Help!!!!! I don't know where to change it hoặc keep it all the same!?!?!?!

If bạn want my advice, here it is: You're overthinking the book. You're planning too far ahead in the story. This drastically increases the chance of early spoilers. Butdon't worry. There is a way to salvage your book. First, bạn need to throw out all your plans for the storyline. Keep anything that doesn't pose a spoiler risk. After that, firmly plant the original vision of the book in your mind. From there, the book should practically write itself.

I had the same problem. Two years ago, I was nghề viết văn a book called Phép thuật and Dangerous. I thought everything was wrong and I added too much stuff and I ruined the ending. I threw the book idea out. Looking back on it now I realized nothing was wrong with it, I was trying too hard and didn't relax about it. And here it is today, the original version.

U r over thinking it. U need to take a breathe and do half. Add some spoilers but then have thêm các câu hỏi popp to the point where there are spoilers but bạn haven't spoiled the ending, bạn are just keeping the reader interested, the thêm các câu hỏi and secrets go chưa được trả lời the thêm they will read. Spoilers are interesting, don't get rid if them all. But if u feel that it is good then don't changer but if your tim, trái tim is half way in it then something needs to be done.