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Would anybody read this...?

Here's the intro.:

"Hi. bạn know the saying 'The night of your life is when bạn die.'? Yeah. I've already had the 'night of my life', I've already died; on the inside, at least. When I was 14, I was raped. This is my story."

Hhm? The story will differ from her living it, and her telling about it.
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 POPclogger216 posted hơn một năm qua
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2dolphn97 said:
I didn't like it. It was very blant and straightforward. It's kinda like saying xin chào what's up? How's the weather, I got raped!!! Not a good intro
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Well, it was written for introducing the plotline, and the first chapter was done as her both living it, and her telling about it. Thank bạn for answering.
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Moonlight_Kitty said:
Sorry, I don't like it.
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It's okay. Is there a certain thing bạn don't like, hoặc the plot in general? Just wondering. :)
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Personally, I don't like the plot. bạn have a good idea, it's just the 'rape' part that gets me. I don't like hearing, hoặc reading, about those types of things. Sorry
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No, it's completely fine. Thank bạn for answering!
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writer67 said:
;-[yes id read, hoping someone has become stronger, as the one had been caught and was facing punishement, knowing one ngày God will have revenge,for those that have escaped mans judgement. it takes guts n balls to allow te story out, so the heal can start, before it eats away on the insides to get out into the open.;-]
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Um, okay...? Thank you. And, what do bạn mean bởi all the talk about becoming stronger, God's revenge, and allowing the story out?
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if what u write about has happened to u. a story of fact not fiction, many suffer and take it upon themselves to seek revenge. many keep what has happened bottled up as they feel dishonor, hope it makes sense now.;-]
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crazywolf23 said:
its ok, but kinda boring
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darkling_menace said:
'The night of your life is when bạn die'? Who says that?
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I got it from a song title. And, I realize, the intro sucks eggs. But, the real story's better written than this, in my opinion. Thank bạn for answering.
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saramanusson said:
i like it, i think bạn should write it, would tình yêu to read it.
If bạn cut out the "hi" part it would make an awesome intro for a movie.
But most important....if bạn like it, bạn should write it. It dosen´t matter what others think! ;-D
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Thank you! :) And, I do actually have this đã đăng up on here, it's called A Choice.z Here's a link:link
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Taismo4ever97 said:
I don't read about those type of things and so I probably wouldn't read it, but thats just me.
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It's okay. Each is to their own. Thank bạn for answering!
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no prob.
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