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Sorry for the delay I have had some sever mental block and I couldnt think of anything to write LOL! Enjoy chapter 12 and remember to feedback and keep looking for chapter 13! Amber/Twilightsauce.
I smiled as my eyelids fluttered open. The sun was streaming in through the window making my skin glitter in a mysterious way but not sparkling like the rest of my vampire family. I knew that Jacob was awake because everything was silent- Jake was the LOUDEST snorer ever. I propped myself up on two of the fluffy pillows to get a better view of his face. Jacobs’s eyes were closed but he had a huge grin spread across his face.
“Morning,” I giggled,
“Good morning, sleepy head.” Jake chuckled ruffling my hair in an adoring way.
“Ugh, we’ve got so much to do today,” I moaned thinking about the whole aspect about telling EVERYONE I was engaged, “I haven’t even seen the whole house yet!”
“Calm down Nessie, why don’t bạn get dressed and I will start breakfast?”
“Okay, which door is the bathroom?” I asked raising my eyebrows.
“The left one, I think bạn guess what the một giây one is,” he chuckled kissing my hair before pulling on a dressing gown.
“Hmmm, it couldn’t be something to do with Alice could it?” I questions, my voice full of mock sarcasm.
“Yeah, just wait till bạn see it, it’s bloody huge.” As he walked down the hall to where I presumed the phòng bếp, nhà bếp was.
The bathroom was a little smaller than the bedroom and fitted with luxurious modern gadgets. The bath was thêm like a swimming pool and the ‘taps’ were mounted on the ceiling above in a giant square. I had to admit it was impressive, the cottage looked small and old fashioned on the outside but the inside... well that was a whole different story.
After I had had a bath and got myself looking decent I wrapped myself into a towel and walked out of the bathroom. I stood outside the một giây door taking a big breath; I loved new clothes almost as much as Alice but I was not sure how big this closet would be. I opened the door and blinked, had I gotten the wrong door? Behind the door there was a closet but it was no bigger than an ordinary one. I looked around the closet and saw nothing but my old clothes, now that was strange Alice would buy a whole new wardrobe for anyone at the first chance she got. That was when my eyes laid sight on a small note on the bottom of the closet. I bent down to pick it up and recognised Alice’s neat scrawl,
Push the back of the closet.
Alice
I did as the note instructed and as I pushed the back of the closet; it swung open. I gasped out loud at the sight that met my eyes, below me there was a beautiful spiralling staircase which led to an elaborately furnish underground closet. I knew what I wanted and was instantly down the stairs and trying to sniff out the correct materials for the right outfit. I succeeded and when I was dressed in a small pair of denim shorts and white feathery áo cánh, blouse I brushed out my bronze hair, letting it fall in natural curls around my face. When I was ready I headed upstairs to meet Jake.
“So, do bạn think we should tell everyone today?” I asked over a plate of bánh mì nướng and scrambled egg, it tasted okay but I really wanted to go hunting soon.
“I think it’s a good idea, guess what,” Jake đã đưa ý kiến swallowing a whole piece of bánh mì nướng in one mouthful, “the Denali’s are over. They want the wedding here because that is where the majority of the pack are and they actually want us to be there.” Jake đã đưa ý kiến not bothering to disguise the shock in his voice.
“God yeah, the wedding is so soon; mums going to be totally jazzed when she hears about us.”
“Yeah, I’m not sure about Blondie though,” he muttered through gritted teeth, Jake and Rosalie’s relationship had improved since I was a baby but they still made snide các bình luận about each other when they were alone.
“Ugh not that again, can bạn at least TRY to behave today?” I asked rolling my eyes.
“I suppose I could for you...” he trailed of, his lips pressing softly against mine. I pulled away after a minute,
“Come on, I can’t wait to tell the others!” I squealed hopping of my ghế, chỗ ngồi and bounding towards the front door, the rest of the house could wait until later; I was pretty sure I would be seeing loads of it soon.
When we reached the main house we stepped through the back door into the sitting room and found everyone waiting for us there. All of the faces on my beautiful mural were here in real life, except Billy of course. I was Mất tích for words.
“Zafrina, Maggie, what are bạn all doing here!” I laughed going over to greet them.
“Now that the wedding is here we decided to come early and help to set up.” Maggie exclaimed, her short curls bouncing on her shoulders.
That was it, I needed to tell them, I couldn’t keep a secret long anyway; not with this bunch around.
“What’s the matter Nessie,” Jasper asked with a kind smile, he could obviously feel my anxiousness.
“Well, it’s just that... we have some news.” I spluttered.
