Star:(wakes up) um.... Where am I? (starts to walk around)
Shock:WOW this mexicin thực phẩm is great!
Star:Um hi my name is Star.
Shock:(turns around and sees her all wet) omg what to bạn happen?!
Star:I.. I don't know?(eyes get watery)
Shock:don't cry! Please don't cry!
Star:Why?
Shock:ok let's just go and find some one who knows bạn ok!
Star:ok.
One super shadow minit later!
Shock:do bạn know some one who lives here?
Star:um no I live with my brother Jason.
Shock:ok where dose he live?
Star:On Angel Island!
Shock:-_-'
Well I'm going to stop there see ya later!
Shock:WOW this mexicin thực phẩm is great!
Star:Um hi my name is Star.
Shock:(turns around and sees her all wet) omg what to bạn happen?!
Star:I.. I don't know?(eyes get watery)
Shock:don't cry! Please don't cry!
Star:Why?
Shock:ok let's just go and find some one who knows bạn ok!
Star:ok.
One super shadow minit later!
Shock:do bạn know some one who lives here?
Star:um no I live with my brother Jason.
Shock:ok where dose he live?
Star:On Angel Island!
Shock:-_-'
Well I'm going to stop there see ya later!
The Story
It's all very nice, Shock's gonna save teh world, even a little subplot with the whole 'JUDAS MALICE' thing.
Problem is, I've seen it before....
The Problem
NUMBAH ONE.
Shock is kinda a weird form of the Messiah.
All liek, 'WEWT, IMMA REDEEM THE WURLD =D'
Maybe thêm closely being related to Aang (it's AYNG, ban bạn M. Night Shamalan. bạn SCREWED UP THE SERIES AND I WILL FOREVER HATE YOU.)
Aang has been reborn countless times and stoof, and has epic powas to save teh world from the ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Lord.
And the whole, 'WHY, MALICE?! WHYYYY?!!!'
Ish overused -3-
Wouldn't the NAME Malice tip bạn off, Shock?
[b]THANKS FOW READIN, THETACOMAN[/i]
It's all very nice, Shock's gonna save teh world, even a little subplot with the whole 'JUDAS MALICE' thing.
Problem is, I've seen it before....
The Problem
NUMBAH ONE.
Shock is kinda a weird form of the Messiah.
All liek, 'WEWT, IMMA REDEEM THE WURLD =D'
Maybe thêm closely being related to Aang (it's AYNG, ban bạn M. Night Shamalan. bạn SCREWED UP THE SERIES AND I WILL FOREVER HATE YOU.)
Aang has been reborn countless times and stoof, and has epic powas to save teh world from the ngọn lửa, chữa cháy Lord.
And the whole, 'WHY, MALICE?! WHYYYY?!!!'
Ish overused -3-
Wouldn't the NAME Malice tip bạn off, Shock?
[b]THANKS FOW READIN, THETACOMAN[/i]