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WHAT DO bạn THINK OF THIS POEM?

He's like a flower,so gentle and sensitive.
He needs a light,he needs a water,he needs a care.
He's so sweet and mysterious,he never lets anybody close to his minds,anybody but me. He gives me a little part of his soul to keep,to cherish.
And yet,he's so lonely,trapped inside his own world,which no one else understands.
But he sees everything,he sees the hatred into the eyes of the people who judge.
And yet,he's different,he feels the weakness of the others,and it hurts.
He's trying to be a better man,but arrogant,no.
He asks no help from the others,because that's who he is,a man who lives in his own world,cold,alone and empty.
His words are like the most beautiful song,you can feel the dept in in,his eyes are so bright,you feel calm while bạn look into them.
And he's like a poison,won't let bạn go,but yet so cold,himself.
You're trying to reach his soul,but bạn fail,he gives bạn only that bạn need to see,but yet the cold guy like he is long for the deepest tình yêu and understanding.
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TDIFan960 posted hơn một năm qua
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Yes.
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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Oh yeah,it is possible.
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Pikafan32 said:
What a pleasant poem. i particularly enjoy poems like this, ones that talk about tình yêu in hating way. hoặc as I dubbed them 'Ripping Menders'.

It was very enjoyable and fluent to read, the minor mistakes wouldn't be noticed bởi anyone but an overeacting perfectionists.

I hope no one says anything but good about this poetic wonder!

- Re Re
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Oh thank bạn so much. Well,actually i have noticed several mistakes during the reading. LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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I saw them too but I meant the minor ones like for example a comma splice. Spelling mistakes and others I tought bạn would notice... Anyways it was still delicious to read! <3 XD
Pikafan32 posted hơn một năm qua
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Well,i did notice after i had finished the poem.lol Anyway thanks,i appreciate it.
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Dwolf247 said:
I tình yêu it. It's beautiful. bạn made it?
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Thank you. Oh yes,i wrote this poem.
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