Stormclan The First Battle; The Battle of Bloodrun Hill!

Edwin3 posted on Nov 08, 2010 at 03:25PM
Peachpaw and Minceclaw walked together in the forest. They were laughing and happy and they didn't need anyone to tell them what to do.
“What are you doing?” asked Peachpaw laughing as Minceclaw threw a leaf at her. She squealed with laughter as he threw more leaves. She purred and brushed up against him feeling his warm side rise and fall with his breathing. He leans his head against her and purred warmly, panting from their run. Suddenly he stopped and he lifted his tail for silence. He stood.
“What is it?” she asked. He shook his head and took a tentative step forward.
“Do you feel that?” he asked. She shook her head.
“Feel what?” Then she felt it too. The slight tremble in the ground. “What is that?” she asked. “It feels like....” she didn't know what to compare it to. He did.
“No it doesn't,” he murmured and he pointed. “Look.”
Peachpaw looked and regretted it. What she was scarier than anything she'd seen before (other than Parchpaw getting sick like that). She saw cats—thousandss of them—running toward StormClan land down the hill on the opposite end, their eyes furious their fur fluffed out—and at the lead was Scarletstar, her eyes burning with rage.

THE RULES: Lynxstar of LavaClan, Leopardstar of IvyClan, Foxstar of HeatherClan....they can't comment today. DO NOT attack them or if you do make sure that they put up a damn good fight because they're a Clan leader which means that unless you're Stormstar they're probably better than you. Also, if you have characters in more than one Clan you MUST comment as them too and don't just let the StormClan cats have the easy route because there are over SEVENTEEN Clans fighting us right now. I'm not sure how many there are. Also there are several rogues, the cats from the mountains, and pretty much everyone hates StormClan :p Duskbreak and Darkblaze are here but the original people commenting as them aren't here so whoever wants to play them can.

One last thing....GOOD LUCK!

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hơn một năm qua Edwin3 said…
worried
*tails shoots between her legs* ~Peachpaw

*roars with fury and leads her warriors down the hill* ~Scarletstar
hơn một năm qua Edwin3 said…
angry
*smacks her aside like she's a ragdoll and barrels past* ~Scarletstar

*stops to fight Minceclaw* ~Strongclaw
hơn một năm qua Edwin3 said…
surprise
*screams loudly alerting the warriors in camp* ~Peachpaw
hơn một năm qua Silverblaze206 said…
angry
*lifts head* Guys! *takes off running* ~Moonblaze

*stands next to his mother* ~Windpaw

*pulls her kits closer* ~Daisypurr

*whimpers and licks her stomach* ~Scorchfire
hơn một năm qua Silverblaze206 said…
angry
*sees Moonblaze and leaps* ~Jadestar of CoralClan

*hisses and smacks her* ~Moonblaze

*hits her hard across the face knocking her down* ~Jadestar
hơn một năm qua ferretandsilt said…
angry
Peachpaw! *runs for his daughter* ~Molefur

*sniffs her then growls looking up at Molefur* ~Sootspots of CoralClan

*skids to a stop and looks at Peachpaw then back up at Sootspots* ~Molefur
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*yowls and runs out of the cave* -Nightbreeze

*follows her* -Ravenbeak, Crystaldapple, Suntooth, Diamondpaw & Thornclaw
hơn một năm qua ferretandsilt said…
angry
*stands in front of the nursery growling* ~Skyfurry

*wails* ~Stikekit
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
angry
*yowls and throws himself at Strongclaw* ~Minceclaw

*leaps onto Minceclaw* ~Quickfeather of CoralClan

*leaps at Nightbreeze* ~Dapplestar of AshClan
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*leaps at Ravenbeak* -Shadestep of ColdClan

*claws at him* -Ravenbeak
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hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*hisses and bites at her* -Nightbreeze
hơn một năm qua Edwin3 said…
angry
*heads straight for the nursery* ~Scarletstar

*screams and leaps at her* ~Spruceshine

*screeches as battle fills the air* ~Strongclaw
hơn một năm qua twentethre said…
angry
*runs into battle* -my cats
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hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
*claws at Thornclaw* -Blackrose of LavaClan

*shoves him into the wall* -Thornclaw

*pulls Breezekit and my mom's kits close to me and huddles in the back of the nursery* -Cottontail
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
angry
*runs into the nursery smiling and laughing wickedly* ~Tansyblush

*races toward her* Stay away from my kits! ~Roughfall
hơn một năm qua splendidgal13 said…
angry
*sees Duskbreak fighting and steps over my kits growling* Hey you! -Petalfur

*looks over* -Duskbreak

*growls low in throat* Get over here and fight for your honor! *leaps at him* -Petalfur

yeah! -Dreamkit
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*slashes at her* Stay back! -Cottontail
hơn một năm qua ferretandsilt said…
angry
*fights with Sootspots for his daughter* ~Molefur
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
angry
*lashes tail* ~Tansyblush

*runs into StormClan camp screaming* WHERE IS THE CAT WHO KILLED MY KIT! *glares at Smokecloud* YOU did it! You killed Pinekit! ~Sharpclaw
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*breaks into the cave with my clan* -Branchstar of BranchClan