“What is it, come on tell us,” Quill laughed with Claire,
“Jake and I are going to get married,” There it was out now, nothing I could do about it. Jake put a protective arm around my shoulder feeling my discomfort. There was a shocked silence and then everyone broke into applause. All of the faces of my Những người bạn and family were elated with joy. My vision got blurred with tears as mum hugged me tightly, with Esme closely after followed bởi dad then Carlisle then Emmet. I was handed around like this until everyone had hugged me. I presumed Jake was in a similar situation.
After all the hugging and congratulating I caught Esme and Alice looking at my new outfit and then Alice nudged Alice and Bella. They knew something.
“So I see bạn found the house, do bạn like it?” Esme asked putting her arm around me as I sat tiếp theo to her.
“Esme its perfect, thank bạn so much every one Jake told me how bạn helped.” I đã đưa ý kiến fixing my eyes on Jakes who was sitting on the opposite sofa with mum and dad and Alice. There were so many people here that others were scattered over the floor and most of the chó sói, sói pack were either perched on an item of furniture- the edge of the sofa, phòng bếp, nhà bếp side ect- but I could hear Quil and Embery raiding the fridge.
“We are so glad bạn liked it, but I really need to get bạn out of shorts; the hàng đầu, đầu trang is fine but the shorts...” Alice sighed with a smirk.
“You look fine kiddo!” Emmet laughed as he made his way back out to the kitchen, he was great Những người bạn with Quil and Embery now that the treaty was over.
“Thanks Emmet!” I called with a grin, although today was pretty special some things never changed; I liked it that way.
Several hours later and I had had the final fitting for my bridesmaid dress and we had run through the whole walking down the aisle scenario with Kate. We had made sure that Garret was out of the room but that was easy because he was thirsty so just went hunting. Kate looked amazing in her dress even without her hair done; she was going to be the perfect bride. And I knew that I would be the perfect bride someday as well.
Sorry for the delay I have had some sever mental block and I couldnt think of anything to write LOL! Enjoy chapter 12 and remember to feedback and keep looking for chapter 13! Amber/Twilightsauce.
I smiled as my eyelids fluttered open. The sun was streaming in through the window making my skin glitter in a mysterious way but not sparkling like the rest of my vampire family. I knew that Jacob was awake because everything was silent- Jake was the LOUDEST snorer ever. I propped myself up on two of the fluffy pillows to get a better view of his face. Jacobs’s eyes were closed but he had a huge grin spread across his face.
“Morning,” I giggled,
“Good morning, sleepy head.” Jake chuckled ruffling my hair in an adoring way.
“Ugh, we’ve got so much to do today,” I moaned thinking about the whole aspect about telling EVERYONE I was engaged, “I haven’t even seen the whole house yet!”
“Calm down Nessie, why don’t bạn get dressed and I will start breakfast?”
“Okay, which door is the bathroom?” I asked raising my eyebrows.
“The left one, I think bạn guess what the một giây one is,” he chuckled kissing my hair before pulling on a dressing gown.
“Hmmm, it couldn’t be something to do with Alice could it?” I questions, my voice full of mock sarcasm.
“Yeah, just wait till bạn see it, it’s bloody huge.” As he walked down the hall to where I presumed the phòng bếp, nhà bếp was.
The bathroom was a little smaller than the bedroom and fitted with luxurious modern gadgets. The bath was thêm like a swimming pool and the ‘taps’ were mounted on the ceiling above in a giant square. I had to admit it was impressive, the cottage looked small and old fashioned on the outside but the inside... well that was a whole different story.
After I had had a bath and got myself looking decent I wrapped myself into a towel and walked out of the bathroom. I stood outside the một giây door taking a big breath; I loved new clothes almost as much as Alice but I was not sure how big this closet would be. I opened the door and blinked, had I gotten the wrong door? Behind the door there was a closet but it was no bigger than an ordinary one. I looked around the closet and saw nothing but my old clothes, now that was strange Alice would buy a whole new wardrobe for anyone at the first chance she got. That was when my eyes laid sight on a small note on the bottom of the closet. I bent down to pick it up and recognised Alice’s neat scrawl,
Push the back of the closet.
Alice
I did as the note instructed and as I pushed the back of the closet; it swung open. I gasped out loud at the sight that met my eyes, below me there was a beautiful spiralling staircase which led to an elaborately furnish underground closet. I knew what I wanted and was instantly down the stairs and trying to sniff out the correct materials for the right outfit. I succeeded and when I was dressed in a small pair of denim shorts and white feathery áo cánh, blouse I brushed out my bronze hair, letting it fall in natural curls around my face. When I was ready I headed upstairs to meet Jake.
