it this ok (my mj poem)

in the literacy class bạn had to make a poem about our yêu thích artist. i suck at poems so i wanted to ask if this was ok it's ok if bạn don't like it i'm just glade i was able to write a poem
it's called never forget
we miss bạn everyday. Oh how people wish bạn never went away. bạn were one of the most precious gifts we'll ever know, but i guess it was your time to go. bạn gave us years of beautiful music. that we'll always love, and we'll never forget that sparkly white glove. it's true bạn were one of a kind. i'll never forget being six and watching bạn moonwalk across a stage. i knew bạn were extraordinary at the age. now years later bạn are gone, but it's ok because everyone moves on to that better place. a place were bạn don't have to deal with lies and hate. it's true bạn will be strongly missed, becasue when michael jackson died the world cried, but we'll never forget