*leaps at Crystaldapple* -Eagletalon of BranchClan

*claws at her* -Crystaldapple
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*runs for Sharpclaw* Don't touch him! -Nightbreeze
hơn một năm qua Guillaume19 said…
meh
*pulls his kits close* -gorgestone

*runs up and faces him then sees the kits* -speedflight of heatherclan

*whimpers* -kits

*eyes widen and moves on* -speedflight
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
crying
*laughs pain in his voice* You'd love a kit killer? ~Sharpclaw

*runs into the nursery and sees Scorchfire* Sister?! *runs to her and licks her cheek* ~Brightberry
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
Okay I have the perfect music for this!
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*leaps at Sharpclaw* Leave my family alone! *claws at him* -Diamondpaw
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
crying
*rolls pushing Diamondpaw away gently not hurting her* Why did you do it, Smokecloud, when you knew it would come to this? ~Sharpclaw
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hơn một năm qua Edwin3 said…
smirk
*pads out of the nursery her pelt covered in battle wounds and blood in her jaws is Cloverkit* ~Scarletstar
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hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
crying
*screams* Get off my kit! Get off of her! *is batting at Scarletstar but can't reach her kit* ~Ashfleck

*whimpers looking around* ~Cloverkit
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*growls and crouches, ready to leap again* -Diamondpaw

*shoves at Eagletalon, needing to get over to them* -Crystaldapple

*holds her down* -Eagletalon
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hơn một năm qua Silverblaze206 said…
heart
*looks at Brightberry and knows that she won't hurt her or her unborn kits* -Scorchfire
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*stands in front of Scarletstar* Put. The. Kit. Down. *growls* -Nightbreeze
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hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
crying
*growls and leaps shoving Nightbreeze's feet from under her* ~Quickfeather

*watches and whimpers* ~Cloverkit

*wails* Answer me! ~Sharpclaw
hơn một năm qua Edwin3 said…
smirk
*smiles and gives a short shake of her head* ~Scarletstar

*runs past* Scarletstar! ~Strongclaw

*tosses the kit to him* ~Scarletstar
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*slashes at Quickfeather and bites she shoulder, my eyes still locked on Cloverkit* -Nightbreeze

*shovers Eagletalon off and runs over* Sharpclaw please stop! -Crystaldapple
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hơn một năm qua ferretandsilt said…
angry
*battles Sootspots still* ~Molefur

*starts to grow tired* ~Sootspots

*doesn't give up* ~Molefur
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*runs after Strongclaw* -Thornclaw

*jumps in front of him and bowls him over* -Moonstripe

*claws at her* -Thornclaw
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
*soars through the air before landing safely in Strongclaw's grasp* ~Cloverkit

*wriggles free and leaps at Ravenbeak* ~Quickfeather

*jumps through the air and knocks Quickfeather down using her superior skills to fight him* ~Briarcloud
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
crying
*stiffens at Crystaldapple's voice* ~Sharpclaw
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
sad
*sees Parchpaw weak and defenceless facing a big strong warrior and runs over* Stop this is wrong! ~Brightberry of LavaClan
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
*dashes after Strongclaw* -Diamondpaw

Please! *glaces at my father then back* Please don't do this....-Crystaldapple
hơn một năm qua ferretandsilt said…
angry
*looks up facing Brightberry* What do you want? ~Burnface of CoralClan

*starts to run away* ~Sootspots

*stands over his daughter* ~Molefur
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*runs after Strongclaw again* Their not going to take my family! -Nightbreeze

*rolls with Blackrose* -Suntooth

*bites his shoulder and claws his face* -Blackrose
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hơn một năm qua Edwin3 said…
smirk
*runs faster then tosses Cloverkit to Speedflight* ~Strongclaw
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*leaps at Strongclaw and lands on his back, biting his shoulder and clawing his sides* -Diamondpaw

*runs for Speedflight, determined to get Cloverkit* -Nightbreeze
hơn một năm qua TalaLeisu2 said…
crying
your family?! *screeches* You hardly noticed that she existed! ~Smokefog

*runs after ready to bowl him over* ~Ashfleck

*looks at him* Leave her alone! She's sick can't you tell?! ~Brightberry

*turns his face toward her* I...I can't let this go Crystaldapple. ~Sharpclaw
hơn một năm qua Guillaume19 said…
surprise
*races faster than they had predicted and hands cloverkit off to olivecoat* -speedflight

*still racing skids to a stop* -gorgestone
hơn một năm qua TeiLeisu said…
blush
*holding Cloverkit smiles at Gorgestone and lashes her tail* ~Olivecoat
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
crying
*sobs* Please...I can't lose him again...I can't...*pause* Kill me instead...-Crystaldapple
hơn một năm qua TeamPeeta649 said…
angry
*growls and runs for Olivercoat* Your all a bunch of freaks! -Nightbreeze
hơn một năm qua Moonstorm100 said…
smirk
The fact that, u claim the other leaders r here wen there not Scarletstar makes u uncappable of winnin this battle, u've pretty much already lost this battle the moment u stepped n2 camp! If ur only one clan u cant claim u win wen StormClan stronger then 3 clans! So if ur gonna cheat then so can I!

*jumps on Scarletstars back n slices her throat killin all her nine lives cause the wounds so intense* ~Stormstar

Im not followin ur dumb rules if ur not even doin it urself!