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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow stood đọc the task he had been given. It had come from the general of the battalions and recruiting so he couldn't object. He read the scrawled out message again:

Task #1: Thursday, August 3 ****
Recruit 003579-Dains

bạn are to báo cáo to the prison-holds this afternoon for your task of executing the captured victims from the villages of Dains and of the Bellator boy captured one ngày after. Failure to comply will result in serious penalty including but not restricted to:
Demotion
Reassigned
Imprisoned
Death

Talow swallowed as he pushed open the large doors, behind were the prison-holds. The air held a stench of sweat and blood that lingered in one's throat. He forced himself not to gag as he walked towards the three soldiers standing around a large desk. The bàn was occupied bởi a large man who was giving one boy the death stare.
“You brought this upon yourself, failure to follow the rules has its consequences.” The man's fingers were inched towards a drawer in the desk, the boy in câu hỏi watched silently. “Do bạn remember what it was bạn did?” The man sat forward, a wicked grin on his face. The boy was sweating but made no di chuyển to wipe his brow. “Speak!” He jolted and like a machine began to talk.
“I refused to follow my battalion into battle, leaving my brothers to the mercy of the Bellators.” His mouth clamped shut when he was done.
“Exactly.” The man at the bàn had a look in his eye like a savage beast with its prey pinned under it. “And bạn know why I have to punish bạn for this. If everyone started abandoning mission we would have Mất tích years ago. Is that what bạn want! To be ruled bởi self-loving Bellators! Well do you?” The man's face had turned red with rage as he leaned across the bàn to shout in the traitor's face.
“No...I...um..” He was silenced bởi the man as he stood and gripped him bởi the throat.
“I new bạn were a con chuột the ngày bạn were recruited.” He dropped him to the ground. “Take him away, I'll deal with him later.” Two of the soldiers who had been standing behind the boy now came phía trước, chuyển tiếp and grabbed him bởi the arms. His shouts and pleading could be heard as he was dragged down the hall. Talow watched them leave and was having một giây thoughts about this when the man noticed him.
“Quit cowering and get over here before I do the same to you.” Talow obeyed and stood before the man, handing his paper over. The man read it and sank back into his chair.
“So, bạn got the guts to do this hoặc are bạn going to chicken out like most of them?” Talow didn't say a word as the man walked around the bàn and lead him down the same hall the soldiers had vanished down. Talow could see people locked behind bars, dirty and sad-looking as he passed keeping close to the officer. When they reach cell 23 Talow could see the villagers from Dains watching him as the door was unlocked. They backed into the corner as the officer entered the cell and grabbed a thin man with bloody nails and a bruise on his cheek. He dropped him in-front of Talow.
“Your choice. We can do this the quick way hoặc we can drag it out.” He pulled from his thắt lưng, vành đai a small gun and a club with nails poking out of it. Talow looked from the weapons to the man who was watching the floor, not meeting his eyes. Talow picked the gun, checking how many rounds it had left. One. Just enough to finish the job. He saw the officer watching him, waiting for him to pull the trigger and end this mans life in full view of the others. Talow knew this man which made all so much harder. As he aimed the gun and steadied his shaking finger on the trigger Talow was about to bury the bullet in the man's head when a shout from down the hall forced him to jerk his hand and shoot the floor tiếp theo to the man. The officer spun on his heel and stormed down the small ahllway, stopping at a cell containing one person. The boy who had attacked Talow in the clearing. The man đã đưa ý kiến something to him before he started walking back to his bàn to fins another bullet.

Talow took this opportunity to run down the hall and stop at the cell.
“Why did bạn do that?” He asked the boy behind the bars. The boy leaned casually against the wall, examining his nails.
“Do what?”
“Stop me from shooting that villager.” Talow was growing impatient knowing that his time was running out.
“I know bạn don't like killing, it's written all over your face.” The boy came closer. “You want to get out of here?” Talow nodded eagerly. “Next chance bạn get out of this place find the main road until bạn reach a place with two alley ways. Take the second, it'll lead bạn the jungle.” Talow made a mental note of what he was told.
“Why are bạn helping me?”
“Think of it as a favour.” Talow took a step back from him and started to turn away.
“Thank you...um..” He didn't even know his name to thank him properly.
“Name's Raza, now get out of here.” Raza shooed him away as the officer started coming back down the hall.

