Young Justice OC'S!!! Club
tham gia
Fanpop
New Post
Explore Fanpop
Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. bởi no means am I forcing bạn to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless bạn truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before bạn start posting. It can be as little as a bio, hoặc as big as an entire bài viết series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no thêm than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he hoặc she is in, can pull out another trick out of his hoặc her hat.
4. If bạn absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his hoặc her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely ngẫu nhiên and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when bạn have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the tiếp theo ngày you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own hoặc is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the gần đây outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, hoặc claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If bạn must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, hoặc so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if bạn do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot hoặc stabbed in the heart, then pop up phút later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull hoặc flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to hoặc dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to hoặc dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created bởi you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing hoặc potential character is a Mary Sue, hoặc if bạn suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, bạn can take link. If bạn want, bạn can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case bạn were curious, which bạn probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all bạn want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, bởi no means do bạn have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
posted by DiscordYJ
((Idk what I'm doing, but I'm doing something and I'm going with it.))

"Run."

The word was a shotgun blast to a stained glass window that stood tall above the ceremonial hymnals sang below. It was as if the shards rained down and stuck into those holy notes pinning to them to ground like a crucifixion. But here not even God could save them. No power was strong enough to wipe away the blood, sweat, tears, and death that clung to them like the plague--festering and leaking with pain and suffering, hoping to be coddled bởi the affection of someone that would only be killed hours later. Nothing could...
continue reading...
posted by godmor
( yes the tiêu đề is a play of words on the saing, Don't poke the bear.)

The Shepard house 20:00 (8:00 pm).
Twan stood infrond of the frond door, about to pull his keys from his pocet when he heard a group of people running his direction. He tryd to turn around and look who it were.
But as he turn he felt a sharp pain in his back, unable to tun in time the group came closer, as they reached him he felt the same pian al over his back, he recognized it as the feeling of knives plummeting in his back, he tried to ficht them of, he drew his pistol and fired a few shots, He felt his legs becoming weaker,...
continue reading...
posted by godmor
 Tess
Tess
( I I used the same template fore this bio as i dit fore Gun's. I got a few companion cartaters thad i realized i never explaind them, so i micht make bio's fore thim using this same template, let me knowe if bạn guy's would be intrested in đọc thad?)

General

Full Name: Tess Shepard
Reason for name: Afther Twan adopted her, they legally changed her last-name to Shepard.
Nickname: Little girl, Princes, Tessy.
Reason for nickname: The first 2 are niknames Twan uses fore her, depending on the situation he uses them either affectionately ore jokingly, Tessy is a nickname thad Harley Quinn has given...
continue reading...
posted by SilverWings13
The child clenched his jaw and pumped his arms to gain speed. He suddenly changed course so that he was running with the wind and snow at his back rather than against it. But the predator was gaining, closer and closer and closer and the boy had the wind knocked out of him as something lunged and collided with him from behind.
The two tumbled down a slope and came to a stop on the bank of a rushing river. The child tried to get up, but the one who had jumped at him was know pinning him face down. He was unable to di chuyển except to turn his head out of the snow to breath. He tried to cry out for...
continue reading...
posted by SilverWings13
The snow beginning to accumulate on the ground made it harder to pick up his feet, but the boy ran against it as fast as he could. The two guards assigned to him noticed quickly and took off after him. But Michel swept low and collided with them to knock them off their feet. The winged-man rolled on the snow before springing to his toes. Assault rifles fired at him, but Michel raised his wings to shield himself and the bullets ricocheted harmlessly. When the súng were unloaded and clicked to signal a need of thêm bullets, the insurgent took the opportunity to take to the sky again.
The seven-year...
continue reading...
posted by DiscordYJ
((SO this is all taking place after that Deception series I wrote(and never finished but I am nghề viết văn an epilogue to finish it off). Anyway. Like R_L đã đưa ý kiến this was a mutual agreement. Couples break up. It happens. I would like to thank her for being so awesome and calm about it. ily. anyway this is Blade's side))

She paced back and forth in her own apartment. The light outside had disappeared as if giving up on her and leaving her without any support in this decision. The darkness had shrouded the den, not a single light in sight. The curtains had been drawn and all light-switches cut off. She...
continue reading...
posted by SilverWings13
Because screwing with emotions is a hobby of mine... At least this one has some violence. Sorry this is SO long, wanted to bọc it up real good. bạn could just skip to the stuff beneath the ~*~*~*~ at the end, but you'll be hella confused.

