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posted by egyptprincess7
So this is my first story that I made in quite a while. So enjoy! Feel free to give me any hints on how to make it better.

    “Come on Alice! Wake up, you’re going to be late for school!” Mary, my older sister, yelled. She’s in charge of having to wake me up for school. I feel really sorry for her half the time but then again she gets to wake up earlier than me. I looked over to the door and there she still stood, her face red like a tomato. “I’m up! I’m up! Man, why do bạn always have to be so loud in the morning?” I whined, annoyed that she woke me up from a fabulous dream.

    I guess I should introduce myself huh? My name is Alice Knight and I am a junior in high school. I’m 17 years old! My sister, Mary is turning 19 in a week. She thinks she is better than me because I happen to be in high school still. But despite her arrogance she really is a kind sister. Back in middle school I was ruthlessly bullied bởi a group of girls who hated me for no reason. My sister would always run to my aid no matter what.

    “Alice hurry up already! bạn only have 10 phút before bạn are late! Get up!!” I heard my sister yell again. I hurriedly get up and run into the bathroom, brushing my teeth while brushing my hair with the other hand. ‘I’m going to be late! Ugh why didn’t she wake me up sooner!?’ I think as I put on my school uniform and grab my bag. Mary is standing tiếp theo to the door holding a piece of bánh mì nướng with bơ on it and I rush to grab it after putting on my shoes and with a quick “See bạn later!” I am off to my school.

    I finally see the huge blue building of the school and I start running faster after noticing the clock telling me that I only have 5 phút to get to class. Just as I arrive into class the chuông, bell rings and thankfully my ghế, chỗ ngồi is the closest one to the door. “You were almost late again weren’t you, Alice?” My friend, Sarah says during lunch. “Yeah…Mary purposely wakes me up late I swear.” I mutter with my hand on my chin. I never eat during lunch, bạn see my family can’t afford to get me any of the thực phẩm here. Me and Mary had to either pack one hoặc not eat at all. Not fair!

    My stomach picks the worst time to grumble and I blush looking embarrassed. “Here Alice, we can share.” says Sarah while holding up her lunch. I’ve never been thêm blessed than becoming Những người bạn with her. Her name is Sarah Archer. She’s the same age as me and we’ve been Những người bạn since middle school.

    “I don’t want to take away your chance to eat Sarah. I’ll be fine when I get home. Honest!” I say trying my best to stop her from offering me any. As much as I would tình yêu to eat she still needs to eat too. “Jeez you’re always so stubborn. Come on please? Just eat some of my cơm, gạo okay?” she insists. Ugh I can’t resist her when she insists like that. “Fine! I’ll eat SOME of your rice.” I need to build up my defense against her. Sarah has this way of making bạn listen to what she wants. Quite cunning for a sweet girl.

    Soon the chuông, bell rings to dismiss us, I for one am glad. I cannot stand school. Sarah on the other hand loves it. Nothing makes her happier than discussing her yêu thích lessons. Seeing her smile is a joy I always tình yêu witnessing. Now for my yêu thích part of the day, going trang chủ and doing absolutely nothing but playing video games.

    “I’m home” I say as I step inside the house and take off my shoes. “Welcome trang chủ honey” I hear my mom say as I pass the kitchen. Yum! She’s making my yêu thích thực phẩm ever today. Opening the door to my bedroom I leap into my bed. ‘I’m trang chủ sweet bed!’ I think as I cuddle with my pillow. “Alice honey? Wake up, it’s time for dinner.” I hear a soft voice say as they gently shake me. Groaning I open my eyes to see mom standing above me. “Okay mom..” I get up off the giường and stretch before joining my family downstairs.
Disclaimer: *I'm only on Season 3 Episode 16 & I have not read the books!*

The Vampire Diaries is my guilty pleasure. It's painfully corny, overly cliche and not to mention has some less than perfect diễn xuất but for some reason; I'm addicted. I have all this pent up frustration about the situation between the three main characters so I've finally broke down and decided I need to talk about it. This is a little overview as to how I feel about each character.

Let's start with Elena:

I can't stand Elena, no matter how hard I try, I just can't. I have sympathy for her because she has suffered...
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The lingering light was obliterated bởi the rapidly falling night. The once cá hồi and purple sky transformed into a vast expanse of jet-black that engulfed the town. A canopy of luminous stars materialized amongst the ocean of blackness. Some were dull, merely flickering into existence every now and then, but there was an adequate amount of shimmering stars to illuminate the dark, moonless night. The lake glistened, mirroring the dazzling assemblage of glittering stars and the luminescence from the moon. The faint wind brushed against the water's surface, the ripples ruffled the stillness of...
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posted by CupcakeMal714
I read this and had to pass it on.
my name is sarah
i am three
my eyes are swollen
i cannot see
i must be stupid
i must be bad
what else could have made
my daddy so mad
i wish i were better
i wish i werent ugly
then maybe my mommy
would still wanna hug me
i cant do a wrong
i can't speak at all
or else i locked up
all ngày long
when i wake up
im all alone
the house is dark
my folks arent home
when my mommy does come home
i try to be nice
so maybe i'll just get
one wipping tonight
i just heard a car
my daddy is back
from charlie's bar
i heard him curse
my name is called
i press myself
against the wall
i try to hide
from his evil...
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posted by MagicalMadness
I've always wanted to be a mermaid! I recently found this spell and I've already got some of the side effects! I know that not all spells work for everybody but I hope this one works for you;)
First the side effects: (are some of the side effects I got)
-dizziness
-headache
-itchy legs and back
-singing a lot
-crossing legs a lot

