Okay, so i haven't been on fanpop since i was 12! i'm now 14, and i've found some of my old stories, and i've decided to re-write it, in a thêm grammatical way, with new fresh ideas.
Hope bạn guys like it.

I stared into the mirror, gazing at my reflection, focusing on every feature of my face.
I was nothing that bạn could call beautiful, hoặc stunning. I was just ordinary, I was just me. I had quite plain features, green eyes, pale skin, the only thing that bạn could call special hoặc different about me, was my hair. My hair was a natural black, it went to my elbows, and had natural waves. My fringe was my faviroute thing about my appearance it was my cover, it covered most of my face, hiding one of my eyes, it made me feel as though I was invisible and no one could see me hoặc bother me.
I walked into the Forks High school, searching for that one friendly face that I was desperate to see, and there it was. Jacob Black, he was standing with a group of tan, quite muscly boys and one hoặc two girls. One of the girls though, caught thêm of my attention. She was radiant, her beauty was so eye catching, her hair was a golden brown, with red tinges, her eyes were almost what seemed to be golden, and her skin was even paler than mine.
“Lirah, you’re here!” Jacobs voice boomed, he walked towards me, his smile making me manage a smile back; he pulled me in for a hug he was so warm, that I wanted to stay there forever.
But to my disappointment he let go, and brought me towards his group of friends, and the strange beautiful girl. The group was watching me now, and I could feel my cheeks flaming, I flicked my hair causing my fringe to fall in my face, hiding me I smiled at the thought.
“Guys, this is my faviroute cousin, Lirah. And Lirah, this um, this is Renesmee “Jacob said, holding the beautiful girls hand. I realised that this was Jake’s girlfriend, and I smiled
“Nice to meet bạn all” I đã đưa ý kiến quietly, smiling.

The group of boys nodded, and started asking me questions, some even trying to flirt, but through all of this I noticed one of the boys, standing quite a distance away from me, staring at me. I was confused, and Jake had also noticed the boy’s strange behaviour Jake walked towards the boy and they started walking away from the group, and to my surprise Jake turned and looked at Renesmee for a second, and she nodded. It was like they were telepathic hoặc something, but all I wanted to know is what Jake and that strange boy were talking about. But before I could sneak away and follow, Jake’s girlfriend, the strangely beautiful girl, Renesmee appeared in front of me, smiling.
“Hey, um I tình yêu your name, it’s so different” Renesmee đã đưa ý kiến smiling.
“Uh, different? Yours is different too.” I đã đưa ý kiến distracted
“Yeah, many people think it’s weird, my mum made it, it’s a mix between my Dad’s mums name “Esmee” and Mum’s, mothers name “Renee” đã đưa ý kiến Renesmee smiling.
“Hey, that’s actually pretty cool, what’s your parent’s names maybe Jake has mentioned them before?” I asked trying to make some conversation.
Renesmee’s face hardened “It’s time for class” She đã đưa ý kiến quickly.
“Oh, um I think I left something in my car, I’ll see bạn later though?” I asked hopefully
“Sure” Renesmee đã đưa ý kiến smiling. She laid a hand on my shoulder, I shivered her hands were freezing!
Renesmee felt my shiver, and she quickly turned on her heel, and glided gracefully towards the school were many of Forks High Schools students were heading.

When Renesmee was clearly inside of the school, I immediately started to head towards where Jake and the boy had disappeared too. But suddenly I heard voices, I followed them, and I could hear them clearly.
“What is it Paul? What happened?” Jake đã đưa ý kiến angrily.
“Jake…” đã đưa ý kiến the strange boy pleadingly
“Paul, bạn need to tell me what’s going on, it better not have anything to do with Lirah!”
“Jake I, I imprinted on her” Paul đã đưa ý kiến slowly.