Hey, if bạn guys have time, I would tình yêu it if bạn would read this... please? <3

I'm nghề viết văn a fan-fiction, and I want your opinions. I'm scared about posting this on the Harry Potter spot, so I want to know what bạn guys think first. I'm starts kind of in the middle, but it's funny...

Well, I just went to the kitchens, and the house elves gladly gave me some pudding.

I tình yêu this school.

"Want some?" I held out my spoon to Harry.

"Er, no thanks."

"I'll take some!" Ron tok the spoon and ate a big glob of Sô cô la puddings. I laughed.

"You guys are unbelievable." Hermione shook her head.

"You're just jealous that I'm eating bánh pudding with your boyfriend." I smirked.

"He's not my boyfriend!"

"Hermione, please." I stood up. "Check this out."

I took the spoon out of Ron's mouth-"Hey!"-, put a glob of bánh pudding on it, set it on the table, and hit the edge of it. The bánh pudding flew up into my awaiting mouth.

"Thank you, thank you." I đã đưa ý kiến with a mouth full of pudding.

"That was awesome! Let me try." Ron said. He did the same thing I did, except his pudding, landed on his nose.

If bạn want to read more, just tell me. If I get enough people wanting to read more, I'll post the whole thing on the Harry Potter spot.

Thanks!!!!