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xin chào guys, I just want to know your opinion on the prolouge of my murder mystery, "Twilight Cove"
Prolouge:
January 13,1996
The wind blew across the cliffs that overlooked the watery lengths of the cove. On this perticular
night, a boy of about seventeen years of age was sitting on the cliff that had the best view of the water. The boy's name was Casey Wilson. He was the ngôi sao of Twilight Cove High's track team.
He looked down at the letter he clutched in his shaking hands for about the four hundreth time.
It was late at night, and in early January nonetheless, and he was shivering. The snow had already began falling, and the forecasts had been very confident it would snow from the late hours of the night into early morning. Casey turned and looked through the dark once again. He looked at the letter once more. It read "I know you're secret. Meet me at the cliffs that overlook Twilight Cove, come alone. Casey felt stupid for not coming armed, but he really had no idea of where the location of the súng in his house were.
He looked at his watch. It was six phút past eleven thirty. He sighed. He was going to die of frostbite hoặc hypothermia if he didn't leave soon.
Finally, just as he was ready to give up, he saw a shadow that resembled a person walking up to greet him. "Casey?" asked the voice. "Yeah." he replied. He only replied because he knew who the voice belonged to. Before he could speak, the person who had just arrived raced over and shoved Casey off the cliff. His screams echoed throught
the entire cove. The person stared down for a moment, then climbed down to him. They felt no pulse in his wrist, and he wasn't breathing either. He was dead. The person then pushed Casey's body into the lake, and waited until it sank under the water. High tide was set for early the following morning, and they knew even if Casey's body was ever found, they would never suspect he was murdered, and even if they did, they'd never find the killer. The snow began to fall thêm heavily, and all was silent as the person walked away from the cove.
__________________________
January 13,1996
The wind blew across the cliffs that overlooked the watery lengths of the cove. On this perticular
night, a boy of about seventeen years of age was sitting on the cliff that had the best view of the water. The boy's name was Casey Wilson. He was the ngôi sao of Twilight Cove High's track team.
He looked down at the letter he clutched in his shaking hands for about the four hundreth time.
It was late at night, and in early January nonetheless, and he was shivering. The snow had already began falling, and the forecasts had been very confident it would snow from the late hours of the night into early morning. Casey turned and looked through the dark once again. He looked at the letter once more. It read "I know you're secret. Meet me at the cliffs that overlook Twilight Cove, come alone. Casey felt stupid for not coming armed, but he really had no idea of where the location of the súng in his house were.
He looked at his watch. It was six phút past eleven thirty. He sighed. He was going to die of frostbite hoặc hypothermia if he didn't leave soon.
Finally, just as he was ready to give up, he saw a shadow that resembled a person walking up to greet him. "Casey?" asked the voice. "Yeah." he replied. He only replied because he knew who the voice belonged to. Before he could speak, the person who had just arrived raced over and shoved Casey off the cliff. His screams echoed throught
the entire cove. The person stared down for a moment, then climbed down to him. They felt no pulse in his wrist, and he wasn't breathing either. He was dead. The person then pushed Casey's body into the lake, and waited until it sank under the water. High tide was set for early the following morning, and they knew even if Casey's body was ever found, they would never suspect he was murdered, and even if they did, they'd never find the killer. The snow began to fall thêm heavily, and all was silent as the person walked away from the cove.
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