Kate & Humphrey adventures.
Mini Story 2. “The boy is gone!” Part 1 of 1.
Kate started her ngày preparing herself for a
funeral for an elder who died from a cougar
attack. The elder was walking on a mountain when
a cougar jumped her, for a quick snack. Her legs
were eaten and her head was nibbled on. When Kate
got to the funeral Humphrey was already talking
with Garth and Lilly. Lilly was crying a little
bit, cause the elder was like a grandma to her.
Kate walked away with Lilly and she tried to stop
her crying. Kate never really new this elder, but
knew she was Lilly’s yêu thích old wolf. Will
showed up with a full-grown female pronghorn, and
a white tail deer. He dropped his M4 and walked
over to the thực phẩm rock. Người sói then walked up to
the rock and tore a small piece of meat out of
each animal for a snack. He wasn't really part of
the pack and most Người sói felt him as a killer, so
he let them be and got on his dirt bike and took
a ride across the western territory. The dirt
bike can’t climb up the đồi núi, hill to the eastern
territory, so he can only ride on the western
territory. He drove off and the sound of his dirt
bike slowly faded away into the distance. Kate
grabbed a piece of thực phẩm and brought it over to
Lilly. Lilly slowly ate it but couldn't clear the
tears from her eyes. The ceremony went on for
several thêm hours and Will made a full vòng tròn
around the territory. He revved the engine hard,
and slammed the gas; he started at 3mph and hit
68 mph. He kept going and going until the front
tire hit a hole. He flew off the bike and slammed
into a large rock. Kate and Garth rushed over to
him and saw he was still conscious. He asked if
they could drag him to the Ferrari. Winston came
over and helped them pull on his shirt. They made
it 100 feet and the Ferrari was parked only 30
thêm feet. But the áo sơ mi ripped. He told Garth to
bite on his left leg and drag him the rest of the
way. Garth was hesitant at first but knew he
couldn’t pull on Will's shorts. He finally
dragged Will to the Ferrari, and Will slowly
climbed in. He đã đưa ý kiến he would be back tomorrow,
and slammed the gas speeding down the field and
into the lower valley. He then got up to a road
and drove to the hospital. The funeral continued
as Will speed off, and Garth cleaned some blood
off of his teeth. As night started to fall, the
Người sói howled one last time and covered the body
with dirt. Lilly’s tears faded away and Garth
took her home. Kate and Humphrey walked trang chủ
also. The graveyard was 300 feet south of the
alphas dens in a small level area. When Kate and
Humphrey got trang chủ they sat down and chatted about
the day. Within the giờ they both fell asleep in
each other’s arms. Humphrey woke up the tiếp theo
morning bởi Kate. She already cleaned the front of
the cave and got a Lynx for breakfast. He ate
almost all of what was left and đã đưa ý kiến bởi to Kate
as he walked out towards the omegas caves to meet
Mooch. Mooch Mất tích a few pounds from going up and
down the mountains log boarding. When he reached
Mooch's cave, he noticed that a Ferrari wasn't
parked outside Will’s cave across the river.
Mooch came out and greeted him. “Where is Will at
mooch?” “He never made it trang chủ last night. But
don't worry he đã đưa ý kiến he would be back today and
the ngày isn't over yet.” “Your right, so bạn want
to pull a prank on Can-do?” “Sure what is it?”
“Well I was thinking about putting a thin vine at
the entrance and then when we walked out it would
trip him.” “Ha ha sounds like fun, he was a bit
mean to me at the funeral anyways.” The 2 Người sói
went to the forest and got a small vine, and then
they tied it across the front of the den. They
waited until Kate blew their position. They
looked back at her and then heard a big smack,
and Can-do was tripped. They laughed a lot and
Kate joined in. She tried to stop but couldn’t.
The image was playing in her mind over and over
of his face hitting the floor. The Người sói quickly
ran away as hutch and Can-do chased after them.
