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1) We never get to hear about Edward's bachelor party, and did Alice even plan a bachelorette party for Bella?

2) There was not enough character development for the Denali clan. I felt like they were just empty, filler-characters to give the Cullens allies later on in the book.

3) The story of the 'immortal children' was just randomly thrown into the story at the wrong time and felt out of place. I would have rather learnt thêm about the Denali clan than their deceased mother.

4) I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony that Alice planned (Go Team Alice!) and in my head, the dresses, decorations, and Edward in a tux were all beautiful. My only qualm with this scene is that I don't think Bella should have cried as she said, "I do." Plus, their little make-out session at the altar is gooey and out of place. I know that Bella supposedly loves Edward thêm than anything else in the world, but she is, as a part of her nature, extremely self-conscious and dislikes attention. But that's just me being a little too picky as I go back and scan the book for the parts that bothered me.

5) I would have liked to have seen thêm of the humans at the wedding reception, but oh well. (as a side note, when did Edward vomit the piece of cake he swallowed at the wedding?)

6) I loved how Jake showed up outside the wedding, but, of course, Bella has to cause even thêm werewolf angst and go into the 'gritty-details' of her wedding night. I totally agree with Jake here, since he, throughout the entire book, is the only one who really wants to keep Bella an toàn, két an toàn and is desperate to do anything for her.

7) Ok, who else thought that Isle Esme was completely ridiculous and gooshey (yes, i do own the copyright to the word gooshey now haha). Of course, Edward just can't take Bella to Hawaii hoặc Châu Âu (but far enough away from the Volturi). No, he has to borrow an island his family OWNS! *heavy sarcasm

8) I'm starting to sense a really out of character-ness for Bella. She's not objecting to any of these ridiculous things Edward is giving her and she's shoved the Jake fiasco into a 'Jacob-drawer.' Ridiculous. Even on her honeymoon she would be angsty and worrying about Jake.

9) I think Bella's nervousness and her courage as she goes out to the bờ biển, bãi biển was perfect and I think that Stephenie did a great job in this scene. Although I really think Alice would have included some sweat pants for Bella.

10) Fade out to morning after, Edward's typical self-hate, and the pillows were all good to the storyline. Steph starts to use thêm curse words here, which kind of surprised me.

11) Can Bella only eat eggs?

12) Bella's hormones eventually take over and she 'seduces' Edward with her dream. Kinda freaky? haha. Then she completely DOESN'T want to become a vampire, even though she had absolutely decided to become one at the end of Eclipse.

13) Ok, the cleaning crew. Come on, I mean what are the chances of having a superstitious cleaning crew who knows everything there is to know about vampire-human relations. Its just downright obvious that Steph has something planned with these people in the future, even though there's no character development with these ngẫu nhiên strangers.

14) Ok, now it starts to get ridiculous. Hasn't Stephenie told us that ma cà rồng can't get pregnant? I mean, I know that Bella still can but the idea is so utterly preposterous that I can't believe that Meyers would do this to the book. At this point I was thinking, "Did someone put a fake copy of this book in the bookstore just to fool with someone's head!? It's đọc like a fan-fiction I read months ago, but somehow worse!"

15) Why would the cleaning woman, so utterly terrified of Edward's vampiric qualities, help him and give him information that he needed? How did he ask the right questions? Its not like, "Hey, Kaure, I just knocked up my human gf and we think she's kinda sorta really pregnant, so what will the weird thing inside of her do?" No. That could not happen. Even Edward with his dazzling charms could not pull off that conversation.

16) Ok, so now that I'm furious at Edward for being so careless and stupid and disappointed that Bella has gotten a personality makeover and really angry at Steph for doing this to me, the only character left to me is Jake. I will admit that I was one of the Jacob haters before the release of the book. Now, Team Jacob all the way! I enjoyed part of the book in Jake's point of view, but it seemed to drag too much.

17) Claire/Quil was cute, but the baby talk was annoying and demeaning.

