i wrote this for school it is tdi related but my english teacher dosnt know that !!
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it was raining wait not raing pouring i needed somewere to shelter hoặc my hair would turnn into a made science expriment then i saw it a small derlected house just one house in the middle of the country side all alone CRACK lighting ohh no thats it i thought i need shelter and ran into the house i shouldnt of done that !
when i got in the house i knew at once it was a bad idea there was moss all over the gray walls "hello" i called out i dont know why i just did cold wind blew threw the open door why had it been open i thougt i could here the ocean i went to the window but it wasent a window it was a hole where the window should of been shards of glass lined the window frame i knew i shouldnt of been there i knew i should of gone back to the hotel but im stupid i looked around the house all the furniter was tipped over and broken parts of the house were burnt .. why was that ? what happened here? all these thoughts zoomed around my head but i couldnt answer them untill ... wait i shouldnt tell bạn ,you should just go trang chủ right now . what why are bạn looking at me like that .. bạn really want to know ok then fine but dont say i didnt warn bạn
i stumbled upstairs for no reason whatsoever i was just curious when i stepped ona creaky floorboard to bạn its just a creaky floorboard i mean all the floorboards in this house were creaky but his one ... this one was differnt i got down on my handsand knees SWOOSH SWOOSH went the ocean CRACK BOOM the sky almost seemed to want to break open and let hell loose i could see out of the dirty grimy window of the upstairs hallway some trees were on ngọn lửa, chữa cháy if hell was trying to break loase it was doing a preety good job , i prised open the floorboard and there underneath were i was stood a little wooden chest decorated wqith hearts and hoa .but it was locked i sat on the dusty manky old giường int the bedroom and tryed to open it .it felt like 5 bhours but it was only 5 phút ,as soon as it was opened a song that everybody should know i sang along it made me feel comfortable
*twinkle twinkle little ngôi sao
how i wonder what bạn are
up above the world so high
lika a dimond in the sky
twinkle twinkle little ngôi sao
how i wonder what bạn are *
i sorted through the box there was pictures of a couple in what seemed like the 1920's happy and everything but there were some letters i read through them like đọc a story but the closer i got to modern ngày the sader it got BOOM CRACK the sky yelled !SHUT UP IM TRYING TO READ !!" i yelled back but then i reambered what i was doing there seemed to be some letters that never got sent i was starting o get a little uneasy which was new for me ask my Những người bạn they would tell bạn im the tough cookie of the bunch i fineally got to the final letter .
april 7th 1928
to my dearest courtney
i am nghề viết văn to tell bạn someting its not an toàn, két an toàn for bạn to be living were bạn are anymore whilst ive been away ive made a few frinds and quite a lot of enamys theve found the letters youve sent me and im worried that they will come for you. bạn must get out before they come ive set it up with my good friend trent bạn will be able to live withhim and his wife gwen bạn should be an toàn, két an toàn there please courtney do not replay to this i dont want bạn to be in thêm danger
from duncan
p.s i tình yêu bạn
as if right on cue the thunder claped and the sea splashed and right out the courner of my eye i saw it i saw a shadow of someone i screamed and ran had to get out ,wait was that blood on the floor how could i have missed that ? theh shadow was closer now i didnt care if it was raining i was getting out . i ran and ran and ran and ran till the cottage was out of sight im got back to the hotel and realised what i was still holding ...the box within that một giây i made my desion i was telling the police and heres the story they dug up
courtney and duncan lived in that house for 12 years but duncan left to travle and to get money so they could start a family but he got on the wrong side of some powerful people and they decided that they were gonna take away the thing that matterd most to him ... courtney the letter came late in the mail and trent and gwen never got there house guest because these horrid men got there first just as soon as she got the letter they came that explains the broken window trashed furniter and blood on the floor i have never forgotton that ngày
who am i bạn ask?
i am heather laroux and i am your oldest memory
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it was raining wait not raing pouring i needed somewere to shelter hoặc my hair would turnn into a made science expriment then i saw it a small derlected house just one house in the middle of the country side all alone CRACK lighting ohh no thats it i thought i need shelter and ran into the house i shouldnt of done that !
