opinions needed!!!

i know this is based of off the actual singers from vocaloid, but i wanna know if bạn guys would read this if i wrote it:

Vocaloid
Hatsune Miku’s dream is finally coming true; she now has a hát contract, but she is not going to share the glory alone. Now Hatsune and her friends, Rin, Ragashi, Luka, and Len are all part of the band, Vocaloid. Within months, they become the most được ưa chuộng band in all of Electratown. But fame always comes with a price. When a local singer named Hirogoshi starts going to their school, she begins to hate all of the band members of Vocaloid for stealing her fame. But Hatsune and her Những người bạn know how to deal with rivals. They have concerts nearly every night, high school drama, and secret lives that no one even knows about… unless Hirogoshi reveals the secret.