What bạn will need:
-cup/bowl
-water(warm hoặc cold doesn't matter)
-salt
-tea spoon
-belief that the spell will work
-10 pm-11
-a symbol (necklace, bracelet)

What bạn need to do:
1.fill the cup/bowl halfway with water
2.put a trà spoon of salt into the water and stir
3.drop your...
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A Screenwriting Dialogue Master Class & thêm - Full Interview with William C. Martell at Story Expo via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by hgfan5602
When will this end?
Mass shootings
Terrorist attacks
Police brutality

They say it's just a gun control problem
They say it cannot be fixed
I say the problem is deeper
I say there is hope

When will this end?
Income inequality
Veterans living on the streets, penniless,
Dying bởi their own hands everyday.

They say this world can change for the better
But nothing has changed...
And I truly do fear
Nothing ever will

When will tình yêu start?
The ngày we offer a hand to the fallen
Instead of cringing back in shock
And running away

When will our world change?
The ngày we tình yêu too much to kill
The ngày others' pain is our pain
The ngày we act instead of just talking about it

"It's impossible"
"We're too broken to be mended"
"It's a hopeless battle"
I say, let us try.
Remember to please post feedback in the comments!


The ngày bạn Slipped Away: Middle
    I do not know what caused me to do it. I stood with my son in my arms, holding his head to my chest as embers flew and people scurried to put out the ngọn lửa, chữa cháy I caused. I had lit Euphoria’s house on fire. No one needed it anymore, for I was taking Thomas to Yun Gong and Euphoria was… Well, bạn know. I watch embers float bởi and one lands of my pale cheek, burning it ever so slightly. It was only thêm pain to feel. Thomas was     shaking as if he was cold, though the...
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posted by jedigirl
"Caleb? How? What are? Your a dimension jumper?" I ask, finally able to complete a sentence.
"Yeah I am. How are bạn even here? Your not suppose to know yet," He stares at me.
"Same as bạn apparently. Dimension jumping?" I guess.
"Yeah, I got that, but how are bạn even in here. No one jumps in hoặc out of here. bạn have to be brought."
"So I've been told." I say. He looks at me. "And what do bạn mean I'm not suppose to know?" I eye him accusingly. He looks guilty, like he just gave away a secret.
"You weren't supposed to know I can jump until later. Like Two years from now. When bạn found out you...
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posted by jedigirl
I pull up to our house with dad right behind me. He rushes me into the house like we're being followed.
"Don't worry Kodi. We'll fix this," He tells me.
"I don't want this fixed Dad! I want answers. I'm tried of lying to myself. Telling myself that they're just daydreams, when clearly they're not! Don't keep me ignorant anymore. Please," I plead. For years I had been complacent about his silence, but not anymore, because now I have information and I will use it.
"Sweetheart, bạn not knowing is the safest place to be right now. Until bạn have full control."
"Control of what Dad? I can't control...
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         Chapter one: unexpected things
“This is so much fun!” Alia screamed with excitement. Alia was flying over the greenest forest she ever seen! It was bigger than her families’ garden. (Alia’s family had a gigantic garden, and a lot of money to purchase plants) She wisped through the green trees feeling the refreshing air flow through her long brown wavy hair, making it a humongous mess. She saw something, a shadowy figure. “What’s that, who are you” Alia yelled. The small shadowy thing came closer. It didn’t reply. “Hello?”...
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posted by Abyssail
A shapeless void. Interrupted only bởi the occasional shooting star. Every now and then bạn can see colour flare into existence but as soon as bạn notice it, it vanishes and the void returns. Sparks. Vessels. Charges and Impulses. Back and forth and back and forth across the void. Basic, baseless functions repeated to death and beyond. The system is all they know, all they're aware of. Incapable of comprehending the couture of convalescence conveyed about their crafted construction. Barricades exist, of course. Occasionally one of the roads will shut down and the vessels will be stuck in a “traffic...
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This is just the first 2 chapters; I don't know what I'm going to do with it much, but I want to get opinions on what I have so far. Thank you.

"How much longer?" Rena whined, her head on her desk. Her voice was just a raspy whisper, quiet enough to not draw the attention of Frau Abendroth, our study hall supervisor and Rena's German teacher. I looked at my cellphone.

