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posted by Vampiyaa
"Hey, aren't bạn supposed to be in bed?" Toyo asked, when he spotted Aiko lying down on the đi văng đọc one of May's magazines. Aiko didn't respond. It took a few giây for Toyo to figure out she was sleeping.
"Silly," Toyo laughed, kneeling beside her. "You'd better wake up before the monitor finds out bạn didn't hiển thị up at your dorm." He attempted to prod her awake and then gasped as his entire body went numb. Something dark inside him stirred, and he widened his eyes and locked them on Aiko's neck. Unconciously, he reached out his hand and slid it onto Aiko's neck. The monster inside him fidgeted with pleasure as he savoured the warmth of her skin, the feeling of her pulse against his hand, the sensation of the blood rushing through her veins... Toyo gasped and yanked his hand back as he suddenly became aware of what he was doing. He bit his hand, causing blood to spill over his wrist.
"Not her..." he mumbled. But then he realized something was wrong. Toyo turned around again and placed his hand on her forehead. She was way too warm.
"Oh, god..." he whispered. "MAY, GET THE THERMOMETER, NOW!"

Aiko woke in a strange room, not a room she recognized. Her face was warm and her body was cold. Shivering, Aiko shoved the silk covers off of her and then suddenly heard hushed voices coming from a door to her right that stood hanging slightly ajar. She slid off the giường and peered through the crack in the door. The first thing she saw was Toyo kneeling on the floor, gasping and coughing and clutching his throat as if he were attempting to choke himself. May was standing over him with a cold expression on her face.
"See what you're putting yourself through?" she đã đưa ý kiến in annoyance. "If you'll just let me—"
"No," đã đưa ý kiến Toyo; his voice was hoarse and choked. It was clearly hard for him to speak between coughs.
What's wrong with Toyo? Aiko thought desperately. She contemplated about jumping into the room to help him, but before she could so much as di chuyển May slapped him across the face. Toyo tumbled to the ground, still panting.
"You see?" May đã đưa ý kiến coldly. "If bạn weren't killing yourself, bạn wouldn't even have moved when i did that." She knelt down beside him and steadied him.
"Your body is eating itself alive," she whispered. "From the inside out. bạn need human bl—"
"NO!" Toyo shouted, his head falling onto May's shoulder. "I won't ever... ever harm... a human..."
"Then at least replenish from me!"
"But... your blood... I can't even digest it anymore!" Toyo coughed.
"Try one thêm time," May insisted. Toyo, gulping for breath, lifted his head up weakly. Aiko's eyes widened as the light from the moon illuminated Toyo's actions. He brushed back May's hair with a shaking hand and, to Aiko's completely astonishment, pressed his lips to May's throat. His eyes flashed red and his tortured expression was replaced with something dark... something evil...
With a loud slicing noise, Toyo's fangs slid down to his lips. He opened his mouth wide and bit down, hard, on May's throat. Aiko watched in horror as blood spilled over Toyo's face. He took out his fangs from May's neck and emotionlessly licked the blood off of her neck.
Toyo is... a vampire? Aiko thought in horror. When Toyo, no longer coughing, walked into the room, he found an empty giường and the window open.

End of excerpt. I really do suck, don't I? |:D
posted by Me_Iz_Here
(Not a very creative name, I know)


ONE

I sat on the bed. Doing nothing. Nothing. Nothing. I looked at the clock. Friday, five-fifty-eight PM. Five-fifty-nine. Waiting. Waiting. tim, trái tim pounding. Counting seconds. Every week. Every week, SHE came. SHE would try to kill me. Then I would scream for help and they would come. Then I would get a lecture that nothing was there, possibly some treatment hoặc whatever. Then tiếp theo Friday at six, it would happen again.
Forty-five seconds. I glanced at the book. I brought it with me. That way, no one else would read it. It was old and leather-bound, and had pictures...
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posted by Vixie79
In a world of his
she unloads his gun