Kai was three days old when an assassin came for him and his mother.

Aryess had fallen asleep with him in her arms. It was a habit now- he hardly ever left her arms, and never her sight. Aryess had gotten used to sleeping whenever she could, which meant she slept when Kai slept. That excluded when she had to carry him from plane to train to train, buy food,...
continue reading...
posted by KatRox1
((Found this while browsing my computer… Not sure if I've already đã đăng this… BUT WHATEVS))


She sat slumped at the mahogany desk, elbows propped onto the edge and hands kept together holding a pale picture frame. Her auburn hair was pulled up into a messy bun, and her freckles became even thêm obvious with only the light of a three-wick candle in the corner of the desk. A pained smile was formed on her face, and stained tears to match.

There was a knock at her bedroom door. She quickly and quietly tried shoving the picture into a drawer, but accidently leaving a corner of it sticking out...
continue reading...
posted by khanna266
This is just something I really wanted to write I know It's really random.

"Babe,I'm home!"Jake had just walked inside the apartment that him and Ashton shared throwing his keys onto the coffee table.He then walked into the phòng bếp, nhà bếp and grabbed a bia out of the fridge."Welcome back"Ashton caught him off guard wrapping his arms around him,"How was your day, gorgeous?"he then kissed his neck."It was good,"he smiled pleasurably"and bạn seem to be making it even better"he then opened his drink and took a sip."Good,how about we watch a movie,perhaps we could watch transformers.You seem to tình yêu that...
continue reading...
 Elizabeth Rose West (Flame)
Elizabeth Rose West (Flame)
Meet my OC Flame!

Name: Elizabeth Rose West
Alias: Flame (it's also her nickname that a lot of people call her)
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Personality: Flame is bright, brave, and bold. She has a lot of energy and loves to explore, also likes to have fun.
History: Her parents disappeared when she was younger and took care of herself until Wally found her and took her into his family and made her his foster sister.
Description: She has brown hair that is usually kept in a braid. Flame prefers her hair to be loose. Her eyes are green (the Phoenix she took care of had green eyes)
Power: is the fairy of the ngọn lửa, chữa cháy phoenix
Other: Best Những người bạn with Robin, she owns a pet rùa, con rùa named Star. Flame sometimes gets herself into trouble if she doesn't listen to orders được trao to her. She met Robin on the ngày that the team formed. The two became close friends.
posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Isaac Rizutto

Alias: none other than the name he has gotten from others which is the "guardian of the night"

Age: 18

Relationship Status: Single.

Personality: A little irrational and stubborn, he doesn't listen to others and often thinks of himself thêm without the consenquences of what it will do to others. he is a little bratty due to his past.

Appearance: black quiffed hair, eyes that from a far look like a dark brown, but if bạn look close enough are dark like không gian itself with almost undectectable specks of lighter màu sắc that (white hoặc very light brown/white) di chuyển like stars moving in...
continue reading...
posted by GlitterPuff
1994
7 yrs old
September

It was the first ngày of her new school. Her fifth school in the past two years. Kindergarten she had gone to two different schools and same in first grade. Mom promised they'd be staying here for as long as possible, but she was doubtful. But also, maybe she’d be able to make some friends. Also doubtful. But hey, this was Gotham. Anything could happen. Anything usually happened here anyways. Even for her age, she was quite intelligent. Higher English than most kids her age, that made it much harder to talk to them since they usually they didn’t understand a word she...
continue reading...
posted by Robin_Love
 Her Royal Highness
Her Royal Highness
Please post a response to your character(s) đọc this. Might become a story. thêm than likely will just stay a one shot. But I might get inspired bởi some responses.


You are hereby required and invited to attend her royal Highness,
Princess Rebecca Uccello Alvers' grand ball.
In honor of her royal birth ngày of eighteen years.

Arrangements have been made in honor of your arrival.
An escort is ready to welcome bạn
to our kingdom. As our honored guests, bạn are permitted,
but not required, to bring one guest.

In high hopes and regards, with sincerest wishes, we hope bạn will attend.

