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Should I keep on making short stories? (Please no rude các bình luận :))

The Not So Worm
A Short Story bởi :YoshiStar
One ngày when I was at least 2 hoặc 3 years old I was outside with my dad. I saw something through the cỏ and I picked it up. At first I thought it was a worm. So I waved it in the air and said: "Look daddykins a worm!"
And my dad said: "Holly S***!!! That's not a F***** worm! That's a cỏ snake!"
And so I said: "OH" and droped it. And walked back into my house and ate some dâu, dâu tây ice cream...

Please tell me what bạn think. Should I continue hoặc no? And please no rude comments:)
 YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
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kittencutie119 said:
No
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Thank bạn for answering:) I really apreciate it:))
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
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Your welcome. With a little moe practice, bạn could eventually get a little better wth progress
kittencutie119 posted hơn một năm qua
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thank bạn sooooo much! This helps alot:)
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
JudyNails said:
I think bạn should!
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Thank you!:D
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
Shadowmarioking said:
LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại that is a hilarious story wished that'd happen to me XD

go ahead, continue :D
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I'd be glad to!:D
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
IHWTA said:
That was.... A really short, short story...
Kind of... random...
I say no. No offense of anything.
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Thanks anyway:) None taken BTW
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
YOUTH-UNLIMITED said:
It's not actually a story.these are the lackings of this story.try to correct your faults and practice more.
1.the story doesn't got any meaning
2.the story doesn't got any moral
3.the story doesn't got any climate
4.the story doesn't got any message and aim. So...if bạn can overcome this faults and practice more,you will be able to make great stories.good luck:)
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Thank you:)
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
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bạn are most welcome:)
YOUTH-UNLIMITED posted hơn một năm qua
hellokittygirl2 said:
i think yes u should make it little funny and scary
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I will:))
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
Brandey said:
Hm...It's kinda strange,I don't know what to say.
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Same.
mitchie19 posted hơn một năm qua
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Well its kinda thêm like a strange event that heppened in my life...I should have mentioned that:)
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
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Ok than :)
Brandey posted hơn một năm qua
dreamfields said:
If bạn enjoy writing, then continue. The thêm practice bạn have, the thêm details bạn will include. Nobody sits down and writes a masterpiece on their first try. The story was really short, but it gives bạn a start to build on. Have fun!!!
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Thank you:))
YoshiStar posted hơn một năm qua
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Your welcome :D
dreamfields posted hơn một năm qua
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