18) Edward asking Jake to get Bella pregnant?! I mean, come on Stephenie. Even in his darkest pit of torturous despair, he never would have asked that. It was out of character entirely. I couldn't believe that Jake had the courage to actually discuss it with Bella because it was so out of the question.

19) Now, Rosalie is made into a hero in Bella’s eyes, only because Rose wants Bella to die so Rosalie can get what she always wanted, a child. I wish Carlisle and Edward had temporarily disassemble Rosalie because she’s annoying and cause me to lose all of the positive opinions of her I had after đọc Eclipse. She just turned into a desperate, baby-starved, psycho vamp.

20) I do tình yêu the titles for Jake's chapters. They're just so...Jake.

21) The italicized type for the thoughts of the ma sói was a tad confusing.

22) Its great that Jake forms his own pack and I now tình yêu Seth and Leah. Team Leah! Because she’s independent and can hold her own.

23) It was so obvious from Jake’s first thought of Bella drinking blood that she would end up doing it. If vamps are supposed to be so much smarter than humans, then how did these idiots not think of having Bella digest blood. It seems like all of them are rapidly losing their IQ.

24) With the biological explanation of Bella’s baby, it seemed like Stephenie was trying to make the idea of mutant spawn plausible, which was utterly ridiculous and annoying.

25) Ok, Bella drinks blood. And. She. Likes. It. WHAT?! This story makes no sense and Bella has Mất tích all of her humanity. Wasn’t she horribly repulsed bởi blood from the very start? As a side note, why does Carlisle have a virtual hospital at his house and why does he have human blood if he’s a vegan vamp? He đã đưa ý kiến the blood was for Bella when she changed, but why would she drink human blood if she was trying to be a veggie vampire like the rest of her family? No. Sense. Whatsoever.

26) Too much werewolf angst and tension that wasted about 100 pages. I suffered through the 700 page book.

27) I tình yêu how Leah gets furious with the pack if they think about seeing her naked and the blonde jokes are hilarious. Plus I tình yêu the dog thực phẩm bowl and You. Got. Food. In. My. Hair.

28) Rose gets so territorial it’s ridiculous.

29) A đài phun nước of blood? Ok, now the birth scene. Gruesome. It was stupid of Carlisle to leave hunting when Bella needed him the most. He should have done a C-section hoặc something. Her spine cracks? I think Steph is just playing it up to hiển thị that Bella is sacrificing everything she has, just to leave her dead with a husband who is going to commit suicide because of her death but has to suffer and take care of her mutant spawn. I can add pregnancy and birth to my danh sách of phobias because of this horrific, violent birth scene. Thanks Steph.

30) I thought that once people’s hearts stopped beating, it was impossible for venom to bring them back to life. Oh well, since we’re so far out with vampire em bé why not add some thêm impossibilities to tick us off. I mean, I know that the world of ma cà rồng is not reality, but still, it must have some rules and boundaries and the rules can’t bend and break for Bella just because she’s ‘special.’

31) RENESMEE?! What kind of a name is that?!

32) WHAT?! Jacob. Can. Not. Imprint. On. Bella’s. Mutant. Spawn. If I wasn’t for Team Jacob I would have laughed at his unluckiness. But of course, Steph is trying to make this a happy story for everyone, even though it’s just turning out into a disastrous death spiral of crappy writing. For the other three books, the problems throughout the book for at least one character were the things that made the sách seem like reality. In this book, it reads too much like a fairy tale with everyone living their own happy, perfect lives. That does not happen. Reality is not a fairy tale with happy endings. Bella and Edward can’t just walk off into the sunset, abandoning their problems and expecting all their troubles to disappear forever.

33) The representation of the pain was good, but when she awoke as a vampire, something didn’t feel right to me. I finally realized what was the matter. The Twilight series up until this point was focused around the central problem of Bella remaining human and attracting bad luck because of her blood. I was halfway through the book and the main problem of the entire series was over. The rest, I realized, was just going to be fluff. And I was right.

34) Her ease at becoming a vegan vamp is just sickening and utterly absurd.