She and he waits for this
he releases his love

In blue and green orbs
she gives him thêm and more

A million miles away
A million years girl

In a black woven chest
he digs his nails deep

She trusts in him for what he does
live in a house in the suburbs

He kisses the pain with blood and light
sleeping it off in the morning

A million miles away
A million years girl

In her world of his
she unloads his gun

In a world of his
she covers the sun

A million miles away
A million years
A million years girl
posted by EmoKidSteven
Well bạn see
I'm not myself anymore
Well bạn can see
What I've done
Blinded myself
Mất tích my direction
In this times
That are getting cold
In this moment
To behold
And shine

Here's a poem
For all the loved ones
Here's a grave
For all the dead
Here's the oxygen
For all the living
Here's a tissue
For tears that are shed
I'm Mất tích now
I'm here now
I'm Mất tích here
bởi Myself
I'm gone now
I'm Mất tích again
I'm lost
bởi myself

Well take your houses
Take your money
Take the things bạn don't need
Live the life
You've always wanted
And then burn the memories
Take the good times and the bad
Take the happy maybe the sad
And turn, turn yourself around
I'm Mất tích in my own fairytale
Where I'm the winner
All over again
in my daydreams I've Mất tích all hope
All ambition
Looking and losing an only friend

I'm Mất tích now
I'm here now
I'm Mất tích here
bởi Myself
I'm gone now
I'm Mất tích again
I'm lost
bởi myself

I'm lost
I'm here
I'm Mất tích here
bởi myself

I'm Mất tích now
I'm here now
I'm Mất tích here
bởi myself

bởi myself
posted by twilight-rocks9
plz tell me if u like it hoặc if i should write more.


And his hair I tình yêu it!” my best friend Selene said. I make a gagging sound. “Oh shut up Gabs you’re going to be like this your boyfriend and I’m going to suffer.” she said. “You want to suffer then let me replay what bạn sound like.” I did a horrible impression of her. “Oh no I have to go bye gabby.” she said. When she got up she kicked sand on my arm. “Bye Lena” I đã đưa ý kiến a little too late. I looked at the suns bữa ăn, sự phô trương, refection on the clear blue ocean. I got up to go swimming when someone put their hands over my eyes and said...
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Source: I made it.
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posted by flabaloobalah
CHAPTER ONE: "CARTER"

There’s one silent sensation of falling really fast and really hard. Then it’s over. Just like that. Somewhere off in the distance, a girl screams. Maybe she’s tiếp theo to me and my damaged ears are playing tricks on me. hoặc maybe she really is far away from here, wherever that is.
    A flame billowing over a folded up car flicks its vile tongue. The ngọn lửa, chữa cháy reflects in the pools of blood and the bodies. Five bodies, and myself, still alive. Sirens wail and rescue teams and news vans swarm the scene. I moan and grip my chest, waiting for someone to notice...
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posted by Triscia95
“Caroline I’ve tried everything to prove my self time after time that I tình yêu you, that I would do anything for you, I’d never let anyone hurt you.” Klaus paused as Caroline stood in the door looking down at the hardwood floor tears rolling down her eyes. “That I would die for you.” He finished. Klaus took one step towards Caroline but as he did she took two steps away.

Klaus’s grieved face turned chua and full of anger. Nothing he did hoặc đã đưa ý kiến made her realize that if she asked anything he would do it with out a một giây thought. She shook her head and raced out the door.

He wasn’t...
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posted by Insight357
An Angel
A Demon
A battle
Raging in
The night sky

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

The Angel knelt down
On the cold winters ground
Spoke a soft prayer
Looked into the empty night air
Saw an image of himself

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

The demon summoned all his courage
And broke through the cage
He found no reason
He drew back his army
And walked to the Angel in harmony
With a fanged smile
From the demon
A wicked gleam
From the angel
They made their truths

Asphyxiation
A sweet sensation
No one knows the
Beckoning thought
In the bounds of your
Mind