Kate hid inside her den and Mooch was tackled bởi
Hutch. Can-do kept gaining thêm and distance to
Humphrey. And within a một giây he tackled Humphrey
into a muddy riverside. Can-do laughed and went
back trang chủ and bit the vine apart. Kate and
Humphrey then again spent
the night at couple’s Fallz and fell asleep in
the same den beside the waterfall that they slept
in the last few times. When they woke up the tiếp theo
morning and walked down to their den, a chó sói, sói that
patrols at night came running up to Kate. He đã đưa ý kiến
Will didn't come back last night and he thinks
Will went unconscious from the bite Garth gave
him. Kate thanked him for the information and
returned home. She then Gathered Hutch and Gemma
and they went to a gas station where Will always
filled his dirt bike at. They didn't see him hoặc
the car, and they stumbled onto a watchdog in the
back tied up. “Excuse me, my name is Kate, and I
have a câu hỏi for you.” “Hello, Kate I'm Manny,
I don’t get visited bởi anyone much, so I don’t
know if I can help.” “Well we are wondering about
a human.” “Ah! Yes a human, I see many of them so
I bet I can help bạn now.” “We are looking for a
boy who has a dirt bike and a red Ferrari, have
bạn seen him?” “Ah yes, he past this place about
2 days ago. He looked really hurt and sped down
towards the hospital. In fact I can hiển thị bạn
where he is if bạn want.” “YES! Please hiển thị us.”
“OK well my owner doesn't want me to get too
lonely so he hooked up a TV with the news channel
on. Here your friend should be on right now.”
News-lady: Welcome to the 5:00 o-clock news. I'm
Hannah and boy do I have a story for you. A while
back in The U.S, a 13-year-old boy Named Will
Emert was supposedly kidnapped and taken into
Canada. Well the mystery where he went is over.
He went to a hospital in Alberta with severe
injuries. He wasn't recognized at all and went
through the front doors marked as in an accident.
The hospital đã đưa ý kiến he told them he got bit bởi a
coyote and flipped his dirt bike on the escape.
Everything went smoothly until they put him in an
x-ray machine; there they saw 2 pistols and 1
knife. The hospital’s owner called the police
without Will even knowing they saw the guns. When
the cops came in, Will was taken bởi surprise and
pulled out his 1911. 22 shots were fired and no
one was hurt. He was then taken to Jail and he
will spend 23 years in Jail.” “Oh no!” “Kate I'm
sorry but me and Hutch can't help. Its time to
forget about him.” Hutch and Gemma began to walk
home. Kate had no choice but to follow them. She
couldn't believe that he was gone. The tiếp theo ngày
at dawn helicopters and planes flew overhead.
Kate could hear a loud engine coming from the
distance. Every chó sói, sói was waked up bởi the sound of
the engine. They never heard an engine that loud
out this far before. It was Will! He was driving
a Ferrari 458 spider. The engine roared from the
nitrous kicking in. But as fast as he was coming,
he went straight bởi the dens on the mountain
edge. All the Người sói kept wondering why he didn't
stop, until they saw a fighter jet fly over and
shoot rockets at him. The rockets both missed
when he made a bend into a valley. He then went
right up the mountainside and got launched into
the air. A helicopter flew over him and he threw
a rope to the side of it. The car hit the ground
and the front tire fell off. He climbed the rope
and got to the helicopters cockpit. He then shot
the pilot and entered the helicopter. Will flew
over Kate and went past the territory. The chase
continued with help from the US army. Will’s plan
was to get as far away from jasper as possible
and then exit the helicopter and disappear in the
woods. He got over Manitoba Canada, when he
called in a jet from the black market to escort
him. The jet came flying past him and spun back
and shot 4 rockets which hit a fighter jet behind
Will. He was almost past Manitoba when the US
army showed up and immediately shot him out of
the sky. The helicopter spun and when it reached
the hàng đầu, đầu trang of 400-foot trees, he was forced to jump.
