Ok guys, I took in your các bình luận and this is what I wrote. It was difficult to write. I wrote three different ones. Ones with just vampires, one with just Người sói and one with both. This is the one with both. Enjoy and tell me what bạn think!!





I ran as fast as I could. I didn’t know where to go exactly but anywhere away from the vampire. I thought that since I had run away from him he would give up and find someone else but no. The vamp was right behind me. I ran right into the woods. The farther away this vamp was from humans the better. I sprinted through the woods. I wasn’t sure what to do with the vampire. Should I fight him and kill him? hoặc try to civilise him, make him like the Cullens? I glanced behind me and gasped when I saw how close he was to me. I turned back and smacked my head on a low cây branch. It knocked me off my feet and I fell backwards onto the ground. I groaned and touched my forehead which was wet and warm. I pulled my hand away and saw blood. I stood up and ducked under the branch and began to run again but I knew I wouldn’t get away from him. I had just ruined my chance when I ran into the branch. I looked behind me again (I made sure there were no branches first) and saw that he wasn’t there. I must have Mất tích him. I turned back and smacked into something solid. That knocked me off my feet too, except it wasn’t a branch. I looked up and saw the red eyes of the vamp. He must have jumped over me when I wasn’t looking. He reached out with one of his cold hands and picked me up bởi the neck. He held me up so he could look straight into my eyes. I was gasping for air and smacking his hands but it didn’t do any good. I felt like my eyes were bulging out of their sockets. He was eyeing me manically, driven wild bởi the sight and smell of my blood. He was bringing me ever closer to his teeth and I had to do something. I poked him in the eyes. He dropped me and his hands went to his eyes automatically, like something a human would do. Any other vampire wouldn’t have done that because it wouldn’t have caused them pain. He must be a newborn hoặc else a very reluctant vampire who wanted to keep his human traits. I searched his mind, going past the thoughts of him drinking my blood and saw that he was bitten less than two months ago. He was controlled bởi his thirst and he didn’t have a clue how to stop it. I almost felt some pity for this guy. Then I remembered he was trying to kill me. I jumped up and punched him in the stomach, full force, my entire strength. He doubled over and I kneed him in the face. I thought I had actually hurt him as he was still doubled over and clutching his face. I was astounded, thinking I had caused a vampire pain when his hand shot out, clamped around my leg and he flipped me backwards. I landed hard on my front. He flipped me over onto my back and bent his head down to my neck. I rolled over fast and stood up. I stomped down on his neck but I didn’t hear anything crack. This newborn was too strong. I wouldn’t be able to take him on bởi myself. The fear and panic that I had been holding back now began to seep through me. I hadn’t panicked because I was sure I could deal with him. I had the strength and the speed and special little abilities to do it but newborns are stronger than just your average vampire. And with human blood he had just consumed before meeting me only made him stronger. I hesitated unsure what to do. Should I just run and hope I bump into another Azdi hoặc one of the Cullens? hoặc do I continue fighting and bởi some miracle I defeat him? The vamp saw my hesitation and used it. He pushed me to the ground and pinned my arms to side and lay on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me. I felt his cold lips brush the skin on my neck. I tried to break his grip on my arms but it was hopeless. I tried to kick him off me but it was like kicking a brick wall. A single tear slid down from my eye as I knew I was about to die. Death was right there on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me – literally. The fear reached such a height I knew it must be rolling off me in big strong waves. The vamp loved that I was finally scared; it made my death only thêm pleasurable for him. My breathing became faster as I felt his sharp teeth on my neck. They hadn’t pierced my skin yet, he was waiting for dramatic effect. thêm tears fell from my eyes as I thought about Charlie and my mum and Edward. I would never see them again, never speak to them, never hug them. How ironic was this? I finally realise I’m in tình yêu Edward and I get eaten bởi a vampire. I di chuyển all the way here to see Charlie and all I do is spend all my time with Edward. I haven’t had a proper talk with Charlie since before I was changed. I had never told Charlie that I loved him and the last time I hugged him was, well...I can’t even remember. I wished this vamp would let me go and hug Charlie before he consumed my blood, even if it was just a quick one. Just so Charlie would know that I did tình yêu him and not hate him for making me like this.
I could see in the newborn’s mind that he was going to bite me. He was excited about getting to feed again and he felt slightly exhilarated that I had put up a fight. I was glad I had put up a fight too; at least I had tried to save myself.
