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posted by Percysclique
Chapter 3 – A tim, trái tim Beats Faster
    Kaolin ran up the stairs of the dungeon. The guard had been asleep, but he could awake any time. His boots pounded on the stone floor. He prayed for them to be light and soundless.
    Kaolin torn down the corridor, his was tim, trái tim beating faster with every step. He knew his way around the castle. He had been here a few times before when he had visited Amorite.
    Kaolin had no idea what he was going to do. If he went trang chủ with the jewels, the King would charge him of thievery. If he didn’t pay his families debt, the punishment would be worse this time. King Harlot would wonder how he had escaped. Kaolin couldn’t tell on Amorite. After everything she had done for him, after the moment in the dungeon they shared, he couldn’t betray her.
    Every option could have serious consequences.
    The young man was almost to the gates. There was a faint light in the sky from the rising sun, but not enough for the men on guard to see a figure creeping through the gate.
    Kaolin made it through and dashed into the village. No one was awake yet except the homeless who were searching the piles of garbage for food. They looked at Kaolin with longing as he hurried past, but he had nothing to give them.
     He was almost out of the village. Only a few thêm feet and he would be free. Up ahead two soldiers were patrolling the streets. They wore the King’s insignia. A white bird with a red rose in its beak. The background was a midnight blue with rays of light shining through.
    Kaolin’s tim, trái tim stopped and he was Nữ hoàng băng giá in time. All he could think of was getting caught and dying. As a child they tried to get bạn to think life was simple and easy. But it was much thêm dangerous than that.
    The adults never told bạn about the Viper. All bạn knew was to stay away from the men with the snakes on their shields and capes. The rắn độc, viper was the ruler of Onyx. Onyx was the kingdom tiếp theo door to Anoxia. Everyone knew that Onyx was the land of bad and Anoxia was the land of good.
    Legend had it that Onyx and Anoxia were brother and sister kingdoms. They lived in prosperity until one ngày Anoxia wanted to go and tham gia the neighboring kingdom, Zarf. Onyx got mad and refused to let Anoxia go. Anoxia was in tình yêu with Zarf and left in the middle of the night when Onyx was asleep. When Onyx awoke he was outraged. Since then Onyx was filled with anger, jealousy, and hate. Anoxia was happy, loving, and compassionate.
    Inside Kaolin’s mind, the gears were turning. He had to think of a plan to get past the guards. He could run and hopefully not get caught…
    A noise behind him made Kaolin turn. A young girl and boy stood behind a thùng shivering. They had on rags and were mostly skin and bones. Their hair was Công chúa tóc mây and their faces dirty. Kaolin walked over to them. They cowered back in fear.
    “It’s okay. I won’t hurt you,” Kaolin reassured the two children. He knelt down, his knees resting on the cold brick. “What are your names?”
    The girl looked at him with big brown eyes. “I am Ileana and this is Tanis. He is five and I am seven.”
    “Where are your mom and dad?” Kaolin knew that they probably didn’t have parents.
    “The Viper-” The girl choked back a sob.
    “It’s okay,” These children needed thực phẩm and love. The rắn độc, viper had taken away their parents, and Anoxia had được trao them nothing. “Would bạn like to come to my house for food?”
    The boy nodded his head eagerly. Ileana looked cautiously at Kaolin. She was young and knew too much for her age.
    “Can I trust bạn with a secret?” Kaolin asked.
    They nodded their brown haired heads.
    “My father once borrowed money from King Harlot. He died and my family couldn’t pay off the debt. The King came to our house and đã đưa ý kiến if we couldn’t pay back the money we borrowed, then one of us would have to go with him to the castle. That person would be a prisoner until the money could be paid, hoặc until they died. I was taken to the lâu đài as a trade. I had been at the lâu đài for eight days, when my friend came. She unlocked my cell, and gave me the money to pay my family’s debt. I escaped today. If King Harlot finds out what happened, I could be killed. So, bạn can’t tell anyone about what she and I did,” Kaolin said.
    “We won’t tell anyone, will we Tanis?” The girl asked her brother.
    Tanis shook his head in agreement.
    “There is a problem, though.” Kaolin whispered. “There are two soldiers patrolling the street. How will we get past them?”
    “We wait.” Ileana said. “When the people fill the streets we will go.”
    “We may not have enough time. They might find out I am missing.”
    “That is a chance we must take. There is one thing bạn learn from living on the streets. Never face the guards alone.” Ileana’s voice was barely above a whisper. She had a frightened look in her brown eyes that made Kaolin shiver. And Kaolin trusted her.
posted by alicia386
Chapter One

