Q: what do bạn think?

I can't do a very good judgement as bạn say it's unfinished etc, but it's a lot better then i would have done. so kudos to bạn :)

I think it's pretty good. I can't really see it that good, but I know bạn đã đưa ý kiến you'll put an outline.

Unrelated:

The Q: in your tiêu đề looks kind of like an emoticon if bạn turn your head to the right.

Bursts out laughing.

I'm afraid I cannot see it and therefore cannot answer.

I wish I could see it better is all I have to say.