Alright im nghề viết văn a song. How does this sound??(:

Im ready Im ready
for the end to happen
Im tired im tired
of everything and every lie
bạn made a promise
that bạn were gonna get
better now I understand that bạn just don't want to
Your like wanna of those
stuck up chicks that never wants to quit
the hitting
the names
boy your drivin me insane
i'm tired of this
i've got a black eye the size of your fist
were done
were through
the only problem is I don't know
how to get over you
bạn used to bring out the best
but no not now
Your always diễn xuất like a clown
bạn đã đưa ý kiến bạn loved me
boy what happened please tell me
cuz
the hittin
the names
boy your drivin me insane
im tired of this i've got a black eye the size of your fist
were done
were through the only problem is i dont know how to get over you.
bạn hurt me because bạn enjoy the pain I scream
and bạn watch me cry
I want out of this
please baby
im tired of this i've got a black eye the size of your fist
im done were through
the only problem i'll ever have is I don't know how to get over you.