This is a fanfiction that I began and would appreciate it if people could read this first chapter and tell me if they think I should continue :-)
Aladdin: Indescribable Feeling
Aladdin held his breath and gritted his teeth as he heaved himself over the palace tường and landed softly on the lush cỏ of the majestic garden which covered many acres. As he tiptoed swiftly but lightly; seeking out anything that offered concealment: the trees, the water fountain, he prayed that the damn tiger wouldn't suddenly appear and discover him. He had to get into the palace without being discovered...