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 Shadow & Rouge; Night and ngày Difference.
Shadow & Rouge; Night and Day Difference.
“… There might have been a time when bạn actually thought about others, but now it’s just become, ‘Get the villain out of the way and be proclaimed as a hero once more!’ I just don’t want bạn to become something that bạn don’t want to be.”Lil the Cat from “The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.”

Do bạn remember the first time bạn ever drew your người hâm mộ character? When bạn created him/her, bạn had thought everything out; who they dated, what they wore, and if they had any powers. Believe me when I say that người hâm mộ characters are the best characters in the world. Their stories are also the most fascinating things on earth.

Believe it hoặc not, Lil was actually a re-drawing of Rouge the Bat when I invented her. This was way, way long cách đây when Sonic Adventure 2: Battle was just out and before Blaze hoặc Silver. I was tracing the big-busted gal with wings, when I decided that I wanted a cat. It turned out…well…looking back, I’d say crappy. But, it was the beginning of a character I wanted to have for a lifetime.

Now,when you’re nghề viết văn a người hâm mộ fiction, there are a few things bạn NEED to know.
A. Fan Fictions CAN NOT get published for the world to read in print. Due to copyrights, your người hâm mộ fictions will never get turned into books. bạn can, however, go to different người hâm mộ sites where there is normally an option to post stuff on các diễn đàn hoặc articles.
B. Correct Grammar and Tenses are everything. bạn might have the best story in the world, but if your readers can’t understand it, then that’s useless. (See Step Four: Tenses.)
C. Research, research, research![u] Write what bạn know. If bạn make someone -like Shadow, for instance- do something that they wouldn’t normally do, bạn end up making your những người hâm mộ MAD! I learned this lesion the hard way when I was a writer for Fanfiction.net.

Time for the 5 Steps:
Step One: Characters and Settings.
bạn need to know the basics first about writing. When creating characters, make sure they have a purpose and not just so they can make out with Shadow. XP! người hâm mộ girls will have their moments, but gf/bf’s of original characters are just plain annoying!
I like người hâm mộ fics that have characters that don't take control over the original characters' places. For example: in this one story I had to review, Sonic was stupid and so his "Girlfriend" had to stop Eggman. XP!
Fan characters should ALWAYS support the original characters, but also have their own roles to help inprove the story. Like say, Lil. She's one of the main character, but she doesn't take the place of Sonic. Right now, she's setting him up for a bigger adventure.

[u]Settings.

When bạn have your characters, settings should reflect the Sonic games hoặc Sonic X. DO NOT just make up worlds for the heck of it hoặc bad things happen, like negetive reviews! *hisses*
The most common settings are: Station Square, Mystic Ruins, không gian Colony ARK, Sand Deserts, Eggman's Headquarters and alternate dimensions. Each one is a place from a game and have millions of locations to choose from.
Time Periods create a fuller story. But, they too have limitations. Sally hasn't been around since Sonic's "Genesis Period." Here are the time periods. Remember, each time period grows hoặc disappears with each new Sonic Game.
1. "Genesis Period." This is when Sonic was first introduced. If bạn notice, mentioning names from this time period is very RARE! They don't fit with the rest of the periods. This is a classic time, when the Freedom Fighters existed. BE WARNED! Origin stories explaining Sonic's family is overdone.
2. "Experimenting Period." This branches only 2 years, when Sonic was being shifted over to 3-D from the 2-D world. bạn need to look for resources to find out which games were made during this time.
3. "Adventure Period." Ah! This is the most được ưa chuộng time period. Takes place during both Sonic Adventures and Sonic X. This is the classical period when Shadow was introduced.
4. "New Generation Period." This is the time when Sonic Riders, Sonic the Hedgehog 2006, and the other games were being made. New technology was being tested. Chaos Emeralds are no longer that needed.
5. "Beyond Period." Every game including Sonic Unleashed will be added to this period. It's time-defying, new graphics and dramas, everything goes period. Don't underestimate anything!
6. "Prequel Period." This is the time that Shadow still lived on ARK with Maria. This is the time Knuckles lived in the Ancient Times with Tikal. Only a few stories exist from this time.
7. "Future Period." I perfer this period over the rest. No one knows what the future will bring. The sky is the limit. Very rare người hâm mộ fictions from this time actually see the light.

