with neon pink. Use colour sparingly if black is the main colour, of course. Keep in mind though- EVERYTHING goes well with black.

Mapware3640 Coolness