35) Bella has Mất tích all of her personality when she becomes a vampire. She is no longer self-conscious and dependent upon Edward. She’s intelligent now as a vampire (sorry but her stupidity in parts of the other sách annoyed me) but I think Bella was right about one thing when she was a human, that she wouldn’t be the same after her transformation. And she was right. There is no one in this book that we can relate to now. All the characters have been distorted and Mất tích all of their former characteristics.

36) Renesmee is just annoying the hell out of me. She’s the perfect, most beautiful child in the world who’s already able to communicate, doesn’t make any messes, has special powers, and is adored bởi everyone. It’s just sickening. When Bella says, “my little nudger,” it makes me cringe.

37) Bella is just strange when she gets mad at Jake when he imprints on her freako spawn. Why should she be mad at Jake? She already knows that imprinting is involuntary. She’s just having another human spaz attack, but as a vamp with perfect self-control. Jake, at least, gave the creature a decent name, Nessie, instead of freaking Renesmee.

38) Bella gets a loveshack for her birthday? Are bạn serious? Totally fanfic.

39) CHARLIE?! What? Ok, now I’m furious at Steph. Everything Bella sacrificed as a human is coming back to her like her choice to become a vampire had no adverse consequences. Plus, I’m pretty sure Charlie WOULD freak out if he saw Jake get naked and then transform.

40) Carlie? Now this is totally cheesy. I’m cringing too much.


41) I know the strength of newborns is supposed to be much stronger than the strength of an older vamp, but come on, Emmett’s strength feeling like a feather? That’s too extreme.

42) Bella receives a jumbo diamond from Aro. Totally ngẫu nhiên and unnecessary.

43) Irina going to the Volturi? If Irina was mentally scarred bởi the fact that her mother was killed because of her immortal children creations, then why would she want the Cullens to experience that kind of grief and unending torture? I mean, why would she want to be a ‘purist when it came to the law?’ Can’t she hear the spawn’s heartbeat? Seriously, if vamps can hear what is happening miles away, can’t they hear a half-human’s heartbeat?

44) I think the idea of meeting all the other Amazonian and Scottish ma cà rồng is an awesome idea, but since they’re so many of them, I feel like each is just a printed name on the page with no depth.

45) When Alice writes in her note, “There isn’t time to write,” it annoyed me because aren’t all ma cà rồng able to write super-fast?

46) Why has the entire treaty disappeared and why does no one care about it anymore?

47) The whole sub-plot with J. Jenks had potential to be cool, but it fizzled out because it went nowhere. Plus, all that effort Bella went through wasn’t needed and it just wasted thêm pages in this already long and stretched out book.

48) I think Alec’s talent is totally bamf. Eleazar is an awesome name, too.

49) I think the shield power is really weird but necessary in order to find an answer to solve this droning, convoluted plotline when the Volturi come. bởi this time I was suffering so much that I only skimmed the paragraphs.

50) Bella gets all defensive about Renesmee which gets old really quickly.

51) I suppose its Steph’s good intentions, but the thing between Sue and Charlie is kinda weird. Its nice that Charlie has someone to cook for him and someone to talk to, but as long as they don’t get married hoặc anything…which would be really creepy in my opinion. It’d be like, hey, lets have Charlie marry the wife of his dead best friend. Eww. No. That can’t happen.

52) Kate/Garrett is kinda cute, but really undeveloped and a little empty in my opinion.

53) Bella saying goodbye to Renesmee (eww the name is just so wrong and strange and eww) is just a waste because we all know that the Cullens will win against the Volturi like they always do. It’s just wasting paper on family gushy-ness which is sickening.

54) I absolutely tình yêu how the Volturi appear into the meadow because of its graceful creepiness. They produce an aura of unquestionable power and fear when they walk in their organized, graceful formations.

55) Of course, the Volturi have their moments of stupidity and can’t hear Renesmee’s heartbeat even thought their hearing is one thousand times better than human hearing.

56) Wait, so ma sói are no longer werewolves? They’re…shape-shifters? Wow, thanks Steph, I really needed to know.

57) The Volturi seem fine after they destroy Irina, actually happy to be there with the weird half-human mutant spawn. Then, they apparently have a sudden onslaught of PMS and immediately change their minds. Who knew old vampire men were so hormonal?