Step Two: Plot.
One of the most dangerous and hard steps is to figure out how to write your plot. First, does anyone know what plot is? According to flanaganhighschool.com, plot is, "the sequence of events that take place in the story." In other words, the events have to flow to resolve the problem. If the story doesn't have a plot, than it's worthless.
Your plot needs:
1. A big, huge problem hoặc conflict found at the beginning of the story. Sometimes, the problem grows over the course of the story. Often times in người hâm mộ fictions, the problem is Eggman himself. Add some other element to make your characters concerned other than, "He's the Bad Guy!"
2. A huge event hoặc various small problems caused bởi the problem. This takes care of most of your troubles. Like in Sonic Adventure DX, Sonic had to find all the Chaos Emeralds but still had to battle Chaos 0,2,3,4,6, and Perfect Chaos.
3. A Climax, which is the highest point hoặc turning point of the story. The climax is the final battle, the most emotional part of the story. The climax of SA2B was fighting the FinalHazard, just in case bạn want to want to know.
4. Falling action, where the conflict becomes destroyed hoặc beaten. Yeah, they need to be beaten to make a good story. Like, Sonic saving the ngày would be nice.
5. Resolution, where the conflict is resolved. The resolution of a story may have either happy hoặc sad outcomes. hoặc if bạn want to have a series, don't have a complete outcome.

Step Three: Plan Your Story.
Outlines can be very helpful in this area. They help plan your story. Here is the outline for ngôi sao Wars Episode 4:

Beginning:
1. Death ngôi sao Attacks Leia's ship.
2. Darh Vader Kidnaps Leia; Droids Escape
Tantooine
3. Luke buys droids from Jawas.
4. R2D2 runs away to find Obi-Wan Kenobi
5. Luke finds Obi-Wan and goes to help.
Lalalaa.
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End.
10. Obi-Wan & Darth Vader fight, Obi-Wan dies
11. Giải cứu thế giới return home, prepare for battle
12. Luke blows up Death ngôi sao and saves day.

As bạn can see, I got impatient. Now, bạn have an idea of a plotline.
Here is an outline for bạn to use. Write "keywords" to fill out basic information.

Beginning
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Middle
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End
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Step Four: Tenses
bạn NEED CLEAR TENSES!!!!! "Tense" is the narration and flowing of story. bạn have three tenses. bạn have past, present, and future. The tense is the how the verbs respond.
1. Past. This is where "ed" and "d" and others were usd. Verbs like, "swam," "saw," "said," "sang," "cried," "whispered," and "yelled." Just as long as it described the verbs.
2. Present. The present tense includes the past and future tenses. "S" and "es" and "ing" desribes the verb; what the verb is currently doing[i].
3. Future includes the present. Most of the time, it [i]will
tell bạn what will happen, but is harder to read. Plain verbs will be used.

The tiếp theo part of this step is choosing the narrative voice.
1. "First-Person." Wikipedia says that, "First-person narrative is a narrative mode in which a story is narrated bởi only one character at a time, who explicitly refers to him- hoặc herself using words and phrases involving "I" (referred to as the first-person singular) and/or "we" (the first-person plural). This allows the reader hoặc audience to see the point of view (including opinions, thoughts, and feelings) only of the narrator, and no other characters." Example: I saw the lake farther up the road. It's too far, I thought. I couldn't tell what Bobby was thinking at the time. We ran until the storm caught up with us.
2. 3rd-Person. The third person is the narrative voice which is outside the action. The narrator allows the readers to view the story like they're god. The narrater knows ALL the characters thoughts and actions. For example: Marcia cried loudly. "Why won't they stop shooting?" Marcus thought.
3. 2nd-person. This is the narrative voice used for "Choose Your Own Adventure" Books. The pronoun you is used. Example from Wikipedia: You are not the kind of guy who would be at a place like this at this time of the morning. But here bạn are, and bạn cannot say that the terrain is entirely unfamiliar, although the details are fuzzy. See what I mean? YOU should not use this tense unless YOU know how to control the others correctly.

Finally, we have
Part Five: Off We Go
No one, not even I, can tell bạn a step-by-step instruction on how to write a story. It takes guts. NEVER STOP WRITING! Only those worthy of creating stories will continue on. I can give bạn advice, since I am in the process of finishing a novel seperate from "The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul."