Mason Montgomery auditioned 480 girls this week alone to play the part as món ăn bơm xen, charlotte in his new movie, Hourglass. Hourglass was all about a woman who could stop time just to be with her love. Each girl he auditioned wasn't giving him what he wanted. All he wanted was a fair-looking girl with pretty eyes and a sensitive tim, trái tim but the girls he auditioned were anything but that. He tried being nice and say encouraging things but after the 248th girl he gave that a rest. Now he just đã đưa ý kiến what came to mind like "You stink," hoặc "And bạn call yourself an actress? Get it outta here." He had...
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posted by Kachetes
“why does she live in this side of town when bạn have a hous- joshua was asking but my glare clearly got to him
“look its not like we dont want her in our house ... She IS married and she didnt want financial help from any one.Lupita is a girl thats loud and proud in a way but Marc is a good guy they're happy I just wish they would...”
I stop we stood in front of a small house and it looked like we missed a good party bia cans and bottles al over the front yard,a few dosen pizza, bánh pizza boxes,three chó eating the leftovers,and one pretty lady passout on the grass;my aunt Lupita
“do I realy need...
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posted by harrypotterbest
Should I continue hoặc not? [The ones in Italics are the parts I'm unhappy with]

For a vampire – a suspect of being one, really– she seemed pretty... human. With my job as a Vampire Seeker, she wasn’t like any of the other cases of ma cà rồng I had discovered. With all the raving stories of ma cà rồng I suppose they had to be more... careful with their special diet. But still, a vampire with these little reports, it was... strange, for lack of a better word. Perhaps we just had to get thêm information; yes, that was probably the case.
I sighed and flipped my notebook shut. Putting my pencil...
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posted by mitchie19
6. T H E C R U Z F A M I l Y

“Welcome, Mariah.” Aunt Lourdes’ hugged me while the maids took care of my stuff. “Your house is so big,” I complimented. My eye caught on the beautiful carved statue on the corner and the massive staircase.
I waved my black hair on my right shoulder.
The walls were covered in golden rod hình nền with a hint of yellow-green vines as the design. “Are bạn hungry? We’re about to eat lunch,” she looked at me.
I pursed my lips. “Um, yes,” considering the fact that I didn’t eat along the long way, made me hungry as I smelled the scent of the food...
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posted by Caleigh210
The feeling's unusual as I walk around
The sights are as strange as the sound
It's hard to believe that the beauty around me
Isn't beautiful in reality

How would bạn feel if all bạn know's a lie
That the truth is really hard to come by
When you're told that it's all alright
But all bạn see is the darkness of the night

When bạn realize
That the truth and the lies
Are separated bởi one thin line

Where can I find home
Even though I'm all alone
How can I say the right words
When I can't even hiển thị the would
Who I am
Why I stand
That I'm completely Mất tích and I can't
Find my way
In this dreadful shade of grey

Hopelessly...
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posted by problematic124
***Please don't copy***
Chapter 6
Death Targets
"From the Predator to the Prey"Aurora questioned đọc the note.
As soon as I read this I called them all to my house I also told them about the (bio) dad situation.
"So that's the same the person who turned off the power at Tweety's house" Ariel asked
"Had to be"Fable nodded "who else could it be"
"Should we tell the police"Owen asked
"It's like Gregg đã đưa ý kiến we need hard cold facts this can also be counted as a joke"Tweety reminded us
"And it's like the note says he's never been caught before"Gregg told us
"We should fight back"Aurora đã đưa ý kiến suddenly
"What!Fight...
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posted by lovepop
Everyone was nghề viết văn it down on their calenders as alerts of it popped up on the news, internet, and in big bold letters, on a newspaper! The time has come for it to be known to mankind and liked! The movie, Brenda and Luci's Night, was premiering on that weekend, the 25th of November.Everyone wanted to see it! There had been commercials of it since August, and the stars had been anxious. Speaking of the "stars" Whose names were Hillisia Jones, and Ponya Kricketiz. They were bff's since the kindergarten, and now they were in 7th grade. They auditioned for the movie without the other knowing! They were astounded when they learned they were auditioning for the same movie. They were mad, but when Ponya got the letter she was Brenda, and Hillisia was Luci, they were overjoyed, and began screaming with cheers! Now they were in New York being filmed for the movie... wait for more!
posted by DxCFan123
I woke up at 5 AM. Not suprising. I went to the bath room and got ready. I grabbed some clothes and put them on. A white short that đã đưa ý kiến "WHO CARES?" and black shorts. I put On knee socks with converse. I put my hair in a bun. I grabbed my backpack and glanced at the clock. 7:45?! Holy crap! I ran to school. When I got there, only 5 phút left until class. 7:55. Wow. Arent ma cà rồng suspossed to nbe as fast as a bullet? I walked down the hall nervously. Everyone was staring at me. "How's that?" "Who the heck is she?" I wanted to tell the I was Samantha Fitzpatrick of The FitzPatrick Family...
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posted by para-scence
I got, yet another, chance of being adopted when I was fourteen. I was in my room, drawing when there was a soft knock at my door. I looked up to see Ms. Bayer smiling sheepishly. I grimaced. That woman can give children nightmares with that smile.

