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posted by egyptprincess7
So this is my first story that I made in quite a while. So enjoy! Feel free to give me any hints on how to make it better.

    “Come on Alice! Wake up, you’re going to be late for school!” Mary, my older sister, yelled. She’s in charge of having to wake me up for school. I feel really sorry for her half the time but then again she gets to wake up earlier than me. I looked over to the door and there she still stood, her face red like a tomato. “I’m up! I’m up! Man, why do bạn always have to be so loud in the morning?” I whined, annoyed that she woke me up from a fabulous dream.

    I guess I should introduce myself huh? My name is Alice Knight and I am a junior in high school. I’m 17 years old! My sister, Mary is turning 19 in a week. She thinks she is better than me because I happen to be in high school still. But despite her arrogance she really is a kind sister. Back in middle school I was ruthlessly bullied bởi a group of girls who hated me for no reason. My sister would always run to my aid no matter what.

    “Alice hurry up already! bạn only have 10 phút before bạn are late! Get up!!” I heard my sister yell again. I hurriedly get up and run into the bathroom, brushing my teeth while brushing my hair with the other hand. ‘I’m going to be late! Ugh why didn’t she wake me up sooner!?’ I think as I put on my school uniform and grab my bag. Mary is standing tiếp theo to the door holding a piece of bánh mì nướng with bơ on it and I rush to grab it after putting on my shoes and with a quick “See bạn later!” I am off to my school.

    I finally see the huge blue building of the school and I start running faster after noticing the clock telling me that I only have 5 phút to get to class. Just as I arrive into class the chuông, bell rings and thankfully my ghế, chỗ ngồi is the closest one to the door. “You were almost late again weren’t you, Alice?” My friend, Sarah says during lunch. “Yeah…Mary purposely wakes me up late I swear.” I mutter with my hand on my chin. I never eat during lunch, bạn see my family can’t afford to get me any of the thực phẩm here. Me and Mary had to either pack one hoặc not eat at all. Not fair!

    My stomach picks the worst time to grumble and I blush looking embarrassed. “Here Alice, we can share.” says Sarah while holding up her lunch. I’ve never been thêm blessed than becoming Những người bạn with her. Her name is Sarah Archer. She’s the same age as me and we’ve been Những người bạn since middle school.

    “I don’t want to take away your chance to eat Sarah. I’ll be fine when I get home. Honest!” I say trying my best to stop her from offering me any. As much as I would tình yêu to eat she still needs to eat too. “Jeez you’re always so stubborn. Come on please? Just eat some of my cơm, gạo okay?” she insists. Ugh I can’t resist her when she insists like that. “Fine! I’ll eat SOME of your rice.” I need to build up my defense against her. Sarah has this way of making bạn listen to what she wants. Quite cunning for a sweet girl.

    Soon the chuông, bell rings to dismiss us, I for one am glad. I cannot stand school. Sarah on the other hand loves it. Nothing makes her happier than discussing her yêu thích lessons. Seeing her smile is a joy I always tình yêu witnessing. Now for my yêu thích part of the day, going trang chủ and doing absolutely nothing but playing video games.

    “I’m home” I say as I step inside the house and take off my shoes. “Welcome trang chủ honey” I hear my mom say as I pass the kitchen. Yum! She’s making my yêu thích thực phẩm ever today. Opening the door to my bedroom I leap into my bed. ‘I’m trang chủ sweet bed!’ I think as I cuddle with my pillow. “Alice honey? Wake up, it’s time for dinner.” I hear a soft voice say as they gently shake me. Groaning I open my eyes to see mom standing above me. “Okay mom..” I get up off the giường and stretch before joining my family downstairs.
posted by Cries_Bloodlova
Part one
The hurt
The phone line was cut. Her last words where her own name. Iza Reffile. I sat there and put my head in my hands. A hand patted my back there was an explosion some where off in the distance. I believe she had a little time left and I hope we found her soon.
“It’s going to be fine. She is going to be fine.” Someone đã đưa ý kiến to me.” I nodded and get up.
I cannot believe I’m losing the one thing I have left besides my baby which Katniss was protecting. We all dismiss from the phone and I walk up to Katniss.
“Alright Katniss I think she would want me to have the baby now you...
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Chapter 1:
let's give this a go:) I would tình yêu to know what bạn guys think:) bình luận please!<3

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My name is Nicole Mason, I'm a Sophomore at Bethal Heights High School. Me and my boyfriend, hoặc should i say ex boyfriend dated since freshman year, and lately i just didn't know what to do with myself. I never had that many friends, but after i started dating Zayn Malik almost every single girl hated my guts. I gave up everything for him and after a năm of dating i go over to his house only to find his tounge down Melanie Karras throat.
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I was sitting in my hotel room minding my own business đọc a book when all of a sudden the glass window doors flew open. The giường room was dimly lit and the sun had completely gone down leaving no sunlight to light the room.