“So, do bạn think we should tell everyone today?” I asked over a plate of bánh mì nướng and scrambled egg, it tasted okay but I really wanted to go hunting soon.
“I think it’s a good idea, guess what,” Jake đã đưa ý kiến swallowing a whole piece of bánh mì nướng in one mouthful, “the Denali’s are over. They want the wedding here because that is where the majority of the pack are and they actually want us to be there.” Jake đã đưa ý kiến not bothering to disguise the shock in his voice.
“God yeah, the wedding is so soon; mums going to be totally jazzed when she hears about us.”
“Yeah, I’m not sure about Blondie though,” he muttered through gritted teeth, Jake and Rosalie’s relationship had improved since I was a baby but they still made snide các bình luận about each other when they were alone.
“Ugh not that again, can bạn at least TRY to behave today?” I asked rolling my eyes.
“I suppose I could for you...” he trailed of, his lips pressing softly against mine. I pulled away after a minute,
“Come on, I can’t wait to tell the others!” I squealed hopping of my ghế, chỗ ngồi and bounding towards the front door, the rest of the house could wait until later; I was pretty sure I would be seeing loads of it soon.
When we reached the main house we stepped through the back door into the sitting room and found everyone waiting for us there. All of the faces on my beautiful mural were here in real life, except Billy of course. I was Mất tích for words.
“Zafrina, Maggie, what are bạn all doing here!” I laughed going over to greet them.
“Now that the wedding is here we decided to come early and help to set up.” Maggie exclaimed, her short curls bouncing on her shoulders.
That was it, I needed to tell them, I couldn’t keep a secret long anyway; not with this bunch around.
“What’s the matter Nessie,” Jasper asked with a kind smile, he could obviously feel my anxiousness.
“Well, it’s just that... we have some news.” I spluttered.
“What is it, come on tell us,” Quill laughed with Claire,
“Jake and I are going to get married,” There it was out now, nothing I could do about it. Jake put a protective arm around my shoulder feeling my discomfort. There was a shocked silence and then everyone broke into applause. All of the faces of my Những người bạn and family were elated with joy. My vision got blurred with tears as mum hugged me tightly, with Esme closely after followed bởi dad then Carlisle then Emmet. I was handed around like this until everyone had hugged me. I presumed Jake was in a similar situation.
After all the hugging and congratulating I caught Esme and Alice looking at my new outfit and then Alice nudged Alice and Bella. They knew something.
“So I see bạn found the house, do bạn like it?” Esme asked putting her arm around me as I sat tiếp theo to her.
“Esme its perfect, thank bạn so much every one Jake told me how bạn helped.” I đã đưa ý kiến fixing my eyes on Jakes who was sitting on the opposite sofa with mum and dad and Alice. There were so many people here that others were scattered over the floor and most of the chó sói, sói pack were either perched on an item of furniture- the edge of the sofa, phòng bếp, nhà bếp side ect- but I could hear Quil and Embery raiding the fridge.
“We are so glad bạn liked it, but I really need to get bạn out of shorts; the hàng đầu, đầu trang is fine but the shorts...” Alice sighed with a smirk.
“You look fine kiddo!” Emmet laughed as he made his way back out to the kitchen, he was great Những người bạn with Quil and Embery now that the treaty was over.
“Thanks Emmet!” I called with a grin, although today was pretty special some things never changed; I liked it that way.
Several hours later and I had had the final fitting for my bridesmaid dress and we had run through the whole walking down the aisle scenario with Kate. We had made sure that Garret was out of the room but that was easy because he was thirsty so just went hunting. Kate looked amazing in her dress even without her hair done; she was going to be the perfect bride. And I knew that I would be the perfect bride someday as well.
This story take place after Nessie is born. Zoey has been in the family since The begining of twilight. Although I don't cover anything from the books. Whatever happen to Bella it happen to Zoey accept getting pregant with a half vampire half human baby. Zoey is in tình yêu with Jacob Black but Jake is in tình yêu with Nessie. Alice and Jasper are practically her parents. She fill like the outsider because she is not a vampire, warewolf hoặc like Nessie. The Volturi have dicided that she can be a human, until a ngày after she turns 17. She has her GED so she doesn't have to go to school.