He smashed hard through the branches and heard
the helicopter explode behind him. He came close
to the ground and caught a cây branch. He then
let go and fell the remaining 30 feet. Will got
up and ran for a clearing, while he called the
black market for a Dirt bike. The helicopter flew
bởi and dropped the dirt bike 40 feet. The
helicopter then flew away before being
discovered. Will hoped on and drove through the
woods. He ran across a black market base and hid
in it for 2 hours. He then got in a Lamborghini
and drove slowly towards Alberta. He reached
Alberta in 5 hours. He then switched out the
Lamborghini at another black market base and got
onto a zip line, which shot him 15 miles to the
edge of jasper. He then got onto an emergency
Dirt bike and drove back to Kate’s territory.
When he finally reached it he was exhausted, but
couldn't settle down. He called the black market
again and had them extract the 458 con nhện, nhện Ferrari
to another location. This way if they look for it
they will be looking far away from here. Kate
Jumped at Will and pinned him to the ground
laughing. He got up and then got knocked down
again bởi Tony. “You idiot bạn could have exposed
us.” “Dad calm down he didn't get us exposed he
didn’t even get near us.” “Guys please don't
fight, Tony is right I was stupid to do such a
thing. But I had to get away.” “Will come in the
cave with me and Humphrey we want to talk with
you.” Will followed Kate back to her den as told.
“Sorry about Tony he hates the fact that bạn are
here. But I do want bạn to be thêm careful.”
“Sorry Kate I just got stupid that's all.” “Were
did your red Ferrari go?” “Well Humphrey, they
impounded it when they arrested me. Which it
means they destroyed it.” “Oh, I'm sorry to hear
that it must be awful.” “Eh, its only a 3 million
dollar car anyway. I have bạn guys now, that's
all I care.” Will left the den and returned to
his cave at dusk. Everything was back to normal
for now and should be for a long time, as he
promised Kate he was going to calm down and be
thêm careful.
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Mini Story 2. “The boy is gone!” Part 1 of 1.
Kate started her ngày preparing herself for a
funeral for an elder who died from a cougar
attack. The elder was walking on a mountain when
a cougar jumped her, for a quick snack. Her legs
were eaten and her head was nibbled on. When Kate
got to the funeral Humphrey was already talking
with Garth and Lilly. Lilly was crying a little
bit, cause the elder was like a grandma to her.
Kate walked away with Lilly and she tried to stop
her crying. Kate never really new this elder, but
knew she was Lilly’s yêu thích old wolf. Will
showed up with a full-grown female pronghorn, and
a white tail deer. He dropped his M4 and walked
over to the thực phẩm rock. Người sói then walked up to
the rock and tore a small piece of meat out of
each animal for a snack. He wasn't really part of
the pack and most Người sói felt him as a killer, so
he let them be and got on his dirt bike and took
a ride across the western territory. The dirt
bike can’t climb up the đồi núi, hill to the eastern
territory, so he can only ride on the western
territory. He drove off and the sound of his dirt
bike slowly faded away into the distance. Kate
grabbed a piece of thực phẩm and brought it over to
Lilly. Lilly slowly ate it but couldn't clear the
tears from her eyes. The ceremony went on for
several thêm hours and Will made a full vòng tròn
around the territory. He revved the engine hard,
and slammed the gas; he started at 3mph and hit
68 mph. He kept going and going until the front
tire hit a hole. He flew off the bike and slammed
into a large rock. Kate and Garth rushed over to
him and saw he was still conscious. He asked if
they could drag him to the Ferrari. Winston came
over and helped them pull on his shirt. They made
it 100 feet and the Ferrari was parked only 30
thêm feet. But the áo sơ mi ripped. He told Garth to
bite on his left leg and drag him the rest of the
way. Garth was hesitant at first but knew he
couldn’t pull on Will's shorts. He finally
dragged Will to the Ferrari, and Will slowly
climbed in. He đã đưa ý kiến he would be back tomorrow,
and slammed the gas speeding down the field and
into the lower valley. He then got up to a road
and drove to the hospital. The funeral continued
as Will speed off, and Garth cleaned some blood
off of his teeth. As night started to fall, the
Người sói howled one last time and covered the body
with dirt. Lilly’s tears faded away and Garth
took her home. Kate and Humphrey walked trang chủ
also. The graveyard was 300 feet south of the
alphas dens in a small level area. When Kate and
Humphrey got trang chủ they sat down and chatted about
the day. Within the giờ they both fell asleep in
each other’s arms. Humphrey woke up the tiếp theo
morning bởi Kate. She already cleaned the front of
the cave and got a Lynx for breakfast. He ate
almost all of what was left and đã đưa ý kiến bởi to Kate
as he walked out towards the omegas caves to meet
Mooch. Mooch Mất tích a few pounds from going up and
down the mountains log boarding. When he reached
Mooch's cave, he noticed that a Ferrari wasn't
parked outside Will’s cave across the river.
