i think this is a great story idea, but what do bạn think?

Vocaloid: 13 năm old killer
After all of her Những người bạn abandoned her, Rin has now become a lonely android. When she turns 11, she meets a human named Hatsune Miku and they become friends. But when Hatsune goes away on vacation, Rin thinks Hatsune has left her as well. Rin then becomes angry and she murders someone at age thirteen. When Hatsune comes back, she finds out that Rin is to be executed for her sin, and says her last goodbye.