"Hecate, there's someone here to see you." I cocked my head to the side. The only person I was interested in seeing was Officer Truman, and he always just came to my room. I shook my head and returned to my sketch. "Hecate. Get your butt up and go down to the front bàn this instant!" I sighed and got off the bed, and followed Ms. Bayer down to the...
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posted by para-scence
Along with the excitement of having a baby, I also became very worried. What would happen if I had a seizure during the pregnancy? What if my medication harmed the baby? I went on the computer and began searching for answers. Blake stood behind me, đọc over my shoulder.

"It says bạn can continue, hoặc stop your medication... It's up to bạn and your doctor," he read aloud. I nodded.

"It also says major seizures can be dangerous..." I sighed. He patted my shoulder. "But, if I do take the medication, there's an increased risk of birth defects."

"What are bạn going to do?" he asked. I sighed.

"I...
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posted by para-scence
Hera got out of the hospital a couple days later. Since it'd be too difficult for her to use crutches, because of her broken arm, she got to use a wheelchair. Kara đã đưa ý kiến she was terribly depressed now, and blamed herself for her friends' deaths. I visited them often, sometimes with Blake if he wasn't working. It was kind of unnerving to see Hera like that.

She was still bruised and scarred up pretty bad, like she just got out of a brutal fight. The casts and wheelchair made her seem even thêm fragile than she already was, and her stare was blank; out there. She didn't talk much now either. Before,...
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If only bạn could see the world through my eyes,
the rushing wind, the darkened skies.
And it just might take bạn bởi surprise,
to learn this life is merely a disguise.


The band continued to play on as I sang the lyrics over and over in my head. I had heard it a million times before. My best friend, Chikara Wang, wrote it and practiced it every một phút of every ngày with his band. In other words, how could I not?

They were called SloMo Suicide. Chick was the main singer, not to mention nghề viết văn most of the songs. He and his other band members stood on a platform that had been built in front of the old...
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posted by rru33
As i was giong to sleep i could not stop thinking about what would happen if i was the only one that was on the world.slowly i finaly fell asleep,but then something woke me up, like a big bang. i was getting out of giường when i noticed that my momand dad weren't in the house, so i thought they took a walk together.after an giờ hoặc so i started to get scared. i finaly went outside but insead of seeing a calm đường phố, street i saw cỏ two feed high houses coved in mose.now i was real scared now.i ran around the whole đường phố, street trying to find at least my mom hoặc dad to get this thing figured out.Soon i looked...
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posted by Funnygirl77
 letting go of the one's u tình yêu is like jumping out of an airplane with no para shoot
letting go of the one's u love is like jumping out of an airplane with no para shoot
7:00 Am
I woke up, and rubbed the sleep from my eyes. Alec was still asleep, so I quietly tip toed out of his room, and in to the bathroom. I didn't turn the light on, because I didn't want it to wake him up. I couldn't believe that i slept over at his house, nothing happened but still. It would be hard explain this to my aunt, I mean what am I going to say. "Hey Aunt Maggie, I slept over at Alec's, now i Know what your think but it wasn't like that we just slept in the same room, and used the same cover."

No couldn't say that she would kill me. I didn't hear Alec get up, so when he knocked...
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