I fell off my giường leaving my giường in between me and the window. I would have gotten up to shut the window doors but that was before a figure entered the opening.

There was enough of a shadow cast over the body that bạn couldn't make out any features. But I could tell that it was a man. He stood with a sturdy pose his legs locked in place, his arms on his hips, his head...
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posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830
It's so hard to forget
So late at night,
The darkest memory
That leaves me in fright

The color of crimson,
Is scary yet releasing.
Adrenaline builds since then,
And paranoia's increasing

Evening falls,
Ravens call,
And I see
Darkness over me

Don't walk alone
Don't be lost
I'm chilled to the bone
And that's to a cost.

Blood so warm
Words so cold
Get it over with!
This is getting old.

Midnight falls,
Ravens call,
And I see
Darkness overwhelming me

It's so hazy after that,
That's all I can see,
The short, very vague
Dark memory.
I’m sorry I cant tell bạn really what going on.
    It wasn’t meant to hurt.
    For either of us.
    I guess it did.

    I panicked. Shit, I did.
    I was happy but I was scared. How can happiness and fear exist at the same time, every time?
    I wanted it bad. Wanted bạn badly.
    For a long time.
    When I got to know about what bạn felt, what bạn told, I was happy. Maybe after a long time.
    After a really,...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
She broke my heart,into a thousand tiny pieces.the glass shards shine in the light of my sorrow,as a single crystal tear falls to the floor.and now it bleed in sheer agony.
all of those lies she fed me,all the fake acts of kindness....it makes everything worse.ive never hurt this much before,because this was the one and only time ive ever let anyone in.i thought she could help the empty void,help warm the ice that covered my heart.I gave her everything;my heart,my soul.and she gave me nothing but despair and tragedy.i existed only to be used bởi her.i was a new toy that she could hiển thị off to...
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posted by Fangirl99
"no this cant be!" Vanessa shouted in anger."im not a vampire!Th-Th-thers got a be another explanation!"

"im sorry,vanessa,'Dr.Vamp siad,getting up from is chair."If bạn dont believe me,you can always ask your mother."Dr.Vamp disappeared into the drakness,and Vanessa wet on her way.

When Vanessa got home,she went straight to her mother.

"mom,i need to talk to you."

"sure,sweetie,whats up?"

"well,i bit Susans arm today,and.."

"oh no!did bạn get in trouble."

"no,i left before andy teachers are the principal saw.Then,when i was walking,i saw a sign saying if bạn have strange behavior,visit Dr.Vamp"

"oh,no."...
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posted by Fangirl99
The sun is up in the sky
i watch it in the big blue ksky
And i ask myslef,"why?"

i stare at the ceiling.
then i get a strange felling.
and this felling is still being.
and then i ask,"why?"

What do i see in those eyes?
what do i see in you?
even thought i still despise.
i always ask myslef,"why?"

ask me that question,"why?"
i say i dont know
they tell me dont lie

so then i speak th truth.
i know that in my heart
i will always tình yêu you

your eyes that shine like he sun
being with bạn is always fun
one ngày i will tell you,hun
that bạn are the only one


sorry,not all the words rhyme.im not the best at making poems,but i wanted to share it with bạn anyways
I could feel no pain what so ever, I couldn’t talk hoặc move, though I could hear ever thing being said. “Her tim, trái tim rate is dropping!” and then I heard a long buzz. “We have to get her tim, trái tim beating again hoặc she’s going to die.” I could hear my grandfather panicking because it was me his first grandchild, here dieing. I could feel Jacob’s tension. He wouldn’t let go of my hand unless my grandfather asked for something then he grabbed it again.
    I could feel seven pare of eyes on me. I could hear crying not dry crying but from my babies. It was weird I didn’t...
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posted by stopbullying
The Stalker
Chapter 1

