xin chào Guys!! Here's some short songs I wrote....give me your opinions and suggestions...hope bạn like 'em

The first one is called 'Hi friend':
All the phút I spent with bạn
were always what I wanted to do

When bạn were far away
Everyday I used to pray..For bạn to come back home..
For bạn to come back home...

SO Hi friend..Hi again
bạn really made me feel the pain
SO Hi friend..Hi again
bạn really made me feel the pain

When everybody left me alone
When everybody left me home
Anybody I wanted to find..Then I found bạn bởi my side..

SO Hi friend..Hi again
bạn really made me feel the pain
SO Hi friend..Hi again
bạn really made me feel the pain


The một giây one is The Sun Will Bright..it's a duet:


Guy:
hát this song
Feeling alone
where all my Những người bạn are gone?
I tried to scream
I tried to fight
I tried to keep my head up high

Girl:
I know it's hard to be alone
I know it's hard to get along
bạn have to keep holding on
Cus..I'll help bạn to fight
I'll spend the night
With bạn bởi my side
The sun will bright

Guy:
I was alone
I was afraid
Until she came
Until she said

Both:
I'll help bạn to fight
I'll spend the night
With bạn bởi my side
The sun will bright

Both:
So if you're angry
If bạn wanna hide
Just keep smiling
Just keep trying
Cus the sun will bight...