Ok don't get me wrong I tình yêu the Cullens but take a look at what I would do if I was a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to ngày a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big cây a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
I would hot wire Edwards car and take it for a joy ride
I would go into my life story when ever I'm board
I would never sleep so I would jump all over
I use the saying "oh bite me" alot and I don't normaily get into fights but this is the Cullens we'r talking about
Sometimes I say my thoughts out-loud
I would think about Jakes body
I would be mad that I'm young and no guy would want to ngày a girl like me
I'd copy Edward
I'd piss off Edward
^^If I did I'd say Bella did it^^
I might crack up when he trys to hold his anger
I would jump off a big cây a yell "I belive I can fly"
And most of all I'm Crazy
So tell me if I should be a Cullen
Hi my name is Amanda and I have helped a few people out on fanpop. I'm in a college English course and wanted to put up and ad for myself! Anyone looking for an editor for there người hâm mộ fiction I'm the one. I do not changes stories I just add thêm descriptive elements like how stephanie Myers is so descriptive. bạn can email your story at CoolMandyz43@Aol.com and then I will send them back to bạn and bạn can post it hoặc change somethings I did. I would tình yêu to write my own người hâm mộ fiction but I'm not a great idea person but I can really chỉnh sửa stories to the point of perfection! So anyone who wants a helping POV get at me!
This is for people who have been đọc Esme's Story:
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please bình luận and tell me which ones bạn like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If bạn can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a thêm interesting name so it draws thêm attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a danh sách of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
I don't want to call it Esme Cullen story the whole time so I have come up with some ideas for names. please bình luận and tell me which ones bạn like. Ones i don't end up using for my story, feel free to use for any of yours:
Daybreak
Forever Awakening
Beyond Starlight
Nightfall
Sudden Dusk
Moonlight
Midnight Glimmer
Sunrise
Sunset
Dawn of Life
Precious Enchantment
If bạn can think of any others, please let me know
I want my story to have a thêm interesting name so it draws thêm attention than just 'Esme Cullen Story'. I went online to a danh sách of words with 'atmosphere' and I found these words and made different combinations with them.
PLEASE HELP ME!!!
THANK YOU!!!
Bella's Pov.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme đã đưa ý kiến wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing bạn all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking bạn out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper đã đưa ý kiến calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will hiển thị you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.
"Uh...where am I?" Esme đã đưa ý kiến wearily.
"Bella?"
"Jasper?"
"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing bạn all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking bạn out for the rest of my-"
"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.
"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"
"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper đã đưa ý kiến calmly.
Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.
"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.
Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"
"I will hiển thị you."
Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
This was short for a reason. CLIFFHANGER!!! hehehehehe......
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black lâu đài to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Bella's Pov
I never thought I would lose my family like that. I never would
have thought I put them in so much danger. Especially
my poor Renesmee!!! (sobs)
"WHY!!!!!!!!?????????" I shouted as loud as I could.
Then I started to think, what if I never see them again?
Do I have to marry Jasper to get my family out?
ARE THEY OKAY?!
Then I snapped myself out of that subject.
There are three possible ways of getting my family back to safety.
1: Marry Jasper
2: Get the spell out of Jasper
3: Find a way to find my family then snap my family out of the spell,
then get Jasper out of it and then, fight him if we have to.
I now know what to do.
Then, I went back to the dark black lâu đài to fight Jasper and whoever
the man is...
Renesmee Pov.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back tiếp theo to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he đã đưa ý kiến gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I was excited when I heard that I got to do what my family does!
I was happy until now. That sign creeped me out. Greatly. Mom and
Dad were in front of the crowd, and I stood in the back tiếp theo to Emmett
and Rosalie. Uncle Emmett hugged me. He knew that I was dyingly scared.
"It will be okay. Uncle Jasper will be back to normal in no time," he đã đưa ý kiến gently.
"Right. He will be fine," Aunt Rosalie said.
Suddenly, the large door opened, then, mom and dad entered proudly.
__________________________________________________
I felt a chill spread through my body. Though, I felt like I need to help Jasper. He needs
help. My help.
As we entered the black castle, it was pitch black. There was a bondfire ahead of us and
it wasn't just a regular fire! IT MOVED! It showed us the way until we reached the main room.
Then there were three doors. Through the middle, we heard yelling and screaming from a
girl.
I probaly đã đưa ý kiến thank bạn thirty times.
When I heard that they didn't have a place to stay i offered for them to stay here. They aren't living in out hotel room but they are only to doors away.
When i woke up i turned to susans side.She wasn't there. A note took her place.
It read
Dear Chris,
I am pretty sure i got bạn with the note!
The guys đã đưa ý kiến bạn would think i left. (it worked)
We are hanging out in their room and we are playing spin the bottle. (what!)
Love,
Susan ps. got bạn again!
I looked at her hand nghề viết văn it was very pretty.
I got dressed and walked to the elevator.When i noticed i pressed two when i didn't even have to change from 11 the doors closed.I pressed the 11 button mabye 5 times.When it went up I sighed.
...
to be continued...