New Story Idea, your opinion?

The Healers where simple creatures that live among us, they were different, but yet the same as us, only a few humans know there existence, now we live in peace together,that was until Skylar Evans was born, she was the first Healer to be born with màu tím eyes in over a thousand years. This meant The Immortals were rising once again and the whole Healer species was endangered. Everyone wanted to teach Skylar about their ways, but her mother and father would not allow it, instead they moved to a small town and pretended to be a normal family. But they knew that other Healers were watching them, protecting their daughter. Now Skylar is fifteen years old and everything seemed to be perfect, until her parents got a call that The Immortals were going to come after them, and they could not run. And around the same time Skylar meets, who she thinks, is the boy of her dreams. But as her parents tell her the secrets and humans are dangerous, any human could be working with The Immortals, Skylar refused to listen, as it is, another "friend" from her school suddenly begins to talk to her, he had been her protector since the eighth grade. Skylar now has to protect her family, watch out for traitors, and balance to guys she might be in tình yêu with all at the same time.
How is she going to survive?
(This is a tình yêu Triangle/ adventure story)