58) Garrett suddenly has his speech-moment which was really nice, but at this point, nothing could salvage the book.

59) Why does everyone have a little make-out session when they think they are all going to die? Annoying. Gooshey. Repetitive.

60) I like how Alice suddenly appeared with their ‘savior mutants’ but I really missed her throughout the book.

61) Happy Ending? Ugh. Out of character. Too perfect. Unrealistic.
posted by AdaLove
Emmett McCarty was changed into a vampire bởi Dr. Carlisle Cullen in 1935, two years after Rosalie Hale had been changed. When Rosalie came across him, Emmett was being mauled bởi a chịu, gấu in the mountains of Tennessee. He had nearly died from the attack, but Rosalie saved him and carried him over a hundred miles back to Carlisle. Rosalie was noted as saying that it took nearly all her strength not to kill him. She also đã đưa ý kiến that she brought him to Carlisle so that he, with his stronger endurance of human blood, could save Emmett. She also đã đưa ý kiến that the reason behind having Carlisle save Emmett...
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hi again. some people wanted thêm to this story, so I’ve done a bit more. I’ve had a lot of coursework to do so this is sort of short so hopefully it will keep your interest.

Part 1
“Bella what’s the matter?” Edward asked anxiously.

I let my shield down, heft it right out my brain so that it wouldn’t protected me anymore. And shouted with my mind in to Edwards.

“His got amnesia.”

Edward looked confused “who?” he asked out loud?
“Charlie” I whispered with my mind just before it snapped right back.

Edward flinted towards me in less the 3.2 of a một giây and he had me in his glorious...
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posted by renesmeblack
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Renesmee




I loved hanging out with Billy. In many ways he and Jacob were the same. They both thought taking their girlfriends to the phim chiếu rạp was a good taking-it-steady kind of date. Billy had the same eyes and laugh Jacob had.
But there was one thing different. Billy was going to let me have this child, the child Jacob wants to be rid of. I couldn't help but feel angry with him about this. Wasn't having the child a mother's choice? The father wasn't going to carry a boulder on their stomach. And they definately won't be giving birth to a screaming infant. The rest of the family shouldn't have...
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posted by mrsblack_1089
This is a continuation to my original story, Sunbreak. I couldn't find a good enough name, so for now it's just 'The Sequel' haha. =D I hope everyone likes this as much as Sunbreak, and I rely on LOADS of positive các bình luận to continue this Sequel! So read, review and rate! Enjoy! xoxo mrsblack_1089


"I just can't believe how big they are!" Emily cooned as she and I watched the twins sleeping. The blue-ish, green-ish light of the bonfire flickered across their faces where they lay on Jacob's lap, breathing steadily in and out.
I could never get over how breathtaking my two little children were....
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posted by renesmeblack
Hey, peeple! I wanted to let bạn know that the never-ever-ever-ending story of Renesmee hasn't ended. YOU'RE STILL đọc IT RIGHT NOW!!!
Yup. Welcome to chapter 22. Yay!
Okay, I'll let bạn get back to your reading...



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Jacob




I had to be surprised. Why wouldn't I be? Edward was pretty mad when he read in my mind what happened two nights ago. He was even madder when he found Renesmee was crazy enough to keep... IT. I thought Renesmee was going mad. She would still bite if we'd taken the thing out first chance. I felt sick to my stomach. This wasn't right. I'm going to be a father. If it's a son,...
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posted by jaime-kataeff
Renesmee's POV

Today is my first hoặc last ngày with Jacob, still to be decided.

