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in 1980 ,the national museum in Vancouver -Canada were received many visitors, everyone was excited for the open of the room 780 ,the room have the old legend of the evil witch dead body
after three days every single person get into that room killed
three hundred person killed ,children ,parents ,teens
but the thing that drive the police crazy is that they found the bodies without blood and there's wasn't any blood in the crime scene
the government couldn't find anything that gather the victims with each other besides that all of them get into room780 in the national museum ,the government asked the owner to close that room and never open it again


in 2008:
____________
the museum couldn't receive visitors as much as it was before because of what happened in 1980

one ngày three student were visiting that museum ,there was only 15or 20 visitor
the student were standing near the room (bella ,john and carrie)
the keeper yelled "hey stay away from this room "
carrie "why?"
the keeper :"cause this room haunted bởi the evil spirit of the most evil witch bạn could ever imagine"
the manger called the keeper
the keeper "look at me all of bạn ,don't get to that room hoặc be close to it "

carrie:"did bạn hear that guys ,stay away from the room till the old man go away"

the student get into the room
it was big ,there wasn't any window ,just a weird words like witches spells ,and in the middle of the room there was cái dá, bội, bier

john" girls I feel there's something weird moving in my stomach"
carrie:"very funny john ,it's just the fart in your stomach"
they were searching and staring in every single inch in that room

bella "guys please let's get out of here ,I have a bad feeling for getting in this room"
john" chill out bella don't tell me that bạn believe that 100 years old keeper "
carrie "oh come on bella how old are bạn ,have some fun people dreaming to get into this room"
bella" I know ,but I think that we should go before the keeper came and shouting on us "
john "bella don't ruined the fun"
carrie "ok, bella is right ,we should go before the keeper came ,so let's take a couple of pictures and get out from here"

in the tiếp theo ngày ,after school ,carrie and john were sitting beyond a cây talking ,bella was wearing a mystical hat on her head and sweater , when she was near carrie and john she walked fast and đã đưa ý kiến "hey guys "then she ran away
john" what's wrong with bella?"
carrie" why she wearing the winter clothes in summer?"
john "come on"
carrie "where?"
john" to bella's house "
carrie "ok"


carrie knock bella's house door ,her mother answered "who is it?"
carrie"it's john and carrie ,we're bella's Những người bạn ,we came here to visit her"
carrie and john get into the house ,john knock bella's room door "bella open the door"
bella "just a second" then she opened the door
the room was dark ,bella closed the window in her room
john" bella what's going on?"
bella "nothing ,what do bạn mean ,oh please set down"
carrie and john set down ,carrie "what john meant is that you're not normal today ,you didn't speak with us in the school ,you're wearing the winter clothes in summer ,what's going on?"
bella" I don't feel good today ,maybe I need to see a doctor"
john "oh come on bella ,what's the problem ,is that because of your father?"
bella" what are bạn trying to say?"
carrie "we know that your father was taunts bạn and bạn dress the winter clothes to hide your wounds "
bella" no it's not dad"
john" then what is it?"
bella ",ok ,If I đã đưa ý kiến would bạn promise to not tell anyone and not make fun of me"
carrie" bel"
bella "ok, yesterday I had a nightmare that I was drowning in the sea ,and I was bleeding from every part of my body ,but the weird thing that I woke up and there was water under me ,and I was and the blood covered my clothes but the giường was clean from my blood"
carrie" ok ,that's very funny bella ,tell me what the real deal"
bella "I'm not kidding guys ,you have to believe me ,there's something wrong with me "
carrie "oh ,come on bella there's nothing wrong with bạn ,maybe bạn just need to see the doctor"
bella" right ,I'm going with my mother to the doctor now ,so If bạn excuse me "
john "ok will see bạn later"

after three days ,john and carrie can't find bella in the school ,so they came to check bella again in her house
when they were near the house ,a neighbor came and saw carrie and john ,he told them" don't bother yourself ,the family aren't here"
john" then where did they go?"
the neighbor "they went to bury their daughter in their city ,she died from 15 hours cách đây ,poor girl"
carrie" what are bạn talking about bella is dead"
the neighbor "yea , her parents found her dead in her giường , no one saw her after she died , well have a good ngày "
carrie look at john scared and asked him "bella is dead ,oh my god ,bella "she was crying
john" let's go trang chủ carrie"

after a couple days ,in the school ,john looked at carrie
and asked her "carrie ,what's wrong with me?"
carrie" what do bạn mean?"
john "I can't sleep ,it's been days and I can't sleep "
carrie" me too, maybe that because of bella's death"
john" maybe ,carrie do bạn remember what bella đã đưa ý kiến about her dream"
carrie" no I don't ,she was talking like a freak I couldn't understand anything "
john "me too ,so I'll see bạn later"
carrie" ok"

the school bells are ringing ,carrie walked trang chủ alone ,she saw a big black dog looking at her ,the dog was angry ,so he attack carrie ,carrie ran away screaming "help me please" but no one helped her ,she hide in a restaurant ,and told the owner "sir please there's an angry big dog attacking me ,would bạn please call the động vật controlling ,the owner didn't answer her ,carrie "sir please ,this is a life hoặc death problem"
a man pass her and vượt qua, cross her
carrie tried to touch a cup but she couldn't ,her hand vượt qua, cross the cup. she was unseen ,she felt scared, the dog disappeared , so carrie ran over john's house
carrie told john about what happened to her ,john happened to him the same thing
carrie "that's impossible"
john "I think bella's death affecting on us"
carrie" john I'm not kidding ,there's something strange "
john" like what? "
carrie "I don't know ,but we're not fine ,I think bella's death has something to do with what we saw"
john "what do bạn mean?"
carrie "bella's dream ,I want to remember it but I can't ,by the way why did bạn asked me last time about her dream?"
john" cause I saw a weird dream too"
carrie" what did bạn see?"
john "I saw myself falling from a mountain ,and I were bleeding from every single part of my body"
carrie"ohh my god ,now I remember "
john " remember what?"
carrie "bella's dream ,she saw herself drowning in the sea and she was bleeding too"
john "do bạn think that getting into that room has something to do with what happening to us "
carrie "I don't know ,I don't believe in these things but bởi what we saw I do believe it"
john "then let's go to the museum maybe we can find something there"
carrie" I'll not get into that room again"
john" we're not going to that room ,we will just collect some information about what's in that room"
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