1.If bạn hit a writer's block, open a new document hoặc grab a fresh piece of paper and begin nghề viết văn whatever comes to your mind first. bạn CANNOT BACKSPACE hoặc FIX SPELLING ERRORS!!!! bạn need to just write. This is the only way to defeat those blank moments when nothing comes.

2. Never let anyone discourage you. If bạn find that bạn NEED to stop because your story isn't flowing write, stop. But don't let anyone say that your stuff is junk. It's not. Not unless bạn say it is.

3. "The only way bạn yourself is if bạn never dream." That's a quote I use a lot. (Look out for it in the upcoming parts "The Misadventures of a Wandering Soul.") It's true, though. I still have a lot thêm creativity than some of my friends. Whenever I find a new idea popping in my head, I jot it down before I forget. That's what bạn should do.

That concludes our little lesson. I hope bạn enjoyed it. "May the Force be With You...Always..."
 "AMY! NOOOO!"
"AMY! NOOOO!"
It was a nice and peaceful morning... if bạn count 11 a.m morning. There was nothing that could ruin it... except for what played on the radio alarm clock.
"Baby bạn light up my worl-"
"OH GOSH! Please no!" đã đưa ý kiến a light purple hedgehog as she scrambled off her hàng đầu, đầu trang bunk to turn off the radio. She sighed after shutting it off, grabbed her Bible, sat on the floor and began praying, which she did every morning.
15 phút later, she went downstairs to have breakfast.
"Hey mom. I'm going to be meeting up with Emile at the Triple S at around 12. Just thought I'd let bạn know." đã đưa ý kiến the young hedgehog....
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Conene Arulekki
Bloody Hell. Siren is late, again. Not like I'm surprised, I don't really care about the physco either. I didn't even know if it was a boy hoặc a girl.
bởi now, my phone was vibrating. It was Siren texting me. How fun.
Siren; ello lovve
Conene; bạn bloody idiot, get your đít, mông, ass over here.
Siren; I tình yêu you, too~ ♥

..... What the in the seven Hells is wrong with it.
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It was nine bởi the time Siren showed up, I was asleep bởi then. Now, why in the Hell would I give him my key? Who the Hell knows, I might have been drunk that night. Now I regret it. Oh wait, I'm in my room. I tend to always lock it when I'm sleepy. Score

Siren Orizano
I miss that little asshole, Conene~♥ I unlocked his door and shut it behind me. He wasn't anywhere down stairs. Aw man, he's upstairs. That, I don't have a key for. Ahah, Little asshole, I'll find bạn some day~ ♥
Ok Storm,the uh heroine(?) of this story has entered the forest of. Strangeness(not real name just called that),let's see who she meets XD

(I'll message if a oc of your is used)

I walk through the woods hát ngọn lửa, chữa cháy bởi 2NE1 thinking about choclate cake when I see a person playing the bag pipes.Even to me,storm,that is strange so i walk over even though I have no idea if the person is dangerous hoặc not"hello strange person with bagpipes!"

"well hello"says then blows the bag pipes,stomps their feet to the beat of poker face bởi lady gaga on the pipes.

"uh why bạn here!?"I say cause now I think of...
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posted by Scorch-Werehog
Name: Scorch the Werehog
Gender: Male
Powers: Strong, and fire
Likes: Hunting, fighting, video games
Dislikes: chó sói, sói vein plant, demons, too many thêm to list...
Appearance: Red with trái cam, màu da cam fur, black claws (nails), sharp teeth, and has brown eyes. His (My) shoes are green, purple, and blue.
Short Bio: When Scorch was born, he was actually born a hedgehog. But a evil echidna didn't like that Scorch even existed. So, he put a curse on Scorch that made him a werehog ngày and night. Scorch's parents weren't too thrilled about that but tried to raise him as a normal kid. (you can see how I turned out)
In what just seems like seconds: Slick makes it to his position; bởi the tường of the vault, outside of the security's lines. "*through the walkie-talkie, secretly unsecured bởi Yogi so the enemy could not listen in on their conversations, stats that he is in position* Ready"
At the same time as Slick, Dash reaches his destination. He should've gotton there sooner but he had to evade some security. But soon he made it to the walls of the secondary vault; just in case they di chuyển it to this vault. "Made it"
"Get out here and die like a man!" the General yelled in direction to Rioul.
"this is bad. Way...
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Why the fuck does everyone find it necessary to copy Mephiles? bạn unoriginal bastards, there are plenty thêm ways to be able to hiển thị your tình yêu for those people, bạn know. Unless bạn chose me as one of those people, then bạn should write twenty-four.

