This is the Twilight fanfic story I'm working on. I just finished the first chapter.Hope bạn guys like it and let me know what bạn think in các bình luận =)
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the tình yêu of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s hand. I’ve seen them hold hands before, but never like this. It was as if they would lose each other if they let go. I pushed Edward away curiously.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a shocked tone.
“Nothing. I was just curious.”
“About what?”
“Jasper and Alice,” I whispered.
“What about them?” Edward asked me in a hushed voice.
“I’ve never seen them hold hands like that before.”
I looked up at Edward. He was staring at Jasper and Alice.
“Neither have I,” he đã đưa ý kiến quietly.
I looked back at the two. Alice noticed me this time. Her smile faded. She looked at me accusingly. I’ve never seen this look come from her before. I looked closely at her. I realized she wasn’t staring at me. She was staring at Edward. Then, she turned to Jasper again. Suddenly, Jasper fell. His hand was on his chest. Alice jumped up from her ghế, chỗ ngồi and kneeled down toward her soul mate. Now all the Cullens rushed to Jasper. Edward hopped up with me and practically started running toward his brother. He had a worried look on his face. Carlisle turned toward me and Edward.
"We need to get him upstairs,"Carlisle đã đưa ý kiến worried.
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the tình yêu of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s hand. I’ve seen them hold hands before, but never like this. It was as if they would lose each other if they let go. I pushed Edward away curiously.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a shocked tone.
“Nothing. I was just curious.”
“About what?”
“Jasper and Alice,” I whispered.
“What about them?” Edward asked me in a hushed voice.
“I’ve never seen them hold hands like that before.”
I looked up at Edward. He was staring at Jasper and Alice.
“Neither have I,” he đã đưa ý kiến quietly.
I looked back at the two. Alice noticed me this time. Her smile faded. She looked at me accusingly. I’ve never seen this look come from her before. I looked closely at her. I realized she wasn’t staring at me. She was staring at Edward. Then, she turned to Jasper again. Suddenly, Jasper fell. His hand was on his chest. Alice jumped up from her ghế, chỗ ngồi and kneeled down toward her soul mate. Now all the Cullens rushed to Jasper. Edward hopped up with me and practically started running toward his brother. He had a worried look on his face. Carlisle turned toward me and Edward.
"We need to get him upstairs,"Carlisle đã đưa ý kiến worried.
The Couples
Edward and Bella
Alice and Jasper
Emmett and Rosalie
Carlisle and Esme
Ashley and Kevin
Sonny and Joe
Selena and Nick
Lily and Mitchell
The first chapter will be đã đăng soon.
PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE CCCCCCOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEENNNNNTTTTT AAAAANNNNNDDDDD RRRRRAAAAATTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please I know the trailor is long but it is finished.It had a lot of complications that I wanted to explain so bạn understood what was happening .Please tell me if bạn think it is good.
Edward and Bella
Alice and Jasper
Emmett and Rosalie
Carlisle and Esme
Ashley and Kevin
Sonny and Joe
Selena and Nick
Lily and Mitchell
The first chapter will be đã đăng soon.
PPPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSSEEEEE CCCCCCOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMEEEEENNNNNTTTTT AAAAANNNNNDDDDD RRRRRAAAAATTTTTEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please I know the trailor is long but it is finished.It had a lot of complications that I wanted to explain so bạn understood what was happening .Please tell me if bạn think it is good.
These are the rest of the characters.
Lily Troscout a.k.a Lily Troscout
Jason Dolley,Jason Earle,and Mitchell Musso
Mitchell is with Lily.
David and Daniel Azel
Donna Azel is married to Chris Brown so she is Donna Brown.
Tiffany Thornton,Claire Thornton,and The Thornton Quints
Peter and Simon Azel
Ritchie and Marcia Thornton
The tiếp theo one will be the family and friends.
I will make the tiếp theo one really long.I wrote it in my book it is 3 pages but I am still not finished.
PLEASE COMMENT,RATE,AND GET PEOPLE TO READ AND DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lily Troscout a.k.a Lily Troscout
Jason Dolley,Jason Earle,and Mitchell Musso
Mitchell is with Lily.
David and Daniel Azel
Donna Azel is married to Chris Brown so she is Donna Brown.
Tiffany Thornton,Claire Thornton,and The Thornton Quints
Peter and Simon Azel
Ritchie and Marcia Thornton
The tiếp theo one will be the family and friends.
I will make the tiếp theo one really long.I wrote it in my book it is 3 pages but I am still not finished.
PLEASE COMMENT,RATE,AND GET PEOPLE TO READ AND DO THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
10. Ask about Mike.
9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that bạn and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her bạn are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
Source: link
9. Ask about Eric.
8. Ask about Jacob.
7. Ask about Edward.
6. After asking about all these boys, inquire as to how much she is paying them, and where in the White Pages she looked for fake fan-boys.
5. When she complains about not being a vampire, throw glitter on her and claim she sparkles just like a vampire in the sun.
4. Ask if the thought of Edward biting her makes her… happy.
3. Say that since Edward is technically dead, she is into necrophilia. Tell her that is sick and wrong, and she should stop with her weird fetishes.
2. Tell her we all know about the real reason she married Edward – the honeymoon.
And the Number One way to annoy Bella Swan?
1. Tell her that bạn and Jacob imprinted on each other, and are getting married. Tell her bạn are pregnant, and will be with him forever. Videotape the reaction.
Source: link
10. Take her credit cards and shopping vouchers, hold them above your head and tell her to “jump for it”.
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever bạn can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When bạn go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what bạn will be doing in five phút every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. email her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
Source: link
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever bạn can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When bạn go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what bạn will be doing in five phút every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. email her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
Source: link
YOu know what my friend Adriana I got her this awesome Chritmas preasent it is a Twilight shrit that I got a the Willowbrick Mall (Also Adriana is obsesed with Twlight)
thanks for đọc im really new at this as some of guys can tell