No battle
No challenge
Peace
Amongst two forces
Now bonded
Inseparable
posted by Nesrino
Once upon a time, there was a 15 năm old boy named Will who loved sports as if they were his whole life. From the beginning of his first ngày at school, Will tried out for the bóng đá team and they were amazed how talented this boy was at sports at such a young age. When Will became 12 years of age, he had won the scool over 20 awards for each soccer, bóng rổ and quần vợt competition they entered. He has also become very fit and well-built from all his exercising and sports, and seems to think that being fit was one of the most important things a person should accomplish in life. Will has always...
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posted by mars15
I need you
from the first moment i saw you
I need you
because you're the air i breathe
I need you
because you're the water i drink
I need you
because just the thought of seeing bạn makes me want to get out of bed
I need you
because bạn can with just one smile make my whole world starts to turning again
I need you
because bạn make me wake up from my the most horrible nightmare without fear
I need you
because bạn can give me hope when i don't have one
I need you
because even if I'm at the bottom,you're always there to help me stand up
I need you
because in this cruel world bạn keep me alive
I need you
because i know that you'll never give up from me
I need you
because when no one believed in me bạn were there to stand up for me
I need you
because you're everything for me
But the most important thing why i need bạn is
because I'll always tình yêu you!


This was in my head so i just thought to write it
posted by nimone
Let's be honest we have all at least once in our lives experienced the misfortune that is the power cut.

The power cut it'self may not be as intolerable depending on the circumstance. If bạn live in a place where it is sunny and there is a lot to do outside then bạn don't have much to worry about.
I for one do live in this kind of climate usually. This however was not the case yesterday!

Not only was it the only ngày of the week where everything is closed as it was a Sunday, oh no it was also pouring down raining!

I was forced indoors with nothing to do and it was really dark inside due to the...
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posted by irena83
Life,
priceless and important,
gives bạn the roads
and leaves bạn choices
of which your luck depends on.


This is your life
and bạn live it
wrapped bởi sadness
hoặc happiness.
Who cares?


This is your life,
invisible for others.


bạn pick the road
and pray that the choice
is right,
but life loves bạn not,
that's bạn who tình yêu
the joy of life.


Life,
priceless and important,
gives bạn choices,
unpredictable events,
grays and hope,
and life is all yours.


But, the câu hỏi is
will bạn remain sane
even though your life
is cruel to your dreams,
will bạn remain sane
even when your life
is dying in your eyes.
posted by irena83
Chapter 5: News

Suddenly, she felt weird.
She went quickly at the bathroom
and laved herself.
She looked pale and was feeling sick.
She closed her eyes and tried to
take a deep breath.
Now she felt little better.
She took a phone and called a neighbor,
telling her that she must see a doctor
and someone should take care of Gwenny.
Joanna đã đưa ý kiến that there were no reason
to be worried about and she would
look after baby.
Dana, thankful and scared the same time,
got dressed quickly and immediately
called a cab.
While she was waiting for a cab,
she was so confused and tense.
The cab came soon.
She barely could...
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their are six technique(originally theirs eight but i only know six)


technigue one:Start with a short,effective sentence(4-5 words max): Her hair shone gold.

technique two:Start with an interesting metaphor hoặc simile: The chó sói, sói was like a tornado,changing the lives of all who crossed his path.

technique three:Start with a literary device(ex.onomatopoeia,alliteration,etc):Gobbling Grandma and her grandchild was his plan all along.

technique four:Start with a prepositional phrase: ALong the spooky road to Grandma's house,Red skipped with an air of confidence.

technique five:Start with a riddle and...
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posted by sweetpea92
    Everyday at lunch for all of high school so far I would stand in line and wait to get up to the front to tell the lunch lady that “I need a to-go tray please.” Then once I had gotten my tray, I would scan my lunch card and dash down the hallway to my yêu thích teacher’s room to tham gia “the lunch bunch” on everyday except Wednesday, and Friday. On those days the beginning of this routine is relatively the same, but instead of heading off to another meeting of the lunch bunch, I would take a detour at the thư viện to tham gia my Những người bạn at our usual table, for either...
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There was once a boy
Who loved a girl
A very distant girl- haunted bởi her demons that no one else could see
The boy- lonely and afraid of pursuing his passions
The heat of the mid-July sun beating on their backs
On a little dirt road tiếp theo to a vine-covered wall
That little boy handed the little girl a vôi green envelope
Her name printed on that envelope in his fine pen writing

Their cheeks red and hearts pounding
The two continued their days apart
Both afraid their darkness will come over
And destroy what they tried to break
The ngày to follow, that little broken girl
Smiling a real smile for the first...
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