I'm not going to name people, but I could see, like six of these các bài viết on the club, and it is annoying. So, Instead of doing one of people I love, I shall do one on people I hate. Enjoy.

1. Appreciate bạn are number one. Gary-stu spammer.

2. ur rely opistvie

3.(I'm sorry, but your tên người dùng sounds like something I would call a homosexual who enjoys...
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ONE giờ LATER... Chris ran away, trying to find his house, forgetting that he didn't have one. He stopped, then realized that he didn't have a house. He had to think quick. He started to dig a hole with his hands. Luckily, the ground was soft so he got pretty far bởi about two minutes. He crawled down the hole and rolled up in a ball. MEANWHILE, AT A CRAZY GREEN HEDGEHOG WITH MAGENTA STRIPES AND A MAGENTA áo khoác PLOTTING THE DESTRUCTION OF MOBIUS... A green hedgehog was watching TV. "What?!" He shouted. "What happened?" A red cáo, fox with four tails said. On the screen, they showed all of the zones,...
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Prolouge
Many years ago,far away in không gian where darkness awakens and waits for destruction. In a distant planet, where darkness rises, lives a ruler, whos plan of ruling the whole galaxy, but then thats when his planet which was called planet X was about to get detsroyed bởi the Sonic and his friends.The Sonic team had found out out if this palnet bởi an alien who managed to escape the destruction f his palnet and told everyone what the ruler of palnet X has done. So the Sonic team decided to get rid of the invaders, so Tails builds a brand new battle ship and they knew they needed alot of power...
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{warning it get really boring and stupid around here most persons stop đọc at chapter 6}
PLZ READ CHAPTER 1-19 BEFORE đọc This

i awoke in a pitch black room. the walls and floor of the room seemed to made of clouds. dark stormy looking clouds "so u have awakened Princess Wednesday Jaxee Shocker III the Hedgehog" đã đưa ý kiến a voice from the far end of the room. the mysterious person knew my name my FULL name! then the mysterious person emerged from the darkness. it was a cloaked figure with yellow eyes that u could see from under the áo choàng and i could tell it was a female. "i am the fate of...
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?????? HERP DERP
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~"Time: 11:10. Status: Waiting for 11:11. Name:-" Zim was cut off bởi Tak. "Shut up. bạn sound like Dib. I didn't like Dib. bạn didn't like Dib."Tak said. "OHMIGODITS1:11!" GIR shouted. I wish for... WORLD DOMINATION!!!!" Zim đã đưa ý kiến in his head. He waited... and waited... nothing. 11:12... nothing. "NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!" Zim shouted and fell to his knees. "Dramatic much?" Tak said. "Ugh. I'm gonna watch this movie." Zim said. "A Nightmare in ngọc lục bảo đồi núi, hill Zone? Scary. I'll watch with you." Tak said....
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posted by Yosuki-Hiroshi
Allignment:Opponent to Ally
Power:Ice,Snow,Wind and Hail
Weapons Used:Bows and Arrows,Claw,Sword,Rapier,Blade,Mace,Ankh,Piece,Naginata and Scythe.
Battle Difficulty:Extremely Very Hard.
Battle Describes:Tricky,Fast,Strength,Powerful and Very,Very hard to trap and/or to defeat.
Power get on Nữ hoàng băng giá Hydro(Ice,Snow and Hail.) and Cold North(Wind).
Utilities:Condense,Frost,Cold Snap.
Pet:Ice Dragon,Hail Dragon and Snow Dragon.
Pet Description:Tricky,Fast,Powerful,Very hard to kill,large,hard,sharp.
Boreas Attack:Snow Coat,Avalances,ColdCombat,Tornado,IceScissor.Iceberg Shower,Ice Missle,Snow Punch,Hailstorm,Blizzard,Glacier,Tundra,Hail Slash,Cold Swing,IcebergMeteor.Create Snow Monsters.Gel Surf.Comet Ball.Comet Ball Duo.Infinity Comet,Super Counter Attack(Counters Range and Melee atacks)Death Sythe.
Tell me if bạn see MS qualities in this new character.
Name-Festus Pyre
Age-28
Birth date-796 6CE*(1996)
*aging increased due to interdimensional travel*
Birthplace- San Fransisco, California
Eyes- brown
Hair- red
FATAL FLAWS-
is considered an outcast. Has ADHD and can rarely focus, and has shattered personalities due to a car crash when he was young.
Talents-
none of relevance to society. Can smith metal, but is mediocre at best.
Friends-
his only friend died in the car crash aforementioned.
Enemies-
most of the school. Most notable are the snooty twins "Maryland and Danithan Suella" the two have supposedly nothing wrong with their life.
Family- adoptive parent Robyn Nera. Did I mention the car crash? It was bad.
Other Notes- has created a fantaisie world called "Nimea", often wishes it was true. Has suspicions, but cannot prove it. Robyn is very lazy and forces him to do everything for her. His old family was abusive too.