    It was a cool, winter night. It wasn’t too cold outside and I thought after work I would go out for a walk and take advantage of the nice weather. It was four-thirty in the evening. I got off of work at 7:00. It should be a little mát, máy làm mát bởi then.
Work was boring and nobody really came in. Only one person did and he was weird looking. He had ripped shorts, a short shirt, and worn out shoes on. I looked at him suspiciously because the whole time he was in there I caught him looking at me. This was weird especially since I was only 18 and he was like...
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posted by khfan12
 this is aqua
this is aqua
“You can’t catch me!” Chavez shouted. “Yes I can!” I yelled. I started to run faster. It was a great feeling. The wind in my face. “I can’t believe that people don’t like it out here….” My thoughts were interrupted bởi a voice. “Aqua!” Chavez…. I ran farther into the forest and stopped dead in my tracks. A few feet away, was Chavez, being wrestled to the ground bởi men in black suits. “Aqua run!” Chavez yelled when he saw me. I couldn’t move. I was Nữ hoàng băng giá with fear. One of the guys in black started to run towards me. “Run!” Chavez repeated, right before they...
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added by FreeAwesomeness
Source: If bạn want to draw her, please do. Remember, she is my own character. Please give me credit. 'Last
bạn may ask who and what is Mary Sue and a Gary Stu?

Well my follow người hâm mộ popper a Mary Sue and Gary Stu is a written hoặc drawn mistake, lie hoặc fake.

Why are they supposedly a lie hoặc a fraud?

Silly you! They're a lie and,or a fraud because they're perfect, no flaws, no issues, and no worries. Basically everything a human isn't hoặc can't naturally have.

Mary Sue- Is a female who is beautifully, smart, sexy, strong, independent, sentimental, generous, slim but curvy at the same time,and yada yada. She's basically the perfect woman with no flaws and a sex symbol that tops over all other sex symbols....
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posted by edwardsca
    I was sitting at my bàn at school, nghề viết văn my giáng sinh list. It was hard to think of thêm than three things, so I wrote down a gift card to itunes, some movies, and a new pair of nike shoes. I'm trying to think of something, and my teacher đã đưa ý kiến "Emily it wouldn't be wise to ask for money for a present". When I went trang chủ I was still thinking about my giáng sinh list, but then my little sister came up to my face "Sissy, sissy, bạn should ask for a super big princess kit'. Then bữa tối, bữa ăn tối came, we had roasted chicken. My older brother Eric was bragging about making the basketball...
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posted by House_Of_Night_
hiyah =), Hope yuuh guys enjoy this, just as much as i've enjoyed nghề viết văn it. Please, rate and bình luận =).. And i'm totally sorry if this was way to long lOl.. xOox








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‘Life as we know it, is Changing.'



Chapter One.

‘Look Lily. I totally wouldn’t freak out.’ Marci said.
‘Don’t freak out? ’ I asked, shocked.
‘Yeah, Marci. Don’t freak out? Lily future husband and father to her children, hasn’t dumped his girlfriend yet! So plan B I think!’
‘Thanks for the observation, Gemma and Plan B? No. Look its been over six months now.’ I explained and stormed off. Wanting to get...
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Then it wasn’t my confession that gave him the big shock, Sara thought, He already knew the whole story that’s why he understood my acts.
Until now I don’t know how I dared to step in and ask your friend to introduce me to you. Though I’m not used to that, it felt so right.
“Sara” Emily called bạn when bạn were about to get into the car.
“Hi Emily, How are you?” bạn answered joyfully with the prettiest smile I’ve ever seen.
“Fine” she đã đưa ý kiến with her bright smile.
“You haven’t introduced me to your handsome boyfriend” bạn đã đưa ý kiến playfully and my tim, trái tim beat faster than...
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posted by WileE-Quixote
ON STORMY CLOUDS
I’VE SEEN HIM SIT
THIS DARK Angel FAIR
WITH FOLDED AND SHIMMERING
GOSSAMER WINGS
AND MOON BEAMS IN HIS HAIR

WITH BURNING EYES
TO EARTH HE SLIDES
SEEKING TO FEEL THE GROUND
THEN SPREAD HIS
RAVEN FEATHERED WINGS
CASTING HIS MAGICK SHADOW ‘ROUND

THIS thiên thần TOUCH
IS A COMFORTS SONG
SOFT AS A VELVET CLOAK
AND WHEN HE REACHES
TO RIGHT THE WRONG
HIS WORDS ARE FEELINGS SPOKE

ON HOOF AND WING, I WATCHED HIM SAIL
MY DARK Angel FAIR
TO SOME ARCANE ABODE
WE KNOW NOT WHERE
TILL HIS tiếp theo ASSIGNMENT
AND THE FUTURE HAS BEEN FORETOLD

FOR THE LAST FLIGHT
THIS DARK Angel TAKES
IS A PIED-PIPERS GATHERING
FOR ALL THE SOULS HE’S TOUCHED
LISTENING TO THE SHADOWY
SONGS THEY’LL NOW SING