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Okay don't be hating on me for this, I'm not trying to start a fight. I just think that we'd all be better off if we at least read these and thought about them, even if just for a second. I'm gonna say this right now: these are not cut-and-dry rules. bởi no means am I forcing bạn to follow them, and there will be exceptions. These are just suggestions, on how to make your OCs well liked and better off. So, with that being said, in no particular order, here are 15 suggestions for making good OCs.
1. Ask yourself if making a new OC is really necessary.. Don't contribute to the overcrowding unless bạn truly believe that the club will be improved with the addition of this character. It helps if the new character has some relation to one of your existing characters, but it's not necessary.
2. Write something about them before bạn start posting. It can be as little as a bio, hoặc as big as an entire bài viết series, but whatever the case, your character will generally be better recieved if we feel like we know them a little bit first.
3. Don't go overboard with the powers. I'd say no thêm than 5 distinct powers, otherwise it gets to be overwhelming and annoying if your character can do everything. No one likes the character that, whatever situation he hoặc she is in, can pull out another trick out of his hoặc her hat.
4. If bạn absolutely must give your character tons of powers, then give them 1 to 3 "favorite powers". It's much less annoying if your character usually only uses a couple of his hoặc her powers, as opposed to all 20.
5. Make their powers related. It drives people nuts when your character has thirty different powers that are completely ngẫu nhiên and unrelated to each other. They should be logically connected. For example, my OC Jackson (Thunderblade). His main power is communication with metal, and his other two powers, swordfighting and magnetism, logically stem from that.
6. Hero names should have some relation to them and/or their powers. There are exceptions, but still. It's confusing when bạn have, say, BlackCat whose powers are flight and telepathy. It just doesn't make sense.
7. Try not to copy others directly.. Yes, yes, I know, imitation is the highest form of flattery, but no one likes a deliberate copycat. That seems to be a trend with this group. One character gets pregnant, and the tiếp theo ngày you've got 3 other OCs that are preggo. One person creates a child that has some relation to their OC, and before we know it, the cave has turned into a daycare center.
8. Appearance and pets should, again, be related to their powers. Pets can be great when they are a familiar, that either has powers of its own hoặc is linked to the character. And my biggest example of the appearance thing is the gần đây outcropping of characters with cat ears and sometimes tails. Those are fine when they're actually related to their powers (if they have catlike senses, for example, hoặc claws) but it's just annoying when they're completely unrelated.
9. Don't kill your character without a good reason. If bạn must kill your character, at least do it dramatically! And give a reason for why they must die! Don't just do it for attention, hoặc so that your other characters have a reason to moan and be depressed.
10. Don't reincarnate your character unless necessary and justified. Which it usually isn't. But there are exceptions. And if bạn do provide a good reason, at least make it a process that takes up time. For example, when Fin was killed, it was logical that she would be reincarnated, since she was part phoenix. And it didn't happen overnight. It took a couple months for her to come back.
11. Don't make your character completely invincible. Your character can have limited invulnerability, kind of like Superman, but they can't be completely resistant to death and damage. Make it realistic, people! Even superheroes couldn't get shot hoặc stabbed in the heart, then pop up phút later completely fine, like nothing had happened.
12. Give your character a unique personality. Put simply, don't make them dull hoặc flat. This goes back to the idea that a new OC should be making some sort of contribution to the group. It's a lot better if their personality affects the others in some way.
13. Give your character some weaknesses and/or flaws. Preferably both of them. That's all I can say.
14. Be careful if making your character related to hoặc dating a canon character.. Make sure that it's realistic and not annoying. Same goes with if they're related to hoặc dating another OC, especially if that OC was not created bởi you.
15. Make sure your character isn't a Mary Sue. No one likes a Mary Sue. link Mary Sues are honestly, just plain annoying. I'm not saying that if your existing character has some elements of "Sue-ism" that they're bad and need to be changed, but try to keep it in mind for new characters. If your not sure if your existing hoặc potential character is a Mary Sue, hoặc if bạn suspect he/she is, but don't know how to change it, bạn can take link. If bạn want, bạn can post the results here (Aisling got a 19, in case bạn were curious, which bạn probably weren't...).
So, that's all I have for now. Rage on me all bạn want, but just know that I don't care. Once again, bởi no means do bạn have to follow these. They aren't rules, merely a few suggestions.
For now,
AislingYJ :)
25 Ways to Survive your First Encounter with Red Revenge (Alive, that is)


1: Do NOT call him Samy, Sam, Dude, Bro, etc. Call him "Red Revenge" hoặc "Sir" (Double R is fine too.)