DID taco MAKE GARY SUE?
TELL MEEEE!
Damayz,Sitting at his ngôi vua, ngai vàng like he was a king,Requested EVEZ to come in his ngôi vua, ngai vàng room,Where Xiz and Dezray sat beside him.

"EVEZ,I request that bạn go attack a city,And bring me thêm souls,I thirst for them." He đã đưa ý kiến to EVEZ.

"But sir,I'm just a lonely Demon,I can't just ATTACK a city BLINDLEY without any help." EVEZ Responded.

"That's Why I'm bringing an Army of Demons to help you,Fool,Now go,And bring me thêm souls." He said.

EVEZ nodded and ran off.

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"Dang,I can't Believe that Caboose is gone." Typhoon sighed.

"Well,At least he's in android...
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It was winter.

I was walking through thick, clear white snow. It was chilly, of course. I knew about Kalla Potter.

She was a nice girl. Never talked back. Made peoples' hearts skip a beat. She always brightened up their days like bướm and rainbows filling the clear blue sky.

But of course--Then came the death of Kalla. People felt...lost. Depressed. Not their true self without her.

All thanks to Zak. That sniveling little director. Sending out all his assassins on missions that don't even make any sense.

Kalla's death was a complete joke. When I heard the news, I thought it was a joke. But...
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Ifuen leaned over the table, keeping himself up bởi propping his arms on the table. He stared at the holoscreen, formulating a secret plan in his head. Now usually, he wasn’t this quiet; whenever he had some life-threatening, daring plan of action, he would usually require a little help to think it up, but now he couldn’t trust anyone. He wanted to trust his best friend Jace, who had been at his side since they were little. He wanted to trust Anya, who he had always loved from the bottom of his heart. But letting someone in on the plan would be dangerous; not to him, but to everyone else....
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The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 17 (Part 1)


Kyle walked back outside, releasing a sigh as he closed the backdoor behind himself; he was hoping that Damien really would go easy on Ruby and I2. Trenton and Mancer both noticed the sigh that Kyle released before they decided to walk over and ask the hedgehog what was wrong.

“Is something the matter?” Mancer asked the yellow hedgehog as he walked up and stopped beside him; Kyle shook his head at what Mancer had said. “Then why the sigh? Also, who was at the door?”

“The sigh was just from a thought, and someone I met before came to see Ruby and...
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added by sara_tarek
added by CosmoLuvsTails
added by MephilesTheDark
Source: Me.
xin chào peeps! This is Mephisto N here, with a super-special-awesome guidline as to how to make a decent, likeable Sonic fancharacter!

Let's start off simply with the prime examples of a Mary-Sue in the Sonic fandom. This is what bạn DON'T want.

-Is paired with a canon character. Especially not Shadow.

BIG NO-NO. Very few people can get away with this, especially with Shadow. This is usually a 'I luff Shadow he give me 3 babies!!' cry.

-Is related to an official character.

SONIC DOESN'T NEED 300 LONG-LOST SIBLINGS.

-Is faster than Sonic.

It is made a dear point that Sonic is the fastest Hedgehog around...
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