"Three thêm minutes," I whispered.

"Kill me," she muttered.

"Halt deine verdammte Mündung," Frau Abendroth grumbled from her desk, not taking her eyes away from the magazine she was reading. Rena looked up and glared at her. I held...
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posted by gerybarzaka
Hello! This is my first post on this page, but I wanted to share a short story I wrote. I hope bạn like it!


They say that when bạn hit the bottom there is nowhere to go but up. I didn’t believe that. I was standing on solid rock and no one could convince me that it gets better. My dream of becoming a writer was shattered into little pieces. My tim, trái tim with it. I Mất tích everything. I could barely make enough money to eat, let alone pay my rent. There was no passion in my life. My grandfather had left me everything he had and I wasted it. All of it. I was living in a lousy one room apartment. All...
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posted by E-Scope90
Okay, this is my oversized story. I just really hope bạn enjoy. I originally đã đăng this last year, but for some reason, it got deleted. So I'm re-posting it. Enjoy.

The Streets of Manhattan
9:36 AM
I was running away. Running away from it all. I just couldn't stand it anymore. All the abuse, the fights....I couldn't take it.

I was literally running away from these guys. They were trying to rape me. They were chasing me with actual knives. I knew I wasn't going to survive. I was running in heels...I wasn't going to live. I wasn't going to live!

"Get away from me, bạn ra-"
I tripped onto the streets....
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posted by misscrazel
If I put: **** it means they đã đưa ý kiến a cuss word I don't feel comfortable writing.




Brianna was running through the woods, branches whipping her face. She glanced behind her. A young woman with long black hair was pursuing her. She shot an Mũi tên xanh at the woman but she dodged and it flew right passed her. The woman grabbed her hair and pulled her closer.

"You can't get away can bạn Blondie?" she asked. her breath stank of cá and blood.

Brianna struggled to get away.

"Your a tough one aren't you?" she asked, "Well I'll spare your mother if bạn stop it."

"I don't believe you," đã đưa ý kiến Brianna.

"Well than,"...
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posted by JellyPopper
WARNING MAY BE INNAPROPRIATE FOR KIDS UNDER 10 don't worry not real :P Chance Manner was a college student who was sent to an asylum for attempting to bite a mans leg off after using basalts without anyone knowing he took them. He has only tried once to grow big finger nails and slit his own neck open. So they put him in a thêm extreme room where someone has recently escaped. there was a rip on the side of the tường of foam, he found it and there was a hole that let underground then back up to the outside world. He made it outside and the world just got a whole lot thêm dangerous. His first...
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It’s the color of you
bạn always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid form them

With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our trái cam, màu da cam book bags
Saved us from some pain

We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two trái cam, màu da cam crayons
When everyone else was green

Then bạn left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
bạn were in the trái cam, màu da cam field in the sky
bạn always đã đưa ý kiến was there.

The trái cam, màu da cam of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though bạn left too soon

Orange…

Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone trái cam, màu da cam in the rainbow
Without bạn here


I protect my own
Though I wish bạn were here

Now trái cam, màu da cam is my color
A color for bạn bravery
A color for my survival

trái cam, màu da cam will forever be our color
Even though death took bạn away

Forever trái cam, màu da cam for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
CHAPTER ELEVEN:
OCTOBER 30, 1995:
The sun rises over Crystal Falls; the chill of the autumn wind fills the air outside. ma cà rồng hate the cold. As I ponder what to do, Danny lies asleep on the couch, still unconscious. The effects of my blood have taken a toll on him. I ponder whether to continue my investigation at the high-school. Doing so would put Harold at great risk. Yet, somehow I think cá chó, đánh cá, pike has plans for the students. I look at the calendar. It is the thirtieth, the ngày before Halloween. Halloween, the anniversary of the ngày I made my first kill. I reminisce once thêm into my past.
ALBANY...
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posted by StarWarrior
CHAPTER ONE
    “I’ve got it!” Shade squeaked.
    “Hurry!” ngọc lục bảo barked, trying to keep up with him.
    “Corner it there, quick!” Kitmira barked.
    Shade turned the rabbit toward the thick thorn bushes. It was getting tired. Shade pounced; he landed perfectly on its back.
    “Bite it!” Neko commanded.
    Emerald lunged phía trước, chuyển tiếp and sunk her teeth into its neck.
    “Good catch!” Mamma called.
    “Did we hunt...
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posted by LaDispute
She was obsessed with the idea that tragedy is beauty and death is immortality.

He would watch her when she opened her mouth in class, watch the way she flashed smiles when she spoke. He swore to commit the crinkles at the corners of her eyes to memory, the freckled valleys lit up bởi her eyes.

He soon found that he could be the cause of those valleys, a Creator building up his own world from the base of her narrow satisfaction. She soon found that his convictions in tandem with hers had the power to endlessly pursue the edge of the universe in its expansion.

And when they first kissed that cold...
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