2: Don't make fun of the cape.

3: Don't make snide các bình luận about losers who don't have superpowers. (Last I checked, the guy is still in ICU)

4: Don't make remarks about him diễn xuất like Batman. (You'll wish bạn were in ICU)

5: Don't mention the word "revenge" and "unnecessary" in the same sentence.

6: Don't make snide remarks about rich brats who buy friends.

7: Don't insult Holly.

8: Don't ask why he's partnered with a bunch...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
Kenzie freaks out when Robin tells her that she's going to go insane if she stays with Brennan for too much longer. She watches the fight begin as Brennan picks her up and tightens his grip on her. Screaming, she accidentally freezes time. She then asks for an explanation from Robin, who tells her Fin's real story and who Kenzie was. Kenzie gets really upset bởi this and time is unfrozen, but no one actually notices. Chelsea gets the upper hand and attacks everyone.

OOC: FINAL INSTALLMENT FRIDAY!!! 'bout damn time too...
HOLA!!!

So recently I have joined a new Young Justice Roleplay group and we need thêm people to join! It's CANON ONLY! NO OCs. I know how much bạn guys tình yêu your OCs but we need people. So heres some info about the group. (At the end I will give all đường dẫn cuz bạn need to read this IMPORTANT info on the group :D)

~It's on Tumblr- bạn must have a tumblr account to apply. Then bạn must make a separate account for the character

~We follow the show- Everything that's happened in the hiển thị we work off. It's based off the INVASION. So we have all new characters and all the old team members are all...
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posted by FangYJ
Eh, it's okay..Sorry it's so short.

I twirled the rose between thumb and index finger, and looked up letting the winds breeze through my shaggy black hair. I heard a flutter of wings behind me and gripped my hands onto the rail to ease the nervousness inside me. I kept one hand on the rail and swiveled around to face Devin, she looked at me with her blue eyes, as they stood out from the surrounding darkness on hàng đầu, đầu trang of the Eiffel Tower in Paris. I hid the rose behind my back as Devin looked at me curiously, "Whatcha got there?" she said, tilting her head up attempting to see around me. "Nothing,...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
These took me 2 weeks to finally finish -_- Gyah.
Name: Blair Wayne
Alias: Luna
Age: 17
Occupation: Hero
Relation to team: Bruce Wayne’s daughter
Powers: Blair is able to control all elements of the earth including “Air, water, fire, and earth “along with light, hand-to-hand combat, acrobatics
Past: Blair also knew her father was a Vigilante. Especially when he left one night, and didn’t come back until the tiếp theo week with broken ribs and scratches. She followed him one night, realizing her father was Batman, and that herself had gained powers
Notes: -Blair has a twin brother named Brett
-Her...
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posted by Robin_Love
She was running along the street, a blur to all. She did a few tricks over cars, going too fast for any one to appreciate them. She laughed, enjoying her fun. She skidded to a stop when she saw a blonde haired boy in a black trench áo, áo khoác running away. She looked at him for a minute. Why was he running? She raced towards him.
“Hey softie!” she yelled teasingly.
The boy stopped, turning to her. He scowled.
“Shut up Erin!”
She stopped in front of him.
“Awww! C'mon Terror! I was just playing!”
“I don't give a care. Leave me alone!”
Terror turned to leave, but Erin grabbed his wrist. A...
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posted by Robin_Love
Only one thing to say this time. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA!!!!!




“I've heard a few things. Whispers of conversations. But bạn apparently had some kind of fall in with Bloodmist.”
Becca blinked.
“Why would I? I don't mind him being anywhere close to the team.”
“I know. That's why I'm confused.”
Becca nodded. She looked at her Angel friend.
“Devin, what have bạn experienced?”
“Becca, what I say tiếp theo can not be repeated.”
“I promise.”

