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Here's the poem. What do bạn think?

tình yêu me...
Don't...
Hate me...
Don't...
Touch me...
Don't...
Hurt me...
Don't...
Save me...
Don't...
Rape me...
Don't...
It's the same now,
whenever i see the emptiness
in your eyes,
this coldness in your eyes
is killing me,
but your hands are still warm...
And i know,
oh i know my tim, trái tim still
belongs to you,
and bạn hate me,
oh bạn hate it...
bạn hate my pure love,
but your hands are still warm...
And i want you,
oh i still want you,
but i'm scared,
oh i'm scared,
and now i see,
oh i see the emptiness in your eyes,
this coldness in your eyes
is killing me,
but bạn don't care,
you'll tear my soul over and over again,
and bạn hate me,
oh bạn hate me,cause i tình yêu bạn so,
oh i hate my pure love,
and you're smiling to my pain,
and now i see the emptiness
in your eyes,
but your hands are still warm...
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wow chick, that is AMAZING! Did bạn write that?
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Yeah.. Thanks.....
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Thank you.
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CullenProperty said:
I tình yêu it, really. It could also be a song, ya know? It has the rhythem and all that. Do bạn sing? Except, if it was a song, it might sound better if bạn take out the "Don'ts" and just like whisper the first parts; "Love me, Hate me..." That'd be cool.
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Thanks.... Well,no,i can't sing... LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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Yeah that would b amazing
E-rock posted hơn một năm qua
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yup ;)
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EalasaidWooster said:
I like it, it's very good! :)
It has a lot of deep emotions -very well expressed, bởi the way!
And I like your use of repetition, it's really effective. :)
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Thank you... <3
irena83 posted hơn một năm qua
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Your welcome! x)
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UriahA said:
Nice
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Thanks a lot.
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yoshifan1976 said:
Very cool poem :D
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reesesdog said:
nice

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inexplicable said:
It´s very good and... deep.
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Yeah,it is... Thanks...
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orangeturnip said:
its cool ..
i think there is something special about poems
bạn get a snapshot of your subconscious...

thanks for the poem ... i beleve tha was from the heart.
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Thank u
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Yeah.....
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RanmaRaj said:
O My God
You're awesome
Thats such a sweet song
Really tim, trái tim touchin
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Thank u......
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Twilight_Dream said:
really insightful! i liked it a lot. it could also be a song. it sounded thêm like a song to me. and im actually already making up a tune to it.
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Thanks...
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highlife said:
wow its well written
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Thanks... <3
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Funnygirl77 said:
That was deep I loved it
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Thanks.
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Spi_Kat_Penguin said:
I am zoned, like i'm transported 2 where......idk, its beautiful.

-Spi
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