See I am a unique person, I was conceived, carried and delivered bởi my mother whilst she was human and my father as a vampire, (I very nearly killed her, but my father saved her life bởi turning her), And that was when I met him... "My Jacob", we've been together everyday since I was born, I saw him as my big brother,protector... but now my feelings have changed towards him. I have started to notice him in a completely different light, I find his smile,eyes,russet coloured skin, smell irrestible. I catch myself just...
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posted by thecullensftw_x
I stretched out my long, marble arms, and ran a hand through my honey-coloured hair. Keeping up the act of a human is having effects on me. I don't need to do that stuff, but it comes as habit. The mood of the house was tense, and I was really feeling the strain. Even with my beautiful little Alice sitting bởi my side, squeezing my hand gently, I wasn't feeling much calmer; the weight of the mood was too strong. I sank back into the sofa, and listened as Edward and Bella arrived at the door.
"Hey, bạn two," Edward đã đưa ý kiến as he barged through the door. He tried to keep his tone and face expressionless,...
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Chapter 10: The Cat’s Out of the Bag
I was in complete awe of my body as well as the little miracle that it contained, “She knows your voice Jake,” I told him through my tears of happiness. He smiled at me and seemed to be genuinely happy for the first time since he found out that I was pregnant. He again kissed my stomach and then continued with a trail of kisses leading to my face, kissing my cheeks and nose, “I tình yêu bạn so much Renesmee.” I kissed his ear, “I tình yêu bạn too,” his lips found mine and he kissed me so overpoweringly that I fell back into the giường with him. He lay...
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posted by renesmeblack
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Jacob



It turns out that yesterday was Renesmee's "18th" birthday. I have a lot to catch up on. Renesmee was shopping at a fancy new dress store downstairs, where I ordered Alice to take her to buy two new dresses. One was for her party, the other for the tiếp theo part of the night.
Meanwhile, I was at the jewelry store, looking at sparkling necklaces. One was perfect for Renesmee. It was a ruby-and-diamond flower, with a vàng chain. I bought it, and then felt my tim, trái tim race as the cashier asked, "Is that all?"
I looked around, eyes resting on a particular case.
"One thêm thing," I murmured as I headed...
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THIS IS NOT PART 5!!!! Just wanted to tell bạn guys whats going on with TOF…I have exams this week so the tiếp theo few parts will be few and far between but I will try to write soon..the tiếp theo part will be out tomorrow afternoon so don’t worry…I wanna thank my biggest fan just_bella…and special thanx to _madz_ and mcclare34 and patrisha727

I wanna thank EVERYONE who commented:

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Ur các bình luận REALLLLY help..the positivity and saying ur fave part...
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posted by team_robward
Chapter Two:
First Writings

“Okay, everyone’s chosen a pen pal, bạn have the tiếp theo two session’s to write about yourself, and with any luck you’ll have a reply bởi Friday” Mrs. Anderson announced.

Immediately, everyone started writing, quickly. I took another deep breath, and began.

Dear Edward Cullen, Hmm Edward, that’s a weird old fashioned name, but I guess, these days if bạn can call a child Apple, than Edward is plain, normal.

My name is Bella Swan.

I'm 17 years old and my birthday is September 13. I live in Phoenix, with my mother Renee and her boyfriend Phil. He doesn’t need to...
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posted by renesmeblack
I ran as fast as I could towards Bella's scream. Alice was left behind. I ran faster and faster until I was a couple of yards away from HER.
"Hold it, EDWARD," sneered Victoria. Her teeth were glistening as she opened her mouth and put it dangerously close to Bella's throat. Bella was in pure terror. She was breathing reggedly, her tim, trái tim was trying to break free, and I saw tears flowing down.
"Bella, don't move," I said. Victoria put her mouth closer.
"I wouldn't talk, pretty boy. It'll kill her faster, and that would be less fun."
Bella struggled. Then she cringed as Victoria tightened her grip...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

Carlisle was running tests on me. I had apparently "going to go through pregnancy at an accelerated speed, twice as quickly as the normal human scenario, and I must have gotten pregnant at some point on Isle Renesmee."

* * *

I wasn't sure how to feel about this. At the moment it had fully dawned on me that I was pregnant, my hand had drifted to my stomach, and I hadn't felt any different, but I'd felt as if I just had thêm reason to live.