Mooch came out and greeted him. “Where is Will at
mooch?” “He never made it trang chủ last night. But
don't worry he đã đưa ý kiến he would be back today and
the ngày isn't over yet.” “Your right, so bạn want
to pull a prank on Can-do?” “Sure what is it?”
“Well I was thinking about putting a thin vine at
the entrance and then when we walked out it would
trip him.” “Ha ha sounds like fun, he was a bit
mean to me at the funeral anyways.” The 2 Người sói
went to the forest and got a small vine, and then
they tied it across the front of the den. They
waited until Kate blew their position. They
looked back at her and then heard a big smack,
and Can-do was tripped. They laughed a lot and
Kate joined in. She tried to stop but couldn’t.
The image was playing in her mind over and over
of his face hitting the floor. The Người sói quickly
ran away as hutch and Can-do chased after them.
Kate hid inside her den and Mooch was tackled bởi
Hutch. Can-do kept gaining thêm and distance to
Humphrey. And within a một giây he tackled Humphrey
into a muddy riverside. Can-do laughed and went
back trang chủ and bit the vine apart. Kate and
Humphrey then again spent
the night at couple’s Fallz and fell asleep in
the same den beside the waterfall that they slept
in the last few times. When they woke up the tiếp theo
morning and walked down to their den, a chó sói, sói that
patrols at night came running up to Kate. He đã đưa ý kiến
Will didn't come back last night and he thinks
Will went unconscious from the bite Garth gave
him. Kate thanked him for the information and
returned home. She then Gathered Hutch and Gemma
and they went to a gas station where Will always
filled his dirt bike at. They didn't see him hoặc
the car, and they stumbled onto a watchdog in the
back tied up. “Excuse me, my name is Kate, and I
have a câu hỏi for you.” “Hello, Kate I'm Manny,
I don’t get visited bởi anyone much, so I don’t
know if I can help.” “Well we are wondering about
a human.” “Ah! Yes a human, I see many of them so
I bet I can help bạn now.” “We are looking for a
boy who has a dirt bike and a red Ferrari, have
bạn seen him?” “Ah yes, he past this place about
2 days ago. He looked really hurt and sped down
towards the hospital. In fact I can hiển thị bạn
where he is if bạn want.” “YES! Please hiển thị us.”
“OK well my owner doesn't want me to get too
lonely so he hooked up a TV with the news channel
on. Here your friend should be on right now.”
News-lady: Welcome to the 5:00 o-clock news. I'm
Hannah and boy do I have a story for you. A while
back in The U.S, a 13-year-old boy Named Will
Emert was supposedly kidnapped and taken into
Canada. Well the mystery where he went is over.
He went to a hospital in Alberta with severe
injuries. He wasn't recognized at all and went
through the front doors marked as in an accident.