when i got in the house i knew at once it was a bad idea there was moss all over the gray walls "hello" i called out i dont know why i just did cold wind blew threw the open door why had it been open i thougt i could here the ocean i went to the window but it wasent a window it was a hole where the window should of been shards of glass lined the window frame i knew i shouldnt of been there i knew i should of gone back to the hotel but im stupid i looked around the house all the furniter was tipped over and broken parts of the house were burnt .. why was that ? what happened here? all these thoughts zoomed around my head but i couldnt answer them untill ... wait i shouldnt tell bạn ,you should just go trang chủ right now . what why are bạn looking at me like that .. bạn really want to know ok then fine but dont say i didnt warn bạn
i stumbled upstairs for no reason whatsoever i was just curious when i stepped ona creaky floorboard to bạn its just a creaky floorboard i mean all the floorboards in this house were creaky but his one ... this one was differnt i got down on my handsand knees SWOOSH SWOOSH went the ocean CRACK BOOM the sky almost seemed to want to break open and let hell loose i could see out of the dirty grimy window of the upstairs hallway some trees were on ngọn lửa, chữa cháy if hell was trying to break loase it was doing a preety good job , i prised open the floorboard and there underneath were i was stood a little wooden chest decorated wqith hearts and hoa .but it was locked i sat on the dusty manky old giường int the bedroom and tryed to open it .it felt like 5 bhours but it was only 5 phút ,as soon as it was opened a song that everybody should know i sang along it made me feel comfortable
*twinkle twinkle little ngôi sao
how i wonder what bạn are
up above the world so high
lika a dimond in the sky
twinkle twinkle little ngôi sao
how i wonder what bạn are *
i sorted through the box there was pictures of a couple in what seemed like the 1920's happy and everything but there were some letters i read through them like đọc a story but the closer i got to modern ngày the sader it got BOOM CRACK the sky yelled !SHUT UP IM TRYING TO READ !!" i yelled back but then i reambered what i was doing there seemed to be some letters that never got sent i was starting o get a little uneasy which was new for me ask my Những người bạn they would tell bạn im the tough cookie of the bunch i fineally got to the final letter .
april 7th 1928
to my dearest courtney
i am nghề viết văn to tell bạn someting its not an toàn, két an toàn for bạn to be living were bạn are anymore whilst ive been away ive made a few frinds and quite a lot of enamys theve found the letters youve sent me and im worried that they will come for you. bạn must get out before they come ive set it up with my good friend trent bạn will be able to live withhim and his wife gwen bạn should be an toàn, két an toàn there please courtney do not replay to this i dont want bạn to be in thêm danger
from duncan
p.s i tình yêu bạn
as if right on cue the thunder claped and the sea splashed and right out the courner of my eye i saw it i saw a shadow of someone i screamed and ran had to get out ,wait was that blood on the floor how could i have missed that ? theh shadow was closer now i didnt care if it was raining i was getting out . i ran and ran and ran and ran till the cottage was out of sight im got back to the hotel and realised what i was still holding ...the box within that một giây i made my desion i was telling the police and heres the story they dug up
courtney and duncan lived in that house for 12 years but duncan left to travle and to get money so they could start a family but he got on the wrong side of some powerful people and they decided that they were gonna take away the thing that matterd most to him ... courtney the letter came late in the mail and trent and gwen never got there house guest because these horrid men got there first just as soon as she got the letter they came that explains the broken window trashed furniter and blood on the floor i have never forgotton that ngày
who am i bạn ask?
i am heather laroux and i am your oldest memory
Ok i also đã đăng this same thing on the diễn đàn link but thats not working so here it is
just post a bình luận on who bạn want to be when we have 10 campers we will start dont get mad if bạn get voted off
heres how it works:
every week i will post a diễn đàn on the diễn đàn page that will have a written explination of the challenge post your anwcer on the các bình luận i will rate your anwcer on a 1-10 basis the player with the lowest score will walk the dock of shame.
ezekiel-earthboundshine
eva-
noah-
justin-
katie-topez99
tyler-
izzy-izzyrocksmysocks
cody-codemister
beth-
sadie-
courtney-Duncan-superfan
harold-
trent-
bridgette-
lindsay
dj-
geoff-
leshana-GwenxTrent
duncan-
heather-789703011
gwen-sexybabby9087
owen-
just post a bình luận on who bạn want to be when we have 10 campers we will start dont get mad if bạn get voted off
heres how it works:
every week i will post a diễn đàn on the diễn đàn page that will have a written explination of the challenge post your anwcer on the các bình luận i will rate your anwcer on a 1-10 basis the player with the lowest score will walk the dock of shame.
ezekiel-earthboundshine
eva-
noah-
justin-
katie-topez99
tyler-
izzy-izzyrocksmysocks
cody-codemister
beth-
sadie-
courtney-Duncan-superfan
harold-
trent-
bridgette-
lindsay
dj-
geoff-
leshana-GwenxTrent
duncan-
heather-789703011
gwen-sexybabby9087
owen-