A vicious snarl echoed through the trees. Something was coming to us, something angry. The vamp was angry at being interrupted but also slightly scared of the creature that had made such a terrifying noise. A white blur streaked through the trees and jumped at the vampire, pushing him off me. The blur became two blurs as they rolled over each other in the momentum of the pounce. A thunderous growl rocked the trees and an enormous beast with reddish brown lông, lông thú erupted from the trees. It leaped over me and landed surprisingly lightly at the vampires. At first I thought it was going to attack both but it only seemed interested in hurting the newborn. The newborn jumped up first and tried to run but the beast let out a deafening roar and bounded over him and blocked his path. It bared its teeth hiển thị the newborn it was very dangerous. It was then as this mammoth creature growled at the newborn that I saw that it was wolf. I had never seen a chó sói, sói this big before and doubted that there had ever been a chó sói, sói this size recorded in history, but a chó sói, sói it was. The blur that had attacked the newborn stood up and he looked very familiar. He had bronze hair and golden eyes. He glanced at me, his golden eyes filled with concern and pain but then the newborn snarled at the chó sói, sói and his eyes changed. They became cold, hard and aggressive. He turned to the newborn and attacked him and a deadly dance began. The bronze haired vampire resembled a lion in the way that he moved and attacked. He was slightly faster than the newborn because he would be able to hear every di chuyển the newborn made before he did it. The newborn was stronger and frequently there were metallic snaps and crunches as someone slipped in their defense. The chó sói, sói lunged suddenly at the newborn and tore off an arm. It tossed the arm onto the ground and I crawled back from it. The arm twitched and moved mindlessly, trying to get back to its owner. The Lion snarled ferociously at the newborn and I knew why. He hated this vampire, detested him, loathed it for attempting to hurt me. Rage and pain were the dominant emotions in this Lion’s mind, nothing more. He struck the newborn again and again letting his rage take over. The chó sói, sói stepped back, sensing that the Lion wanted this fight. The Lion had an advantage. The newborn was an arm down. The Lion was lethal. He picked up the newborn and slammed him into a tree. It snapped in half with the force the Lion had exerted. The newborn stood up, looking slightly dizzy from his collision with the tree. The Lion grabbed him and threw him to the ground with all the strength he had in his body. The newborn lay still on the ground, unmoving. I knew that the newborn wasn’t really unconscious hoặc dead hoặc even slightly hurt. He was feinting and the Lion would know this. The Lion stood their watching the vamp, never taking his eyes off it. In his mind, the Lion was worried for me. As long as the newborn was living his eyes would never leave it. An arm shot out from the vamp but the Lion crushed it with his foot and a resounding crack echoed. The newborn shrieked and the Lion fastened a hand around his neck. He lifted it up and threw it at the wolf. The chó sói, sói bared his teeth in what looked like a grin and began to rip apart the newborn brutally. The Lion tore strips of wood of the cây that had been snapped in half and stacked them together in something that resembled a bonfire. The chó sói, sói padded over with chunks of solid white in his mouth and chucked them on hàng đầu, đầu trang of the wood. The Lion pulled out a silver rectangle from his pocket. There was a click and a flame appeared. He held the flame to the wood and it caught fire. Thick purple smoke curled up to the sky, looking denser than it should. It smelled like burning incense and it was too uncomfortable, too heavy. The chó sói, sói continued to toss body parts onto the ngọn lửa, chữa cháy until there was nothing left of the vampire that had tried to kill me. I coughed the smoke catching in my throat. It was then that the Lion and the chó sói, sói remembered that I was there. The chó sói, sói looked at the Lion who nodded. It glanced at me, its eyes looking so familiar, before retreating into the trees leaving me alone with the Lion.
I stared at the Lion and saw his golden eyes soften. I was still on the ground. I had watched it all from here. Everything had happened so fast that there was hardly anytime in which to get up and run. But I wouldn’t have run. I would have stayed to make sure that the Lion didn’t get hurt. I wouldn’t be able to live if he had gotten hurt and I was to blame. The Lion was walking towards me steadily. He was making deliberate movements to hiển thị me that he wasn’t a danger to me.
Kayla.
I heard the velvet voice of Edward in my mind and any fear that was in me was gone. Now that he was here I knew I would be safe. Although the Lion is Edward, he wasn’t the Edward I knew. The Lion was full of rage and fury. He was aggressive and lethal. He was a vampire. The Edward I knew was acted thêm human than vampire. He was never aggressive with me; he was thêm loving and caring.
I won’t hurt you, I promise.
I smiled at Edward, to hiển thị him I wasn’t afraid. He sighed with relief and was beside in me in less than a second. He held me in his arms and I lay my head on his chest. He stroked my head, comforting me. He could see into my mind and knew that everything that had just happened was on replay. It was playing over in my mind. The vampire with his blood red eyes, it on hàng đầu, đầu trang of me and its teeth at my neck, Edward attacking the newborn looking so destructive and hostile.
You’re hurt. He was touching my forehead lightly. I lifted a hand to touch my forehead but Edward found it first and intertwined his fingers with mine. He lifted my hand to his lips and kissed my skin softly. His mind was full of thoughts of me. He had almost Mất tích me today and that was as much as he could bear. If I was dead then he wouldn’t be able to continue living his eternal life.
I lifted my head off his chest and looked up into his eyes. đọc my mind he bent his head down and I kissed his lips, his cheek, anywhere that I could on that magnificent face of his.
Come on. We have to leave before someone comes to see what has started that fire.
I let him pick me up and he gently put me on his back. I locked my legs around his waist and my arm around his neck. I lay my head on his back and closed my eyes as he ran.