Talow found the entrance to HQ easy enough, it was getting out that would cause some problems. He waited around until he saw someone he knew.
“Nico, Cyle!”
“Hey Talow, what's up?” They stopped to talk to him, moving to a tường where they wouldn't be in the way.
“I was wondering if bạn guys could get the guards to open the doors since you've both got thêm seniority then me. I think I dropped something outside when we were coming back.” Cyle and Nico exchanged looks, not quite believing his story but they helped him anyway. When Talow was far enough away, he started to follow the directions Raza had được trao him, sure enough he found himself at the edge of the jungle. All he had to do was dive in there and he'd be trang chủ free, but should he? Talow looked back at the city noticing the line of men coming down the main road. He still held the plans under his áo khoác and he knew they were looking for him. Were they after the plans? Did they know he had escaped? All thinking came to late as UFS soldiers found him. Maybe if he talked to them they would see it from his point of view. He had the plans, all he had to do was hiển thị them.
Chapter (18):
"It's possible" đã đưa ý kiến Leo, "Or maybe not.." added Abbie, "What do bạn mean?" asked Josh "We'll tell bạn later" đã đưa ý kiến Noah, "Right now we gotta go" he continued, "Ab,Leo" he đã đưa ý kiến getting to his feet both Abbie and Leo did the same and headed to the door, Bonnie got to her feet and stood facing Noah, "Bye" she said, "Bye" replied Noah he leaned down and kissed Bonnie on the cheek, "See bạn Abbie, bạn too Abbie's best friend" đã đưa ý kiến Josh, "My name is Leo" đã đưa ý kiến Leo angrily, "Okay..bye Leo" đã đưa ý kiến Josh sarcastically, Noah chuckled and let go of Bonnie's hand which he held tight after kissing...
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posted by vampirefreak_26
“You know he’s trouble don’t you?” Sofia stood at the entrance to the phòng bếp, nhà bếp looking at her daughter with her gray chó sói, sói eyes. Cassie was used to her mother looking at her with those chó sói, sói eyes when she didn’t approve of something. “I’m going upstairs to change, I’ll be right down for dinner” she could still smell Gabriel’s scent, she would never forget it, he smelled like a warm summer breeze and musk. The first time she saw him she felt a pull towards him, a pull she tried to ignore. It was too dangerous, even now, thinking of him made her mouth water. To get involved with...
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Chapter (16):
After Quickly changing into a black T-shirt with a picture of a sleepy face that đã đưa ý kiến 'I got outta giường for this...', jeans shorts and a pair of boots Abbie ran downstairs to tham gia her family and Leo for breakfast, "Good Morning!!" she đã đưa ý kiến as she stepped into the kitchen, "Ahh..look who showed up" đã đưa ý kiến Noah, "I thought bạn were going to sleep in" he added, "Shut up" she đã đưa ý kiến as she pulled a bottle of trái cam, màu da cam nước ép, nước trái cây out of the fridge, "all right, I gotta jet, bye" đã đưa ý kiến Noah getting to his feet, "Where are bạn going?!" asked Abbie who choked on her trái cam, màu da cam juice, "A friend of mine,...
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Chapter (15):
Abbie stared at the spot where Lily had just vanished, and wondering wether she might actually hiển thị up to talk to her, she turned away walking behind her parents and her brother Noah, Leo walking tiếp theo to her "I saw him, that boy" she said, "What boy?" asked Leo, "The boy in the gernie" đã đưa ý kiến Abbie, "The one who almost died?" asked Leo again, "Yes and he did die bởi the way they just brought him back" replied Abbie, "Did Lily see him?" he asked curios thêm than ever, "Yes, and he almost gave up if it weren't for her I would have been dealing with two ghosts not one" answered Abbie,...
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THE EDEN CHRONICLES

BOOK ONE: A LITTLE BIT thêm THAN LOVE

PART 1: TWERA AND THE PRINCE

Chapter 1

Kikikyo stared straight ahead as he flew. Clutched in one foreclaw was a book of centaurian poetry. His father, King Parthurnax, disapproved of the centaurian tình yêu poems contained within the book.

"Love? Bah! In my day, we didn't have anything called love. bạn modern Những câu chuyện về rồng aren't tough," his father had đã đưa ý kiến the week before. Kikikyo could remember thinking, <Here we go again. Another speech on how the ancient Những câu chuyện về rồng were better.> Between his young son (at the tender age of ten-and-seven) and...
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posted by rory2011
the last paper from Mary's life fall down ,she know why she will die ,it's not just because the money ,it's because she's a woman in a poor family in this terrible world ,but she can't do anything now
Mary put her sons in their beds wishing for them a good dreams ,her tear was in her green eyes ,her tear give her eyes sparkle

Mary and David thought that the kids are in a deep sleep ,so they took their chance to change their clothes and get ready to go when the sun will start to rise
Mary was looking at the sky from the window ,David were sitting tiếp theo to her ,but his eyes were on the floor...
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posted by sawfan13
The tiny ballerina figurine
As unique as an owl in winter
As beautiful as giáng sinh morning joy
It stands alone, looking at the other toys in the girl's room.
She remembers when she first got her.
Her birthday.
Will never forget her reaction.
Other búp bê came and went
But not the little figurine.
She dances slowly as the girl falls asleep
Her porcelin skin cold and shiny
Pretty white tutu dress
Always ready to dance and bring happiness
One ngày she was ignored
Weeks and days went by
Her owner, forgetting her presence.
The girl grew more, and her nightlight went
Making the ballerina feel scared and alone.
The...
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One dark and cloudy night, a couple of ma sói howled, awakening thêm and thêm werewolves. They set a curse upon the world that would destroy all humans. The people of the world had hunted millions of wolves, a great number of them werewolves, and as a result, had killed millions of werewolves. Now, the ma sói were seeking revenge.