It all made a lot thêm sense to me. Why I'd slept to much. Why I'd felt I was missing something on the plane. Why I'd gotten sick over seeing animal...
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posted by AdaLove
Esme was born sometime in 1895. Little is known about her very early life, but that she lived near the outskirts of Columbus, Ohio. She met Dr. Carlisle Cullen for the first time when she was 16 and had just broken her leg climbing a tree. He soon moved out of town, but Esme never forgot the experience. While she initially wanted to di chuyển West to become a school teacher, she was pressured bởi her parents to remain and marry. At the age of 22, she married Charles Evenson, hoping to please her parents and willing to attempt to be happy, but soon realized her husband was an abusive man. Charles...
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posted by twilightGGlost
Ok this the part u’ve all been waiting for! No explanation need! Thanks everyone for the support and positive feedback! RATE AND COMMENT!! And spread the word!

END OF PART 1
As I was heading to the một giây flight of stairs I noticed a sheet over something on the wall. I pulled it off carefully and saw Carlisle’s cross. I became numb and quickly shuffled to the stairs. This was a huge mistake. I should never have come. I would never be able to return from this blackness but I was too far now and couldn’t stop. I tripped up the stairs and then crossed the short hallway in 3 unbalanced strides...
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posted by twilightGGlost
Heyy all! I’m so glad u all like Twist of Fate! It is sooo much to write! Thank u for all ur comments! I really appreciate them! Now before u all *freak* out I’m going to reveal what is in the áo sơ mi in part 3 which I will try to post today! I was planning on nghề viết văn this way so I hope u like it! Special shout out to just_bella for her support!...when u bình luận say what ur fave part is and ur fave part in TOF part 1. Ok this is not Bella but u'll be able to figure it out…if I tell u the POV it will give it away…but the first line will give it away ok now I’m rambling lmao ok now I’m...
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posted by elinochka
xin chào people!
So i decided to write a người hâm mộ fiction dedicated to Jacob/Rosalie..Both are my yêu thích characters..Also i think they will be hilarious and hot together..
Enjoy :)

Main Characters:Jacob Black,Rosalie Hale,Bella Swan,Edward Culled,Alice Cullen,Jasper Hale and lots more..
Plot:
Rosalie and Bella are best friends..(both are vampires)
Bella is dating Edward,who is human.Rosalie dont like him.Jacob is Edward's best friend and he is warewolf..Jacob and Rosalie cant stand each other,because of vampire/warewolf cold war..You probably will want to know how Bella and Rosalie became a vampires..Well...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

Jacob and I spent the rest of the ngày with my family. Alice played 'Barbie' on me, until my mom rescued me from torture bởi volunteering herself.

Alice squealed so hard it hurt my ears.

She said, "Oh my god! I knew you'd see the light someday!" before dragging my long-suffering mom off to the endless chamber that is known primarily as Alice's closet.

This was probably paining me less than it would her, still; I was grateful for an escape.

I flopped down on the đi văng beside Jacob.

At this point, I guess it's worth mentioning that I was still wearing a poofy ice-blue satin dress. So,...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Emmett-

I had no idea what was going on. Like normal. One second, Rose and I were cuddling on the sofa, then she suddenly jumped up, screamed, "Get her!" and started chasing Bella. I made Ed tell me what it was all about, and I almost took the house down.

Bella shopping? Those were two words that did not occur in the same sentence naturally.

* * *

I went off to go torment Jake. Wrestling him was fun, but the person who won was never celebrating for long when Renesmee found out.

Edward glared at me, and I hastily thought, 'Jeez, Ed, relax,' then, 'Arm wrestling?' I thought.

Edward sighed and...
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posted by Isabellaashley
BELLA'S PROM DRESS

Knowing all eyes would be on Bella's prom look, Chuck had to choose carefully. The bolero was a vintage piece that she cut, restyled, and re-sequined. The dress was a little thêm serendipitous: ''It was miracle find!'' exclaims Chuck, who picked up the Max and Cleo silk dress at discount store Ross — and for $20. (Fun fact: Chuck also purchased the only other one left in the store so she could use the extra material to create one long dress. But, in the end, she left the dress as-is, using the một giây for a bức ảnh double.) ''I always say I channel clothes, I don't necessarily thiết kế them — it's divine sometimes the way it happens!''