This is the Twilight fanfic story I'm working on. I just finished the first chapter.Hope bạn guys like it and let me know what bạn think in các bình luận =)
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the tình yêu of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s hand. I’ve seen them hold hands before, but never like this. It was as if they would lose each other if they let go. I pushed Edward away curiously.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a shocked tone.
“Nothing. I was just curious.”
“About what?”
“Jasper and Alice,” I whispered.
“What about them?” Edward asked me in a hushed voice.
“I’ve never seen them hold hands like that before.”
I looked up at Edward. He was staring at Jasper and Alice.
“Neither have I,” he đã đưa ý kiến quietly.
I looked back at the two. Alice noticed me this time. Her smile faded. She looked at me accusingly. I’ve never seen this look come from her before. I looked closely at her. I realized she wasn’t staring at me. She was staring at Edward. Then, she turned to Jasper again. Suddenly, Jasper fell. His hand was on his chest. Alice jumped up from her ghế, chỗ ngồi and kneeled down toward her soul mate. Now all the Cullens rushed to Jasper. Edward hopped up with me and practically started running toward his brother. He had a worried look on his face. Carlisle turned toward me and Edward.
"We need to get him upstairs,"Carlisle đã đưa ý kiến worried.
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I looked at the Cullens. Jasper and Alice were holding hands, Emmett was fooling around, Rosalie stared at me coldly, and Edward held me in his arms tightly. I could feel his cold chest against mine. I was wondering what Jacob was doing with his new girlfriend, Sarah. But that didn’t matter now. I was with my family and the tình yêu of my life. I glanced at Alice, who was still holding Jasper’s hand. I’ve seen them hold hands before, but never like this. It was as if they would lose each other if they let go. I pushed Edward away curiously.
“What’s wrong?” he asked in a shocked tone.
“Nothing. I was just curious.”
“About what?”
“Jasper and Alice,” I whispered.
“What about them?” Edward asked me in a hushed voice.
“I’ve never seen them hold hands like that before.”
I looked up at Edward. He was staring at Jasper and Alice.
“Neither have I,” he đã đưa ý kiến quietly.
I looked back at the two. Alice noticed me this time. Her smile faded. She looked at me accusingly. I’ve never seen this look come from her before. I looked closely at her. I realized she wasn’t staring at me. She was staring at Edward. Then, she turned to Jasper again. Suddenly, Jasper fell. His hand was on his chest. Alice jumped up from her ghế, chỗ ngồi and kneeled down toward her soul mate. Now all the Cullens rushed to Jasper. Edward hopped up with me and practically started running toward his brother. He had a worried look on his face. Carlisle turned toward me and Edward.
"We need to get him upstairs,"Carlisle đã đưa ý kiến worried.
Okay, so I'm nghề viết văn a book on www.FanFiction.net, and it's about the Sookie Stackhouse Novels bởi Charlaine Harris, its a người hâm mộ fiction, so I dont want to make publicity out of it, I just want ppl to read it, and tell me what they think!
So, if bạn have time on your hands, and bạn wanna read what I wrote (which has ma cà rồng and werewolves, and shapeshifters, witches, etc. (like in the actual series)) then follow this link, and tell me what bạn think in bình luận if bạn have a người hâm mộ fiction account, if not tell me what bạn think down below this! Please do so, I really wanna know if its good hoặc not...thanks for đọc this and hopefully u follow the link!
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So, if bạn have time on your hands, and bạn wanna read what I wrote (which has ma cà rồng and werewolves, and shapeshifters, witches, etc. (like in the actual series)) then follow this link, and tell me what bạn think in bình luận if bạn have a người hâm mộ fiction account, if not tell me what bạn think down below this! Please do so, I really wanna know if its good hoặc not...thanks for đọc this and hopefully u follow the link!
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Hi! I am both happy and sad to announce that I will be on a vacation for the tiếp theo 12 days so I will not be posting as much. But hey... VACATION TIME! YAY haha LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại so I'm sory and will try to post soon!
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Hi! I am both happy and sad to announce that I will be on a vacation for the tiếp theo 12 days so I will not be posting as much. But hey... VACATION TIME! YAY haha LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại so I'm sory and will try to post soon!
loves!
Oh and keep looking for những thông tin cập nhập u never know!
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