As Byron woke up on a foggy morning, he was alarmed bởi the sound of wind rushing by, followed bởi loud howls. But as he looked out his bedroom window, he saw nothing. Byron raced downstairs, and seeing his parents were asleep, he went outside. Byron was ten,...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the các bình luận :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 1
    Three years later
    Beep! Beep! Beep!
    I moved my hand and turned off my alarm clock, wow, it’s six o` clock already. I groan as I rub my eyes and slowly get our of bed. I took a shower, the warm water wakes me up a bit. After I finish drying off, I put some clothes on.
    As I walk to the mirror, I feel compelled to look at myself again, I’ve felt compelled too ever since Dorothy died. We’ve always had this connection,...
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Chapter (12):
Abbie and Leo were walking in the hallways during study hall, they stopped because Leo had to grab his French book , Abbie spotted Susie and Brad in the crowd of students, Susie was whispering something to Brad, after she was done his eyes widened and he glared at Susie, "Does your mom know?" Abbie heard him say, "Shh!" đã đưa ý kiến Susie, then they were both whispering again, "Ab!" đã đưa ý kiến Leo, "That's the third time I've spotted bạn like this!" he said, "I'm sorry" she said, "What are so interested in?" he asked, "Susie" she whispered, "Susie Gellar, Lily's sister?" he whispered, "Yes"...
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posted by alicia386
This is a continuation of The Dying Ashes. I am Katherine Adams and I have received this manuscript my aunt had sent me weeks ago. She has gone missing. I fear for her life and I wish not to speak of her. I must continur this tale.

I knew Dylon very well. He was like a một giây father to me so his death took a great toll on me. To continue my aunt's research I have had to follow those four demigods very closely. I have learned so much about them. I think that maybe it is better to di chuyển from city to city so they can't get a good lead on where I am. So far it has worked.

Gabriel and Maycen were...
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 Saukerl
Saukerl
"SAUMENSCH!" I hollered from tiếp theo door. Saumensch isn't really the nicest thing bạn can call someone, it is like an insult, that is, like calling someone a pig in America. But right now, I am not in America, I am in Germany, so live with it. You'll get used to it, don't worry. "SAUKERL!" Matna hollered back. Saukerl is about the same thing, except used to call men and boys that, while Saumensch is used to call girls and women that. Her name is Matna Johanasen.Anyways, my name is Carls. Carls Shotansen. Pleased to meet you. The story of "Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl" all started on one foggy night...when everyone was asleep, except for one very peculiar being. And, he, was not German. He bore the symbol of the ngôi sao of David. He was a Jew.
 ngôi sao of David
Star of David
posted by sawfan13
Chapter 1



"Excuse me?" He đã đưa ý kiến quietly, staring at this woman with confusion. She got on all fours, crawled to him, and said,"I
wanna keep bạn forever." He furrowed his eyebrows and asked,"What? What bạn mean? What the hell is going on here?" She leaned down to his ear and whispered seductively,
"This can go either way, Criss. Promise and I can be your slaves, or," she continued, even quieter and scarier than before,"you can become ours." Criss shuddered in a bad way. No human being on this earth had ever been this way before. Sure, his người hâm mộ base was pretty insane and he's met a few less than sane...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the reviews, please don't copy and please read review*
Chapter 6
    Breaking news
    A few hours later, and bạn found all of us racing out of the movie theater to our car, which we thankfully parked far away from the scene. We jumped in and when we all finally stepped through Lara’s front door we burst out laughing, falling to the floor.
    “There faces!”
    “Their reactions!”
    “That was so fun!”
    “You should have seen that dude! The balloon...
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posted by alicia386
~Please read it and bình luận at the bottom~
Thanks!

Chapter Three

Mason stared off at the window. Was this new emotion joy hoặc sadness? He couldn't tell. When bạn think about it, his life isn't all that complicated. He could be in a worse situation like having to remodel the house after a natural disaster hit. Instead he was a millionaire with girl problems. His father offered to have "the talk" with him but he refused. Cassidy had came bởi this morning. She asked him out on a ngày and he đã đưa ý kiến sure. He couldn't believe he đã đưa ý kiến that. 

There was something interesting about Cassidy. She had long black...
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posted by Problematic129
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Summary
Zyanna Connor is just your not so average girl, and she’s in the middle of a tough decision. bạn see her father is the legendary killer of his hometown, though nobody knows it. And when her and her brother di chuyển back with her father, his identity is at stake and the legendary killer may be found. The threat is a group of kids that claimed to have seen him, and the only way to ensure safety is to silence them. But as Zyanna gets closer to them she starts to see different people, and she starts to care. Now Zyanna has to choose her family...
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Prologue


Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital giường were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.


It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, bạn may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...
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posted by alicia386
Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a năm and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, Ciara wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a tháng before we started packing. Ciara is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane thực phẩm is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...
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posted by alicia386
Wednesday

First ngày of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer hoặc Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read sách and she thought that maybe I could meet some new Những người bạn that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is bởi tomorrow.
After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at nghề viết văn a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm nghề viết văn is in the in the section below. If bạn like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen năm old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.