The hospital đã đưa ý kiến he told them he got bit bởi a
coyote and flipped his dirt bike on the escape.
Everything went smoothly until they put him in an
x-ray machine; there they saw 2 pistols and 1
knife. The hospital’s owner called the police
without Will even knowing they saw the guns. When
the cops came in, Will was taken bởi surprise and
pulled out his 1911. 22 shots were fired and no
one was hurt. He was then taken to Jail and he
will spend 23 years in Jail.” “Oh no!” “Kate I'm
sorry but me and Hutch can't help. Its time to
forget about him.” Hutch and Gemma began to walk
home. Kate had no choice but to follow them. She
couldn't believe that he was gone. The tiếp theo ngày
at dawn helicopters and planes flew overhead.
Kate could hear a loud engine coming from the
distance. Every chó sói, sói was waked up bởi the sound of
the engine. They never heard an engine that loud
out this far before. It was Will! He was driving
a Ferrari 458 spider. The engine roared from the
nitrous kicking in. But as fast as he was coming,
he went straight bởi the dens on the mountain
edge. All the Người sói kept wondering why he didn't
stop, until they saw a fighter jet fly over and
shoot rockets at him. The rockets both missed
when he made a bend into a valley. He then went
right up the mountainside and got launched into
the air. A helicopter flew over him and he threw
a rope to the side of it. The car hit the ground
and the front tire fell off. He climbed the rope
and got to the helicopters cockpit. He then shot
the pilot and entered the helicopter. Will flew
over Kate and went past the territory. The chase
continued with help from the US army. Will’s plan
was to get as far away from jasper as possible
and then exit the helicopter and disappear in the
woods. He got over Manitoba Canada, when he
called in a jet from the black market to escort
him. The jet came flying past him and spun back
and shot 4 rockets which hit a fighter jet behind
Will. He was almost past Manitoba when the US
army showed up and immediately shot him out of
the sky. The helicopter spun and when it reached
the hàng đầu, đầu trang of 400-foot trees, he was forced to jump.
He smashed hard through the branches and heard
the helicopter explode behind him. He came close
to the ground and caught a cây branch. He then
let go and fell the remaining 30 feet. Will got
up and ran for a clearing, while he called the
black market for a Dirt bike. The helicopter flew
bởi and dropped the dirt bike 40 feet. The
helicopter then flew away before being
discovered. Will hoped on and drove through the
woods. He ran across a black market base and hid
in it for 2 hours. He then got in a Lamborghini
and drove slowly towards Alberta. He reached
Alberta in 5 hours. He then switched out the
Lamborghini at another black market base and got
onto a zip line, which shot him 15 miles to the
edge of jasper. He then got onto an emergency
Dirt bike and drove back to Kate’s territory.
When he finally reached it he was exhausted, but
couldn't settle down. He called the black market
again and had them extract the 458 con nhện, nhện Ferrari
to another location. This way if they look for it
they will be looking far away from here. Kate
Jumped at Will and pinned him to the ground
laughing. He got up and then got knocked down
again bởi Tony. “You idiot bạn could have exposed
us.” “Dad calm down he didn't get us exposed he
didn’t even get near us.” “Guys please don't
fight, Tony is right I was stupid to do such a
thing. But I had to get away.” “Will come in the
cave with me and Humphrey we want to talk with
you.” Will followed Kate back to her den as told.
“Sorry about Tony he hates the fact that bạn are
here. But I do want bạn to be thêm careful.”
“Sorry Kate I just got stupid that's all.” “Were
did your red Ferrari go?” “Well Humphrey, they
impounded it when they arrested me. Which it
means they destroyed it.” “Oh, I'm sorry to hear
that it must be awful.” “Eh, its only a 3 million
dollar car anyway. I have bạn guys now, that's
all I care.” Will left the den and returned to
his cave at dusk. Everything was back to normal
for now and should be for a long time, as he
promised Kate he was going to calm down and be
thêm careful.
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