“I feel bad for lying to him, Becca. But...I felt like I had to protect him.”
“From what Dev?”
“Myself. I don't know why but I felt this voice...
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posted by Scarlet_YJ
 Scarlet's new civvies
Scarlet's new civvies
Name: Scarlet Adenfeld
Alias: Ember
Age: 16
Power: witch who can control ngọn lửa, chữa cháy and uses magic

Alliance: for right now I don't even care the line between villian and hero is basically non-existant so call her whatever bạn want

Appearance: long trái cam, màu da cam hair (now tied up in either a ponytail hoặc pigtails), brown eyes, 5 ft. 8"

Personality: Calm, hot-tempered, withdrawn, loner(ish), serious, loud, trust issues (I might have mentioned this before but her trust issues have gotten worse), friendly, brave, strong (I mean emotionally strong), courageous

History: the only thing that's changed is that her father killed her evil grandmother then her father was murdered.

Other: Scarlet iherited her mother's immortal hunter gun called "Fire Crossing", she has some expierience in martial arts, and she has a dog familiar named Cole
 Scarlet's new mission outfit
Scarlet's new mission outfit
posted by Robin_Love
 Trevor-day
Trevor-day
I KNOW I make alot, but I tình yêu them all so much!!!


Name: Trevor Wright
Alias: Secret
Occupation: Hero
Powers: Trevor posses different powers at different times of day. Day-strength, light, fire, wind. Night-speed, shadows, darkness, water. Trevor is also a master spy and trained extensively in combat. He has never been detected and has endurance that lasts twenty-four hours. Trevor loves to use a gun in the ngày and a sword at night.
History: Trevor was raised on the streets of London, England. He is, as far as he knows, an orphan. His powers manifest from his X-gene. He was taken in bởi a sly shape-shifter,...
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posted by Mclovin_69
 Bentley
Bentley
He sliced at a dummy with his sword making it fall apart and heard a little noise behind him and loooked from the corner of his eyes to see two attackers coming at him from both sides, he backflipped out of the way and took out his small daggers throwing them at the incoming dummies and made them fall apart aswell, he landed on his feet swiftly at ease and stood in a ready position with his regular sized sword breathing heavily with sweat running down his forehead, he heard clapping behind him and flipped his sword back into his side pouch and turned around smiling. The man who approached him...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
25 ways to piss off Fang.

1). Poke him and continuously and ask if he’s goth

2) Poke him between the wings then run away screaming “I TOUCHED A GOTH KID!

3.) Dye his hair màu hồng, hồng while he’s asleep.

4.) Lock him in a room with bright màu hồng, hồng walls. (And a barf bag)

5.) Take a toy dao, con dao and ask Fang if he’s Mất tích his.

6.) Tell Fang that bạn tình yêu him.

7.) Hack into his blog and change his status
update too “I tình yêu Hannah Montana.”

8.) Touch his hair (only Devin can)

9.) Give him McDonald’s chicken nuggets and tell him he’s eating his mom.

10.) When Fang appears kick his shins and say bạn didn’t...
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OOC: This is a re-pub of my very first story, Expectations. So basically, this happens before Fin is dead (that’s why Fin is in this. duh.) and it takes place right when Aisling joins the Team. So yeah. God, it was so long cách đây that I wrote this! Well anyway, here it is..
I don't remember the ngày I found the Team. Those memories--all memories of my past--are gone, corrupted and removed; but thêm on that later. I only know now what they told me, but from what I've heard, I picture myself as a kitten. A lost, scrawny, water-sodden kitten, that somehow dragged itself--myself--onto the doorstep...
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posted by XxKFforeverXx
Iraq
5 years later
"Soldiers! bạn are not in combat training anymore! Welcome to the real war, the real thing. We have some returning veterans to the battlefield." The commander turned and held out his hand to point at Derek. "Soldier Adams, thank bạn for returning to battle. Your assistance is much needed" Derek nodded once and shifted his sniper rifle. Soldiers starting running and grabbing súng and ammo as the threat of a bomb filled the air from the radios. "ADAMS! Get to higher ground, use that sniper to take enemy targets down." Derek nodded and grabbed ammo and running out of the tent,...
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posted by Kenzie_KarmaYJ
After the large round of laughter and ironic applause, not to mention Robin nearly fearing for his life, the team looked over to Delta for an explanation, although someone had an inclination on what it might be about.
Batman, who had since dried himself off and calmed down, picked up Kenzie, looking very innocent, making Người dơi himself look innocent in a very scary way. Delta sighed and picked up the wilted rose, twirling its stem between her fingers.
“I’m not sure exactly how to explain this,” she began. “But I know this is Fin, I can feel it. I used to...” She gave a half-hearted...
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posted by Red_HoodYJ
My name is Red Hood. And here's a little information on me:

Gender: female

Alter Ego: Aeronwen Todd

Nickname(s): Red, Aeron, Aero (prefers Aeronwen)

Age:17

Known Locations: Gotham City, Blüdhaven

Personality: smart-ass, sarcastic, sly, intelligent, hot-tempered

Appearance: Black hair, green eyes, 5'10, 127 lbs

Civvies: black elbow sleeve thuyền neck shirt, black loose jeans, belt

Powers: trained bởi Red mui xe to use firearms, knives and multiple other weapons, higher resistance to injury then the average human, perfect aim/never misses unless purposely

Weakness: thêm untrusting then Batman, proud,

Story:...
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posted by Skittles98
I landed near the Brother Hood’s building. I walked in, walking up the stairs. I threw open the doors. Blob was sitting on the couch, Toad on his head, Avalanche was sitting in an arm chair watching ti vi and Quicksilver was playing pool.
“Domino, didn’t expect to see bạn here again“Quicksilver stated
“Domino couldn’t make it, sorry. She sent me instead” I snarled, charging a card. I threw it on the billiards bàn and it exploded in Pietro’s face. I glared at him.
“You three-“ I gestured to Toad, Blob and Avalanche “-scram. I have some business with Quicksilver”...
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posted by Skittles98
“Wait, he’s your dad?” Wally finally managed
“Yes” I nodded
“And bạn were hugging him because…?” Robin asked
“None of your beeswax!” I snarled
“Woah…touchy” he muttered
“I’ll hiển thị bạn touchy mister ‘I’m so cool and awesome because Batman’s my mentor’” I muttered under my breath.
“Why didn’t bạn tell us?” Wolverine asked
“Because it didn’t concern you. My family concerns Me, Kurt, Laurna, Laura, Wanda and Gambit. No one else” I growled
“Why does it concern them?” Aqualad asked
“Because they’re the closest the to family I have, aside from Gambit”...
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posted by Skittles98
The smoke cleared to reveal the X-men standing there, untying Wanda, Laurna and Eclipse. Young Justice and Người dơi were all encased in ice, courtesy of Iceman. Laurna angrily stood. The floor around my ex-team fell away.
“You’d better explain why bạn attacked my trang chủ and tried to take my guest” she growled
“We want our friend back” Wally said
“So bạn attack her?” Wanda exclaimed, her fists glowing red.
“Yeah, babe” Wally grinned, looking Wanda up and down. Kurt’s tail twitched.
“Megan, bạn like making people happy right?” I asked
“Yeah” she nodded
“Then why do bạn wish...
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posted by BladeYJ
((I đã đưa ý kiến these were going to get shorter...I lied....<3 sorry<3333))

The punching bag swung back and flew phía trước, chuyển tiếp only to be sent back again as I caught it with a hard kick. "Again," was the command that came from the form behind me. Normally, I'd just tell him to get off of it hoặc leave me alone, but the fact that this man had one hundred years of experience, was a vampire, and could easily rip me apart, pushed me to hike my foot back and slam it as hard as I could into the bag of sand. I heard the chain creak in agony as its limits were tested. "Good, again," Damian muttered, pulling...
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posted by Mclovin_69
Name: Elizibeth Tumin (Liz) (Lizbeth)

Alias: unknown.

Age: 14 (would be 18 now)

Appearance: long blonde hair and brown eyes, hair usually worn in braid hoặc up (ponytail, bun)

Personality: she was stubborn and always thought she could do things on her own. she was Công chúa tóc xù on the outside but was scared but never let anyone see it. She was never the one to smile so easily and be at ease. And she was never someone who Mất tích without a fight.

Powers/Abilities: she doesn't have any powers but combat and sword skills.

Weapons: a single sword.

Past: died in a break out gone wrong.

Others: she wasn't someone to let people into her life. But she cared if someone were sad hoặc upset.