Her Imperial Highness,
Queen Minerva Alvers.
 Princess Rebecca Uccello Alvers
Princess Rebecca Uccello Alvers
posted by BladeYJ
((I'm here to apologize...I should give up on this since the last time I đã đăng was over three months ago...But I can't I need to finish for the sake of Blade and the fact that is change her as an OC, so I'm giving a brief summary for those who haven't read hoặc don't remember from the other parts. BASICALLY Blade wakes up. Has memory. Goes to find terror and get away from rapey Damian. Finds out terror is "with" a girl..and goes back to Damian. He basically makes her forget who she is bởi shooting her up like some drugs btw those who haven't realized she's also missing her left eye, that's YOUR...
continue reading...
posted by MidnightMadness
 Lady Ellissa of Cambridge
Lady Ellissa of Cambridge
This is my first thing. I hope bạn guys like it :S
Used a mix of information from different things.



Name: Lady Ellissa of Cambridge (Ella)
Alias: Kalika
Powers: When she touches a person, she puts them in a death-like coma, stealing memories and sometimes powers, skills, hoặc character traits.
Occupation: Mercenary
Age: Unknown



Name: Donna Rose Tyler
Alias: Kalika
Powers: She has none, but has trained in karate.
Occupation: Hero
Age: 15
History:
Donna was only a regular girl. She was trained in the ways of karate and gymnastics since she was little. Her father raised her on his own, her mother having died...
continue reading...
posted by BladeYJ
 Based off these lovely beasts
Based off these lovely beasts
The Four Daughters of the Apocalypse

Death
Name: Travesty
Age: No one knows
Hair: Black
Eyes: Eccentric Blue
Height: 5'11"
Relations: Oldest of the four sisters
Costume: A maroon dress that matches her blindfold.
Weapon Choice: She's in charge of killing one's who deserve to be punished hoặc meet their end--the least evil of the four.
Personality: She's quiet, serious, stoic, and has not mercy
Weakness': Birth/Life
Background: Unknown

War
Name: Alayla
Age: No one knows
Hair: Long and Red and Black
Eyes: Ruby red
Height: 6'0"
Relations: She's the một giây oldest of the four
Costume: A black and red dress,...
continue reading...
posted by KatRox1
*unfolds paper* “What character from ANY book/movie/show would bạn bring to life if bạn could? One only!”

Only one? *twirls hair* Well, that sucks, because all the people I would take out of stories wouldn’t be the same without their partner-in-crime. ‘Ya know? Batman’s not the same without Robin, ketchup isn’t the same without mustard.
*laughs* Yeah, but… Um… I don’t really know now. I’m trying to think of that one girl from that book- her boyfriend was killed and then she can communicate with his ghost… *blinks and sighs* I probably just named 30% of all teenage girl books....
continue reading...
posted by Robin_Love
 Lorelei, the River Queen
Lorelei, the River Queen
Took the Lời khuyên given. And I did need one so...here bạn go.

[url]link[/url]

Name: Lorelei
Alias: None
Powers: Hypnotics and water
Occupation: Villain
Weakness/Limits: Unknown
History: She is the embodiment of water, the ancient goddess of the Rhine river and the seas. She is The Lorelei. In German myth, Lorelei was đã đưa ý kiến to be a strikingly beautiful distressed maiden with locks of vàng who sat upon the rock awaiting the return of her lover. Her unfaithful lover never returned, so she threw herself off of a cliff headfirst into the water, leading her to death. According to the legend, Lorelei’s spirit...
continue reading...
posted by khanna266
Klei was outside in the rain walking around listening to her music.She had a really rough day. First she was late for school and got detention for the first time ever.Then her and August got into a fight.Then Elliot didn't answer her calls,and just to hàng đầu, đầu trang it all off her sister was on her honeymoon in Paris so she missed her badly."Why did this have to happen to me?"she thought aloud,she wished that the ngày could just end.She then found a really nice cây and sat under it.She kept wishing her sister was here to comfort her like she usually would."I really really miss Ari"she cried and cried...
continue reading...
posted by khanna266
Ashton had just finished training,and so he decided to try to talk to a few people."Hey Jaime and Ari congratulations on your engagement,"he congratulated them,"Thank you!"they thanked him.He then passed bởi Elliot,"Hey Elliot I heard bạn might be getting a recording contract!"He đã đưa ý kiến with excitement,"Yep!I really hope I get it!"Elliot replied back.Then he saw NightWing,"Hey mate how bạn doing?"he asked,"i'm doing fine thanks"he replied and thanked him. Ashton then left the room and went to the kitchen.He opened the fridge,and got a carrot and started walking around eating the carrot.Then out...
continue reading...