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Crusilla was born in 1896. Her sister, Sharon, came a năm after. When Crusilla died, she did not stay dead for long. She came back a năm later to get her revenge. Now, the năm is 2011, and Crusilla and Sharon are back. They return to the trang chủ they once lived in and found a girl bởi the name of Emma who is living there. When they pretend to be tired travelers, Emma lets them stay with her. But when Emma finds a portrait of Crusilla that dated back to 1910, she then knows their secret: They are not alive, they are spirits. When Crusilla and Sharon find out that Emma knows about them, they decide to use their powers as the Angel and the demon to send Emma to hell, but when Crusilla realizes that Emma understands her feelings she decides to go against her sister causing one of the most bloody battles in all of history.

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Moonlight_Kitty said:
It sounds interesting, but it isn't something I would read. bạn have a good idea, and I think it could become a great story.
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zeebem10 said:
I would read it thats for sure.
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