Kellan

Hey....did bạn expect that hoặc what? Haha....I did good!! :) Well here is the end of Jacob's POV then Bella's! Enjoy. -Kayla

Chapter 12. (Jacob)

I looked at Edward. He started backing towards the forest. "What's wrong." I asked him whispering. "I was coming to ask bạn because Alice saw her vision blank for the rest of her life. I was wondering if she picked bạn hoặc not. And right now she smells like wet dog." I stared at him. "Of course she smells like wet dog. It's because I hugged her." I whispered. "I heard that!" She screamed. Edward's jaw dropped. 'She heard us?' I thought to him. He nodded....

ok so at the time i was nghề viết văn this i had everything planed and prefect to read.now the majority of this is in a note book but i have some really good stuff already typed . so im posting what i have typed and i want your opinion on whats good and bad. thx so much for ur input
oh and bởi the way im 14 so if this is really crappy im sorry and there are a lot of typos like a lot first draft crap LOL – Liên minh huyền thoại well ok so please just read and enjoy

the first 8 chapters are from bellas point of view then right to renesmee she finishes the book/story ok what this story is about is when the Cullen's all move...